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It Was Only Gravity
She faded into the night
and became one with the loneliness.
She caught a cloud that dropped her off
near a star she used to gaze upon.
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and became one with the loneliness.
She caught a cloud that dropped her off
near a star she used to gaze upon.
🌟
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Re. It Was Only Gravity
23rd Aug 2022 4:54pm
Re. It Was Only Gravity
That's sweet prose ah darkness there u ah penned! Both sentences are very eye catching.🤜🤛👍👁️🧅🍹🌈🌷💋👅🍑🤎🤍🍺🎶💎🛳️🥃🥦🥦🥬
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Re: Re. It Was Only Gravity
23rd Aug 2022 5:18pm
Thank you 😁 2 sentences are kinda my thing lol.
Why drag it on when it can end there?
Why drag it on when it can end there?
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24th Aug 2022 1:10am
Re. It Was Only Gravity
23rd Aug 2022 8:36pm
{love the title, nik}
Can't really beat your impactful brevity within those killer two sentences, either.
You do in two what others take stanzas to ALMOST achieve... lol..
I am glad I caught this today, you're always a highlight.
🌹💙
Can't really beat your impactful brevity within those killer two sentences, either.
You do in two what others take stanzas to ALMOST achieve... lol..
I am glad I caught this today, you're always a highlight.
🌹💙
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23rd Aug 2022 9:25pm
Re. It Was Only Gravity
24th Aug 2022 00:32am
There are so many clouds outside right now.
Love the idea of catching a ride to my favorite star.
Put a great visual in my head:)
Love the idea of catching a ride to my favorite star.
Put a great visual in my head:)
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Re: Re. It Was Only Gravity
24th Aug 2022 4:31pm
Re. It Was Only Gravity
Dear N,
Pure beauty. You’re gift of brevity is awesome and inspirational. I use your writes as models for mine. You might notice they’re nothing alike. That’s because I never use ten words when twenty will do😉
Beautiful, fantastical poem. H🌷
PS gorgeous pic!
Pure beauty. You’re gift of brevity is awesome and inspirational. I use your writes as models for mine. You might notice they’re nothing alike. That’s because I never use ten words when twenty will do😉
Beautiful, fantastical poem. H🌷
PS gorgeous pic!
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24th Aug 2022 4:34pm
I grew up in a place where you had to be quick and witty or else no listened to you.
Thank you.
Thank you.
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