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Relentless Validation
The mundane
Every day
Never for us
We do it because you can't be always flying
Beneath the mundane
The dark chamber
We go there to escape
We're not like others
Our agenda is laser guided
There there's no pretending
Just us
Taking each other apart
Finding justice
No flags
Candles and binding
Relentless
Validation
Every day
Never for us
We do it because you can't be always flying
Beneath the mundane
The dark chamber
We go there to escape
We're not like others
Our agenda is laser guided
There there's no pretending
Just us
Taking each other apart
Finding justice
No flags
Candles and binding
Relentless
Validation
Author's Note
Gouache Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Relentless Validation
29th Aug 2022 2:19am
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29th Aug 2022 3:37am
Re. Relentless Validation
29th Aug 2022 2:26am
No pretending sounds good to me. Can only do that in the dark.
Validate me...
❤️k
Validate me...
❤️k
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Re: Re. Relentless Validation
29th Aug 2022 3:37am
Re. Relentless Validation
29th Aug 2022 2:50am
Hey PS
Love the read. Escaping the mundane everyday stuff - to something
beneath the skin - that you don't see - but you can feel it. A relentless calling.
I so get it. Huge part of that for me is writing amongst other things:) LOL
That blue is so vivid - almost blinding. Love it!!
Love the read. Escaping the mundane everyday stuff - to something
beneath the skin - that you don't see - but you can feel it. A relentless calling.
I so get it. Huge part of that for me is writing amongst other things:) LOL
That blue is so vivid - almost blinding. Love it!!
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Re: Re. Relentless Validation
29th Aug 2022 3:40am
Hey Amiga
Try to shake it up with every write
Glad you dig the blinding art.
Blinded by the light hot 🔥 sauce .....
Thx A
Try to shake it up with every write
Glad you dig the blinding art.
Blinded by the light hot 🔥 sauce .....
Thx A
Re. Relentless Validation
29th Aug 2022 6:50am
Dear PS,
I admit I read this in a different way. The validation part for me was recognition. Being seen and heard from a point of view for glory, celebrity. For me, that was the breakthrough from the mundane. Just being looked at and set apart for a minute. I like this poem for the different ways you can interpret and construct it.
I love the painting just because…
H🌷
I admit I read this in a different way. The validation part for me was recognition. Being seen and heard from a point of view for glory, celebrity. For me, that was the breakthrough from the mundane. Just being looked at and set apart for a minute. I like this poem for the different ways you can interpret and construct it.
I love the painting just because…
H🌷
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Re: Re. Relentless Validation
29th Aug 2022 12:39pm
Dear H,
Yes. This is a break away from the pack write. Escaping from the norms. Not being satisfied with standard fare. The painting is layers upon layers of structure and intricate thoughts...
Appreciate the validation on both H !
Thanks
🤠
Yes. This is a break away from the pack write. Escaping from the norms. Not being satisfied with standard fare. The painting is layers upon layers of structure and intricate thoughts...
Appreciate the validation on both H !
Thanks
🤠
Re. Relentless Validation
30th Aug 2022 2:10am
Mundane is so boring, definitely not for us.
Why can't I always be flying damnit?
You can have wings in hell... horns too.
That's where the dark chamber resides.
This agenda is going to be hard work.
Definitely no pretending with me.
Taking each other apart is always fun.
Candles with a scent, and binding tight.
I know you need relentless validation.
So I will pretend to too. For consistency...
Why can't I always be flying damnit?
You can have wings in hell... horns too.
That's where the dark chamber resides.
This agenda is going to be hard work.
Definitely no pretending with me.
Taking each other apart is always fun.
Candles with a scent, and binding tight.
I know you need relentless validation.
So I will pretend to too. For consistency...
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Re: Re. Relentless Validation
30th Aug 2022 2:14am
No pretending please
If it doesn't fly, we'll make it better
I'm capable of secondary thought
Try me ..
If it doesn't fly, we'll make it better
I'm capable of secondary thought
Try me ..
Re. Relentless Validation
31st Aug 2022 3:34am
You missed your calling. You could sell your poems displayed on your paintings in New York City, and be rich. I have no doubt whatsoever.
You have a unique gift, PS. We are the most fortunate audience to see it for free.
You have a unique gift, PS. We are the most fortunate audience to see it for free.
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Re. Relentless Validation
31st Aug 2022 3:39am
Believe it or not I've thought about that concept.
NYC better stay tuned !
I like giving it away, appreciation us real
Thx so much for the comment and RL
Kicking it
NYC better stay tuned !
I like giving it away, appreciation us real
Thx so much for the comment and RL
Kicking it
Re. Relentless Validation
31st Aug 2022 4:48pm
I always enjoy your paintings but I think this is my favorite. I've always liked blue with a the hint of yellow (when I used to draw back in my high school days), and how for some reason the yellow seemed to jump out of the page. You inspire other folks brother, through words and visuals.
BIG LIKE.
BIG LIKE.
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Re. Relentless Validation
31st Aug 2022 5:00pm
That’s music to my ears Wally.
The art and words seemed t fit well on this one.
Your support inspires me. I will soldier on with more.
Thank you Wally 👍🤠
The art and words seemed t fit well on this one.
Your support inspires me. I will soldier on with more.
Thank you Wally 👍🤠
Re. Relentless Validation
31st Aug 2022 5:07pm
and just like the painting there are many layers here
some won't see them and aren't ready to may never be ready
they are there for us and it is beautiful...
I love this dearest Poet💗
some won't see them and aren't ready to may never be ready
they are there for us and it is beautiful...
I love this dearest Poet💗
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Re: Re. Relentless Validation
31st Aug 2022 5:23pm
This poem didn't get much traction originally.
I thought more would be into the message.
But suddenly it's gaining speed.
I'm glad you see it and understand the layers.
If anyone would, it would be you.
Thank you for the validation...
Xx
🖤
I thought more would be into the message.
But suddenly it's gaining speed.
I'm glad you see it and understand the layers.
If anyone would, it would be you.
Thank you for the validation...
Xx
🖤
Re: Re. Relentless Validation
31st Aug 2022 5:31pm
your poem inspired me brought to fruition what was going through my thoughts thank you💗
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Re. Relentless Validation
31st Aug 2022 5:38pm
It's that kind of day Brenda
I'm dealing with chaotic needs today
Pain will be the only solution
I will be the Master and servant
I'm capable that way ....
🖤💯💥
I'm dealing with chaotic needs today
Pain will be the only solution
I will be the Master and servant
I'm capable that way ....
🖤💯💥
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31st Aug 2022 5:53pm
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31st Aug 2022 6:20pm