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The there's... there.
There's softness
life giving warmth
of heated smooth curves
where desire flickers and sparks
There's wit
intertwined with gold
and silver tongued laughs
beguiling intrigue in mischievous claps
There's worldliness
knowledge begets rapture
enlightened strikes of wisdom
piqued arousal doth capture
There's strength
rare seeds of palpable brawn
that carry her through
from dusk until light breaking dawn
There's confidence
belief oozing from each sacred space
fortified with gumption
epitomizing a wealthy sensual grace
There's independence
forging an elegant path
sufficient in self trust
wanting not needing that wrath
There's compassion
building up, seeking connections
cultivating empathic minds
makes for real and loving affections
There's sexuality
basking in all truths
unafraid to discover
from blossom to roots
To sample to taste
traversing the journey
exploring these facets
so many are worthy
She's much and many
a force all her own
intricate and complex
she grows there ... until grown.
Author's Note
A spark of a musing led me to thoughts of how there's always more than just one side to people. .....
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Re. The there's... there.
19th Aug 2022 10:26pm
The many sides and facets of people not always what we're expecting
Some good some not so good
Great write gorgeous
Love and light
Ron x
Some good some not so good
Great write gorgeous
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. The there's... there.
You're absolutely correct!
To be pigeonholed as mostly one thing and one thing only and to possibly accept that as fact... well that just doesn't sit right with me. I think it's healthy and invigorating to think of others, women especially, as multifaceted and deeply qualified in many areas.
....
Glad you enjoyed ;)
Much love and appreciation for the kind and heartfelt sentiments
I adored the pleasurable visit, Ron
🌹-💙-⚔️
x
To be pigeonholed as mostly one thing and one thing only and to possibly accept that as fact... well that just doesn't sit right with me. I think it's healthy and invigorating to think of others, women especially, as multifaceted and deeply qualified in many areas.
....
Glad you enjoyed ;)
Much love and appreciation for the kind and heartfelt sentiments
I adored the pleasurable visit, Ron
🌹-💙-⚔️
x
Re. The there's... there.
19th Aug 2022 10:47pm
Such is the complexity of human nature. Like these Russian dolls........
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Re: Re. The there's... there.
20th Aug 2022 00:08am
Yes, I'm absolutely hoping people see layers of worth and understand that not everything is surface nor about one thing only....
I love the Russian doll imagery.
Thanks for the visit, Robert
It's much appreciated
🌹 💙
I love the Russian doll imagery.
Thanks for the visit, Robert
It's much appreciated
🌹 💙
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
19th Aug 2022 10:53pm
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Re: Re. The there's... there.
Well, from your mouth to God's ears (as the saying goes)... ;)
Wow... I'm stunned —thank you from the bottom of my heart, for those extraordinarily kind words, Tim.
Searching out the good in folks and realizing that there's much more to people, especially women, is truly worth it, imo.
It's sometimes disheartening to see the same sort of caricature-esque experiences/examples. I love me a strong beautiful, fiercely proud woman... and maybe it's just me....but I felt the need to kind of advocate...
Glad you enjoyed, my lovely friend 🙏
(Thanks again for the motivational encouragement)
🌹💙
x
Wow... I'm stunned —thank you from the bottom of my heart, for those extraordinarily kind words, Tim.
Searching out the good in folks and realizing that there's much more to people, especially women, is truly worth it, imo.
It's sometimes disheartening to see the same sort of caricature-esque experiences/examples. I love me a strong beautiful, fiercely proud woman... and maybe it's just me....but I felt the need to kind of advocate...
Glad you enjoyed, my lovely friend 🙏
(Thanks again for the motivational encouragement)
🌹💙
x
Re. The there's... there.
19th Aug 2022 11:01pm
Never send a girl to do a woman's job.
My wounds are too deep.
My heart is too raw.
My mind is too ready.
My body is a sunset wrapped around a comet on its way across the darkest night's sky.
My wounds are too deep.
My heart is too raw.
My mind is too ready.
My body is a sunset wrapped around a comet on its way across the darkest night's sky.
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I agree, 🐢
Unfortunately, in my universe girls are in much higher demand than women.
Even deep wounds have amazing healing capabilities ... with the right balm.
Knowing you're limits and desires... or taking chances before healed to 100% is such a tantalizing lure... especially when there's enough fire to warm even the coldest of hearts...
Readiness... in waiting...
The beautiful ache of your colorful ash streaking across the night sky becomes it's own beacon... beckoning.... those that burn in kind...
Missed your presence.... your words.... thoughts
Thank you for taking time to leave some words here...
🌹
Unfortunately, in my universe girls are in much higher demand than women.
Even deep wounds have amazing healing capabilities ... with the right balm.
Knowing you're limits and desires... or taking chances before healed to 100% is such a tantalizing lure... especially when there's enough fire to warm even the coldest of hearts...
Readiness... in waiting...
The beautiful ache of your colorful ash streaking across the night sky becomes it's own beacon... beckoning.... those that burn in kind...
Missed your presence.... your words.... thoughts
Thank you for taking time to leave some words here...
🌹
Re: Re. The there's... there.
20th Aug 2022 3:44am
Always....
This week I hired a crew of guys to come work on my house, yard, and porch.
I am amazed....and completely wiped out....it was a wonderfully fulfilling time....next week off to Houston for a flood of doctor's visits to see if the last 3 years of treatments and tests have brought the needed results....wish me good luck.
Thank you for posting and commenting....very healing.
No mere girl could do that.
This week I hired a crew of guys to come work on my house, yard, and porch.
I am amazed....and completely wiped out....it was a wonderfully fulfilling time....next week off to Houston for a flood of doctor's visits to see if the last 3 years of treatments and tests have brought the needed results....wish me good luck.
Thank you for posting and commenting....very healing.
No mere girl could do that.
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Sounds like your body, mind, soul and surroundings are all being worked on and healed at the same time, in a manner of speaking.
Fulfillment.... nicely chosen word....good for you.
That's a smile maker word, for me.
Of course, .... I save only the best of luck for running turtles... ✨🍀✨
*All woman and proudly so ....yet, perhaps still a tinge naive, but that's hardly something I'd ever admit t..... oh wait.... ;)
Safe travels, RT
Much love, luck and healing hopes
💋
B
Fulfillment.... nicely chosen word....good for you.
That's a smile maker word, for me.
Of course, .... I save only the best of luck for running turtles... ✨🍀✨
*All woman and proudly so ....yet, perhaps still a tinge naive, but that's hardly something I'd ever admit t..... oh wait.... ;)
Safe travels, RT
Much love, luck and healing hopes
💋
B
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20th Aug 2022 10:43am
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I kiss like menace, moonlight and honey....and when taken to the very edge of oblivion— desperate, deep and fearless...
Can you taste me? Smell my skin? Or almost feel the dexterity of my mouth and tongue free you from this plane of existence into a lush escape of knowing only my mouth on yours!?!...Craving more, needing more; until you're uncertain if you've ever really been kissed properly before.... or ever?!? 😏
Wrong?! Nay, my dear turtle.... it's all so so right.
💋
Can you taste me? Smell my skin? Or almost feel the dexterity of my mouth and tongue free you from this plane of existence into a lush escape of knowing only my mouth on yours!?!...Craving more, needing more; until you're uncertain if you've ever really been kissed properly before.... or ever?!? 😏
Wrong?! Nay, my dear turtle.... it's all so so right.
💋
Re. The there's... there.
19th Aug 2022 11:03pm
She is a beautiful work in progress but will not be complete ever growing until her last page is written. The wonders of woman such as yourself.
~NE~
~NE~
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20th Aug 2022 7:40am
I freely admit I'm sorta smitten with your wonderful feedback, Keith .... Yes, it's not only constant growth and change, it's the realization that there are layers upon layers, adding substance and true dimension, that I hope is valued and... seen
I'm so glad you enjoyed and felt what I had hoped to be able to rightly emanate.
Your visits, thoughtful insights and kindness, mean a lot to me; I'm thrilled you make the time you do.
Much love and deep appreciation,
🌹 💙
-Susan
I'm so glad you enjoyed and felt what I had hoped to be able to rightly emanate.
Your visits, thoughtful insights and kindness, mean a lot to me; I'm thrilled you make the time you do.
Much love and deep appreciation,
🌹 💙
-Susan
Re. The there's... there.
Time to reinvent myself. I've been stuck on the wrong side like forever! 🙄😂
Nicely done my friend 🌼
Nicely done my friend 🌼
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Re: Re. The there's... there.
Dear, AJ
hahaha...
You charmer, you!
I totally adore your current version and hope if you do reinvent yourself, you keep or at least incorporate your lovely romantic poet side.... you know, the one that pens love, desire and the most achingly exquisite romanticism, on site!?!..Yeah, definitely a side that's a keeper! 😉
I'm so glad you came to see me and enjoyed yourself, here.
(thank you muchly! )
Always such a pleasure ✨
🌹B
hahaha...
You charmer, you!
I totally adore your current version and hope if you do reinvent yourself, you keep or at least incorporate your lovely romantic poet side.... you know, the one that pens love, desire and the most achingly exquisite romanticism, on site!?!..Yeah, definitely a side that's a keeper! 😉
I'm so glad you came to see me and enjoyed yourself, here.
(thank you muchly! )
Always such a pleasure ✨
🌹B
Re: Re. The there's... there.
20th Aug 2022 12:36pm
I'll try to remain a hopeless romantic 😉 although I'm currently trying to light a fire under my long dormant artistic side (see Deep Underground Gallery group)...🌼
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Wow.... and little did I know that I'm speaking with a powerhouse poet AND painter.... Holy cow, AJ!! .... Your paintings are as beautiful as your poetry! It's pretty cool that you're enormously talented in both art mediums. I mean, head and shoulders above...
I'll certainly be keeping an eye on that gallery group, for sure.
I am loving the lady standing in front of the window in the red blanket! Be sure to keep us updated with your progress ....
👇🏻 to keep the motivational fires burning!
🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥
🌹💙
B
I'll certainly be keeping an eye on that gallery group, for sure.
I am loving the lady standing in front of the window in the red blanket! Be sure to keep us updated with your progress ....
👇🏻 to keep the motivational fires burning!
🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥
🌹💙
B
Re. The there's... there.
19th Aug 2022 11:45pm
Thank u for this touch out to the reader, as if, this is thy favorite kid to give wisdom to. This is outstanding as well Bluevelvet. Awesome remarkable read! 👁️💋🌷👅🍑🤎🤍💎🎶🍜🥬🧅🥦🌽🌈🤜🤛👍
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Re: Re. The there's... there.
19th Aug 2022 11:57pm
BIRCHEL!!
I was worried about you... I'm unbelievably delighted to see you on my page and that you're aok!! I'm so glad you enjoyed reading but I'm more relieved to see your sunny and wonderful presence... You do bring the best most unique visits!!
’゚・✲゚。.(✿╹◡╹)ノ☆.。₀:*゚✲゚*:₀。
Stay safe and don't be a stranger, my friend! Here's an audio poem you might have missed... if interested! 👇🏻
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/458485-a-secret-glance-of-fathoms/
I was worried about you... I'm unbelievably delighted to see you on my page and that you're aok!! I'm so glad you enjoyed reading but I'm more relieved to see your sunny and wonderful presence... You do bring the best most unique visits!!
’゚・✲゚。.(✿╹◡╹)ノ☆.。₀:*゚✲゚*:₀。
Stay safe and don't be a stranger, my friend! Here's an audio poem you might have missed... if interested! 👇🏻
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/458485-a-secret-glance-of-fathoms/
Re. The there's... there.
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Aug 2022 00:51am
20th Aug 2022 00:50am
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Re: Re. The there's... there.
Dearest, S
Well, I love each and every letter of each word you've left me here!
You seeing me... I mean truly SEEING me and the various facets and sides that amalgamate a whole, means the effing world to me, my darling.
We often only see the surface stuff, skating over the real 'crust of a motherfucker'.... as Chris Rock would put it....(check out bigger and blacker)
*insert YouTube clip here* Lmfao!! 😝
In my opinion, I think it takes amazing to know amazing, so even with our less frequented communications, I feel you and I'm so humbled and full of nothing but love, warmth and gratitude that you're out there... in my corner and absolutely 100% vice versa.
Love love ꒒ ০ ⌵ ୧ ♡
s/s
🌹💙
B
(◍•ᴗ•◍)♡ ✧*
Well, I love each and every letter of each word you've left me here!
You seeing me... I mean truly SEEING me and the various facets and sides that amalgamate a whole, means the effing world to me, my darling.
We often only see the surface stuff, skating over the real 'crust of a motherfucker'.... as Chris Rock would put it....(check out bigger and blacker)
*insert YouTube clip here* Lmfao!! 😝
In my opinion, I think it takes amazing to know amazing, so even with our less frequented communications, I feel you and I'm so humbled and full of nothing but love, warmth and gratitude that you're out there... in my corner and absolutely 100% vice versa.
Love love ꒒ ০ ⌵ ୧ ♡
s/s
🌹💙
B
(◍•ᴗ•◍)♡ ✧*
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20th Aug 2022 5:02pm
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20th Aug 2022 6:31pm
Re. The there's... there.
20th Aug 2022 1:03am
We need to let out our passion together. Hot picture. Me and you need to take a hot picture together, LOL.
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Re: Re. The there's... there.
20th Aug 2022 8:21am
You're so devilish, Francisco!! Once again you get that A+ for effort!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.
I appreciate you taking the time visit.
🌹 - B
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.
I appreciate you taking the time visit.
🌹 - B
Re: Re. The there's... there.
21st Aug 2022 00:50am
Re: Re. The there's... there.
You're so naughty.... hahaha....Thanks for the kind words and smile. Be good!
;)
;)
Re: Re. The there's... there.
21st Aug 2022 5:29pm
Re: Re. The there's... there.
22nd Aug 2022 5:57pm
haha... sometimes being good is bad.... ;)
You're always good for a true smile, Francisco
Thanks again.
🌹
You're always good for a true smile, Francisco
Thanks again.
🌹
Re. The there's... there.
20th Aug 2022 1:54am
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Oh, how I LOVE that, MS!
A raging wildfire of sheer delights that border a place of breathlessness!... Hey, a lady can hope and dream!
*wink
My heart is full and my smile is from ear to ear, seeing you on my page. I feel honored and pretty special that you found some worth here with me
I greatly appreciate the lovely visit because I honestly find myself looking forward to seeing you, so it's a rare joy, when I happen to find you on my page!
*A reminder that you're always welcomed here.
Much love and poetry,
🌹
💙
B
A raging wildfire of sheer delights that border a place of breathlessness!... Hey, a lady can hope and dream!
*wink
My heart is full and my smile is from ear to ear, seeing you on my page. I feel honored and pretty special that you found some worth here with me
I greatly appreciate the lovely visit because I honestly find myself looking forward to seeing you, so it's a rare joy, when I happen to find you on my page!
*A reminder that you're always welcomed here.
Much love and poetry,
🌹
💙
B
Re. The there's... there.
20th Aug 2022 2:51am
good evening beautiful Blue
so tender and lovingly enticing and erotic
you are like an open pool at just the right temp.
inviting and soothing hitting all the sore spots...
beautiful ❤️
so tender and lovingly enticing and erotic
you are like an open pool at just the right temp.
inviting and soothing hitting all the sore spots...
beautiful ❤️
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20th Aug 2022 1:09pm
Good morning, dear lady ✨ :)
I am am full of deep adoration and absolutely loving the warmth from the waters and I hope I was able to soothe the aches and pains away.... at least for a spell...
You're a beautiful heart, Bren and it's my terrific pleasure to see you on my page today.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me, what lovely ones they were.
Much love and poetry,
🌹
💙
B
I am am full of deep adoration and absolutely loving the warmth from the waters and I hope I was able to soothe the aches and pains away.... at least for a spell...
You're a beautiful heart, Bren and it's my terrific pleasure to see you on my page today.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me, what lovely ones they were.
Much love and poetry,
🌹
💙
B
Re. The there's... there.
20th Aug 2022 3:25am
This felt like the spark of womanly strength that is sustained through the years and keeps her going in hard times. The diversity of feminine traits you put into a brilliant melody of poetry makes for heady reading and even more powerful passion. Each stanza is like a river of emotion and intellect that traces its way through the landscape of womanhood. I loved bathing in your words tonight. They took me to a place that as a man I too can drink from.
XoXo
John
XoXo
John
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Come and sit while we sip together... listening to the nightscape, we capture each other's imaginations from across the aether....feeling the powerful pulsing melody and the passionate lure where understanding and appreciation coexist amongst the embered sparks that each word jolts... with wicked abandon...
I do hope your thirst was momentarily stated ;)
Much love and many thanks, my dear
🌹 💙
-Susan
I do hope your thirst was momentarily stated ;)
Much love and many thanks, my dear
🌹 💙
-Susan
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Aug 2024 3:45am
20th Aug 2022 10:35am
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Re: Re. The there's... there.
Hey, T
I definitely try to push myself, when it comes to form and content, that's true! Now, how successful I am, well, that's another topic all together... ;)
I am very happy you found something within this piece to appreciate, thanks so much for that. It's great to have you visit... I like hearing your thoughts.
My intentions were to do the same earlier in the day yesterday, for you but you had no poems available to read! I know you'll sometimes remove them or hide them, so I just wanted to say that I greatly enjoyed that poem again (for a certain poetess) I remember it well and it's truly gorgeous, like a piece of art, itself.
Just thought you'd like to know.
Thank you, again.
Much gratitude and appreciation,
🌹 - B
I definitely try to push myself, when it comes to form and content, that's true! Now, how successful I am, well, that's another topic all together... ;)
I am very happy you found something within this piece to appreciate, thanks so much for that. It's great to have you visit... I like hearing your thoughts.
My intentions were to do the same earlier in the day yesterday, for you but you had no poems available to read! I know you'll sometimes remove them or hide them, so I just wanted to say that I greatly enjoyed that poem again (for a certain poetess) I remember it well and it's truly gorgeous, like a piece of art, itself.
Just thought you'd like to know.
Thank you, again.
Much gratitude and appreciation,
🌹 - B
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Aug 2024 3:45am
20th Aug 2022 11:22am
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Re: Re. The there's... there.
I appreciate your pov, it's a wonderful morale boost.....and you're very welcome for the comments.
-B
-B
Re. The there's... there.
20th Aug 2022 1:09pm
Wow! This is rich with meaning and brought tears to my eyes. I've so easily seen others as only holding a few layers when they're really complex and more beautiful that we can comprehend. "There's" so much more "there."
This is a classic that will hold up to the test of time.
This is a classic that will hold up to the test of time.
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20th Aug 2022 1:24pm
Awww... Dearest, LV
You've moved me.... To read and longingly bask in your thoughtfulness this morning, feels like a hug when you least expect it but end up falling deeply into, because you needed it more than you EVER could have imagined....
My respect for your kind feedback is woven into my genuine expressions of gratitude and love - 🙏
Thank you for seeing me.... like you do.
It's always a pleasure to have you visit, you're always welcome here...
Much love, dear poet
🌹 💙
B
You've moved me.... To read and longingly bask in your thoughtfulness this morning, feels like a hug when you least expect it but end up falling deeply into, because you needed it more than you EVER could have imagined....
My respect for your kind feedback is woven into my genuine expressions of gratitude and love - 🙏
Thank you for seeing me.... like you do.
It's always a pleasure to have you visit, you're always welcome here...
Much love, dear poet
🌹 💙
B
Re. The there's... there.
20th Aug 2022 3:00pm
Dear BV,
How incredibly thoughtful and humbling you’d write a poem all about ME ME ME … wait …. This is all about YOU?
Darn!
Well it’s gorgeous. I really enjoyed the evolution of it. The development of the female psyche is paramount as we slug through and hopefully enjoy some of this world. Ever a changing and learning process I think this poem follows that growth. A beautiful ode to WOMEN everywhere. Standing O my dearest. H🌷
How incredibly thoughtful and humbling you’d write a poem all about ME ME ME … wait …. This is all about YOU?
Darn!
Well it’s gorgeous. I really enjoyed the evolution of it. The development of the female psyche is paramount as we slug through and hopefully enjoy some of this world. Ever a changing and learning process I think this poem follows that growth. A beautiful ode to WOMEN everywhere. Standing O my dearest. H🌷
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21st Aug 2022 6:47am
Hee hee hee..
I mean.... You're a total goddess with the complete package, I'd be a fool not to write about you!! 😏
hahaha.... (totally true btw)
I deeply appreciate and 💯 adore your comments, Honoria. It's hard enough, as is out there. I thought that maybe a little bit of reminder that we humans, especially woman, are multi-faceted and multidimensional beings with aspirations, complex emotions and such a cornucopia of varying thoughts... as well as all the usual that's 'a given'..
It's really amazing that you feel the love and reverence....
I'm stoked with the standing ovation how very cool cool!!!
Much love and boundless gratitude
🌹💙
B
I mean.... You're a total goddess with the complete package, I'd be a fool not to write about you!! 😏
hahaha.... (totally true btw)
I deeply appreciate and 💯 adore your comments, Honoria. It's hard enough, as is out there. I thought that maybe a little bit of reminder that we humans, especially woman, are multi-faceted and multidimensional beings with aspirations, complex emotions and such a cornucopia of varying thoughts... as well as all the usual that's 'a given'..
It's really amazing that you feel the love and reverence....
I'm stoked with the standing ovation how very cool cool!!!
Much love and boundless gratitude
🌹💙
B
Re. The there's... there.
20th Aug 2022 3:40pm
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Re. The there's... there.
20th Aug 2022 4:06pm
Hoi hoi
In one of your answers, you use the word ‘fearless’…..
That’s what this poem is, essentially.
And what you are probably.
Everyday I am amazed at how much quality is shared here.
A great piece of work! That’s what I think.
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
In one of your answers, you use the word ‘fearless’…..
That’s what this poem is, essentially.
And what you are probably.
Everyday I am amazed at how much quality is shared here.
A great piece of work! That’s what I think.
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
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Hoi hoi, Gus!! ;)
I've been missing your lovely essence, it's wonderful to see you 🦋
You're choice of 'fearless' feels very smartly chosen and deeply appreciated. I'm so happy you felt that this poem (and I) emanate that feeling. I couldn't be more proud and pleased.
I too, am often supremely delighted by the sheer wealth of talent I stumble across on DUP, as well. It's what keeps me reading and continually learning, having those great talents available!
I adore your thoughtfulness and hope to see you and your work soon, so I can return a visit!!
Much love, my friend
🌹
💙
B
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I've been missing your lovely essence, it's wonderful to see you 🦋
You're choice of 'fearless' feels very smartly chosen and deeply appreciated. I'm so happy you felt that this poem (and I) emanate that feeling. I couldn't be more proud and pleased.
I too, am often supremely delighted by the sheer wealth of talent I stumble across on DUP, as well. It's what keeps me reading and continually learning, having those great talents available!
I adore your thoughtfulness and hope to see you and your work soon, so I can return a visit!!
Much love, my friend
🌹
💙
B
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21st Aug 2022 5:19pm
Hoi hoi
I’m sorry to have to contradict you.
You certainly show a nice upbringing and a very very kind heart, but the sentence:
Everyday I am amazed at how much quality is shared here.
Must be read:
Everyday I am amazed at how much quality is shared HERE.
As in: the poems YOU share with us under your name and avatar or photo or howsit called around here.
I wrote about Ginger and blushing, because Morrissen wrote:
Shyness is nice
But
Shyness can stop you
From doing all the things in life
You want to.
I know flattery will get me nowhere, but I hope you can take the compliment when it’s really meant. And it is…..
Keep them coming, please. I’ll embrace (if that were possible) each one of them.
Kind regards, Gus
I’m sorry to have to contradict you.
You certainly show a nice upbringing and a very very kind heart, but the sentence:
Everyday I am amazed at how much quality is shared here.
Must be read:
Everyday I am amazed at how much quality is shared HERE.
As in: the poems YOU share with us under your name and avatar or photo or howsit called around here.
I wrote about Ginger and blushing, because Morrissen wrote:
Shyness is nice
But
Shyness can stop you
From doing all the things in life
You want to.
I know flattery will get me nowhere, but I hope you can take the compliment when it’s really meant. And it is…..
Keep them coming, please. I’ll embrace (if that were possible) each one of them.
Kind regards, Gus
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I think I'm beet red blushing and totally bowled over (surprised) .... Wow!, Gus...It never occurred to me that you were talking about me, specifically!
Since I'm almost at a loss for words, let me say that I am incredibly grateful and I fully but humbly accept your truly lovely compliment with grace and joy.
You've managed to not only brighten my evening but restore a bit of confidence and hope; hence the power of kindness and words, themselves.
I send my love and much gratitude across our vast distance and hold that extra special embrace from you... close to my heart.
again, thank you.
♡-Susan
Since I'm almost at a loss for words, let me say that I am incredibly grateful and I fully but humbly accept your truly lovely compliment with grace and joy.
You've managed to not only brighten my evening but restore a bit of confidence and hope; hence the power of kindness and words, themselves.
I send my love and much gratitude across our vast distance and hold that extra special embrace from you... close to my heart.
again, thank you.
♡-Susan
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Anonymous
23rd Aug 2022 2:22am
We are so much …more. Sensuality may be embedded in our beings but we are so much more than our arrangement of genitals. We are not a treasure to be plundered ( though in the right bonded situations it can be permissible) but one to be prized and loved.
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23rd Aug 2022 2:44am
Yesss. Absolutely. 💯 💯 💯
Louder for those in the back!!! 🔊
I am in complete agreement and totally and ardently in love with this comment. It's about being aware, cognizant and to hopefully perpetuate a multifaceted, multidimensional diverse landscape....BEING what it is that I hope others realize is the norm not the exception.
Your lovely astute and thoughtful insights are so wonderfully cherished.
I am deeply thankful you shared them with me.
🌹💙
B
Louder for those in the back!!! 🔊
I am in complete agreement and totally and ardently in love with this comment. It's about being aware, cognizant and to hopefully perpetuate a multifaceted, multidimensional diverse landscape....BEING what it is that I hope others realize is the norm not the exception.
Your lovely astute and thoughtful insights are so wonderfully cherished.
I am deeply thankful you shared them with me.
🌹💙
B
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You're amazing, Os
.... thank you....
{your comment is likewise on being perfect, btw }
Deepest appreciation.
-🖤
.... thank you....
{your comment is likewise on being perfect, btw }
Deepest appreciation.
-🖤
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24th Aug 2022 3:27am
Physical can be achieved outside of ones body. A skill many cannot master.
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24th Aug 2022 5:25am
Hey there, CS :)
There's definitely more to anyone than just the physical aspect.... Out of body experiences and something similar, involving something like tantra, meditation, yoga, mindfulness, etc... are definitely awesome tools to hone and better those multiple facets and varied intricate layers that are all part of an exquisite whole.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, I look forward to seeing you, always.
🌹💙
B
There's definitely more to anyone than just the physical aspect.... Out of body experiences and something similar, involving something like tantra, meditation, yoga, mindfulness, etc... are definitely awesome tools to hone and better those multiple facets and varied intricate layers that are all part of an exquisite whole.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, I look forward to seeing you, always.
🌹💙
B
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24th Aug 2022 3:59am
Ohhh. -The layered complexities of the woman eloquent expressed
In divine composition. I so enjoyed the journey of your words,
In divine composition. I so enjoyed the journey of your words,
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I'm thrilled that you traveled along with me for the journey, lovely lady.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and kind words. I'm so grateful that you felt some wonderfully expressed womanly vibes, here... that's all I could hope for... it truly means a lot to me.
Hope to see you again, you're always welcome.
Much love and warm wishes ✨
🌹💙
B
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and kind words. I'm so grateful that you felt some wonderfully expressed womanly vibes, here... that's all I could hope for... it truly means a lot to me.
Hope to see you again, you're always welcome.
Much love and warm wishes ✨
🌹💙
B
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24th Aug 2022 2:19pm
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24th Aug 2022 2:23pm
In our own individual ways.... I like to think we all have beauty in multiple places..... might be wishing thinking but sometimes that's ok... at least within reason... ;p
Thanks for the lovely visit and for taking a bit of time to share with me today, I greatly appreciate it
Much love,
🌹 💙
B
Thanks for the lovely visit and for taking a bit of time to share with me today, I greatly appreciate it
Much love,
🌹 💙
B
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29th Aug 2022 8:12pm
There's a bag of skittles
All on the floor
Cheese us that was amazing and full of passion. I like when you spill these rhyming verses, each line delivering an intense emotion with a great rhythm and flow.
Bravo.
All on the floor
Cheese us that was amazing and full of passion. I like when you spill these rhyming verses, each line delivering an intense emotion with a great rhythm and flow.
Bravo.
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30th Aug 2022 7:19am
I can't help but love it when I make you drop things.... especially the skittles! and the whole bag!?!? Whaaaat!!😲
hahaha...you crack me up! Thanks, Walter. I needed that
Well, I am officially blow away. I am not a natural rhymer and it's always been a struggle, so your comments make me puff my chest a little bit in pride because I fought hard to find a rhyming groove that didn't sound forced and ridiculous. Now it's not so much of a struggle although I know it's not necessarily my forte!
A big ol' thanks, my friend
Glad you enjoyed like you did.... I I guess I owe you a new bag of Skittles!! 🌈... lol
Much love and appreciation,
🌹 💙
hahaha...you crack me up! Thanks, Walter. I needed that
Well, I am officially blow away. I am not a natural rhymer and it's always been a struggle, so your comments make me puff my chest a little bit in pride because I fought hard to find a rhyming groove that didn't sound forced and ridiculous. Now it's not so much of a struggle although I know it's not necessarily my forte!
A big ol' thanks, my friend
Glad you enjoyed like you did.... I I guess I owe you a new bag of Skittles!! 🌈... lol
Much love and appreciation,
🌹 💙
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6th Sep 2022 4:17pm
The poem embodies you well.
A fitting write for you and your sisterhood. Be strong my Blue, along with the other traits you discuss.
🔨🌹🌞💖💪👩
A fitting write for you and your sisterhood. Be strong my Blue, along with the other traits you discuss.
🔨🌹🌞💖💪👩
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6th Sep 2022 4:35pm
Hey there, Leo ;)
It's lovely to see you 🦋
Thanks for that reminder, I very much appreciate it.
I am glad that you felt this embodied me and hopefully and more importantly that 'sisterhood' because it was a more broad generalization and written with a hope that people, especially women aren't immediately pigeonholed and kind of branded; seen as being only one thing. A reminder that everyone is multifaceted and multi-dimensional with varying positives about them.
Maybe it was also a way to reaffirm my own strong feelings, too... I see that, sure. ;)
Anyway, you seem to understand and again, thanks. You're a bright beautiful soul that I very much enjoy having visit me.
Thank you, my dear
🌹 💙
xo
It's lovely to see you 🦋
Thanks for that reminder, I very much appreciate it.
I am glad that you felt this embodied me and hopefully and more importantly that 'sisterhood' because it was a more broad generalization and written with a hope that people, especially women aren't immediately pigeonholed and kind of branded; seen as being only one thing. A reminder that everyone is multifaceted and multi-dimensional with varying positives about them.
Maybe it was also a way to reaffirm my own strong feelings, too... I see that, sure. ;)
Anyway, you seem to understand and again, thanks. You're a bright beautiful soul that I very much enjoy having visit me.
Thank you, my dear
🌹 💙
xo
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Hoi hoi
While coming around again for a re-read, it dawned on me that the English speaking people have a strange idea of using the word there.
While travelling, I can see the logic in We’re almost there, to signal that you haven’t reached your destination.
But to say: I’m there, to indicate you’re in front of my door seems strange to me.
Every language has its quirky sides, but this ‘there’ thing strikes me as funny.
Don’t really know why I tell you all this. Maybe just because it’s funny.
Anyway. I was here again to read your poem.
Kind regards, Gus
While coming around again for a re-read, it dawned on me that the English speaking people have a strange idea of using the word there.
While travelling, I can see the logic in We’re almost there, to signal that you haven’t reached your destination.
But to say: I’m there, to indicate you’re in front of my door seems strange to me.
Every language has its quirky sides, but this ‘there’ thing strikes me as funny.
Don’t really know why I tell you all this. Maybe just because it’s funny.
Anyway. I was here again to read your poem.
Kind regards, Gus
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15th Sep 2022 3:42pm
Hoi hoi
and there you are!! ;p
Thanks for being here, Gus.... I simple adore the additional visits and can't thank you enough for wanting to return and for letting me know when you do. Please, always feel free!!
I can understand you questioning that quirkiness that 'there' gives you! I can only imagine learning to be fluent in another language. I understand bits and pieces of Spanish and French and that seems difficult! ... I think it says so much that you used the correct spelling for the meaning, considering a lot of native English speakers get that confused all the time ... I mean =There, they're and their....I see where they're used incorrectly almost daily...lol.
So, already you're ahead of the game!
Lovely chatting -
Drop by anytime...
🌹 💙 💙
-B
and there you are!! ;p
Thanks for being here, Gus.... I simple adore the additional visits and can't thank you enough for wanting to return and for letting me know when you do. Please, always feel free!!
I can understand you questioning that quirkiness that 'there' gives you! I can only imagine learning to be fluent in another language. I understand bits and pieces of Spanish and French and that seems difficult! ... I think it says so much that you used the correct spelling for the meaning, considering a lot of native English speakers get that confused all the time ... I mean =There, they're and their....I see where they're used incorrectly almost daily...lol.
So, already you're ahead of the game!
Lovely chatting -
Drop by anytime...
🌹 💙 💙
-B