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The rest is all nonsense
Elevator, cabin, button press, confinement, cube.
Temptation, power, excitement in sparks..
Key, locks, click sound, impatience of lips.
Twilight in the mirrors, a kiss so violent.
Explosion, shrapnel in my mind, communion of bodies.
Lust, passion, frenzy, thirst, carnality...
Compressed mouth, member in the lips and chaos.
The two of us on the floor, the rest is all nonsense.
Temptation, power, excitement in sparks..
Key, locks, click sound, impatience of lips.
Twilight in the mirrors, a kiss so violent.
Explosion, shrapnel in my mind, communion of bodies.
Lust, passion, frenzy, thirst, carnality...
Compressed mouth, member in the lips and chaos.
The two of us on the floor, the rest is all nonsense.
Author's Note
Love can be confusing but one things for sure...
that need to express it with bodies instead of words.
that need to express it with bodies instead of words.
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Re. The rest is all nonsense
4th Aug 2022 10:02pm
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4th Aug 2022 10:29pm
So true, isn't that true of everything. So often people say I am this way or that and 'advertise' those things all the time but the actions don't match. In love it is so important to show things through actions in order to really feel it and that should come naturally. That lust, desire, admiration, and appreciation manifest in the most beautiful ways. Kissing, touching, feeling, taking someone inside... I love your actions... They always spread love and light..
Re. The rest is all nonsense
4th Aug 2022 10:17pm
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4th Aug 2022 10:34pm
Straight to the point there MS. Well I am always horny so yeah it has to happen, that's for damn sure. lol And that can start with the little things... Like thinking wow, there is nothing to do in this elevator but... yeah, you know what I am talking about. :p And even if there was something else to do all you want to do is... umm. perform for the camera I guess. You know what I am talking about. Anyway, you see how my thought process works. lol ;)
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4th Aug 2022 10:45pm
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4th Aug 2022 10:27pm
Love is like film; it exposes the truth in love and the body's reaction.
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4th Aug 2022 10:44pm
Well that is the best film isn't it. One that exposes a truth of love, passion, lust, and desire. The bodies reaction always wants to write that script. One that exposes all of those feelings and sensations that make life worth living. I prefer a good horror movie over a Romance one. lol But still in life I love the romance too, I get plenty of horror already. The body's reaction tells us so much that chemistry is something you feel immediately with the simplest gesture. It ignites so much passion and desire.
Re. The rest is all nonsense
4th Aug 2022 11:06pm
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5th Aug 2022 00:33am
Well ABS, you express things in words perfectly to me. So if that's the phase you are in then it is working very well. And give me your words any time. Thank you so much for being here, visiting me, and sharing your thoughts. It means a lot to me. Keep sharing your beautiful words... I know others love them too.
Re. The rest is all nonsense
4th Aug 2022 11:28pm
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5th Aug 2022 00:35am
Oh yes! been known to hit the red Stop button. lol Problem with elevator rides is they are always to fast. I always thought it would be cool for someone to be inside (yeah not talking about the elevator here) in the elevator on one of the huge skyscrapers. The ones where the elevator drops like a rock and you literally feel yourself coming off the floor, or goes up so fast gravity wants to pull you down. Either case, well * nevermind, innocent look * Thanks so much stepping into the elevator with me.
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5th Aug 2022 2:36am
I'll always step in the elevator with you my hot beautiful smart strong sexy woman.
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Re. The rest is all nonsense
4th Aug 2022 11:37pm
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5th Aug 2022 00:36am
Haha, there is so much other stuff but yes this is certainly some of that other stuff. God, how innocence makes me horny. lol And experience too. :p Well shit, I guess everything really but yeah there is so much other stuff. Go read 'Little gym rat' to start. But there is so much more. I can tell you want to push it out of me... how you do that is other stuff too. I see you know that flowers get you there even faster. You are going to be a quick learner I can tell. I like teaching. :p
Re. The rest is all nonsense
4th Aug 2022 11:43pm
and for poets, words as well...well written...to the point...I love to the point....:)
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5th Aug 2022 1:03am
So many words, I am surprised my chaotic mind can assemble them into something BC. :p I like to the point also and have been told I am too direct, and no filter, for America sometimes. I fit in more with some more direct cultures I think. But anyway I love to the point too. I am so happy you found it well written and thank you so much for stopping by to read and share your thoughts with me. I really appreciate it.
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5th Aug 2022 1:44am
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5th Aug 2022 1:03am
I was just looking to do something fun after some really heavy posts so I hope it accomplished that. Spreading some love and good feelings around. I love that you found it imaginative and enjoyable to consume and digest. If I am going to feed someone I definitely want them to enjoy it. ;) I know if they feed me I will. :p Because I love to... * nevermind * Thanks so much for coming by to visit me and sharing your thoughts. I always want that. :p
Re. The rest is all nonsense
5th Aug 2022 00:31am
Kristina,
This is a put together so brilliant. I really truly luv it as well. The passion there of seems like the two have a wanting ah need for each other that can't be ran away from any form of the luv of their minds.
This is a put together so brilliant. I really truly luv it as well. The passion there of seems like the two have a wanting ah need for each other that can't be ran away from any form of the luv of their minds.
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5th Aug 2022 1:04am
Brilliant, damn right Birchel - you and me have a wavelength we are both on. So if you didn't luv it I would be sad, I might have to turn the dial a little to get things back in sync. You know how that need goes, you cannot run from that - you just run towards it and it must be satisfied at any cost. In the elevator, on the floor, in the park, the cemetery, well it's a long list... you know what I am talking about. ;)
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5th Aug 2022 4:20am
Hell yeah Kristina! Because when it's there and u need it, it's there and u need it.
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Re. The rest is all nonsense
5th Aug 2022 1:38am
Most elevators don't have a floor 13
That's the one we have to find
Floor 13 becomes Chamber 13
You know what goes on there
The KristinaX room
Strap in darling
BIG LIKE
That's the one we have to find
Floor 13 becomes Chamber 13
You know what goes on there
The KristinaX room
Strap in darling
BIG LIKE
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5th Aug 2022 3:01am
They have one they just call it 14.
Yes, floor 13 is the best. I love 13.
An entire floor now, that's an upgrade. Big Like.
I know exactly what goes on...
You try to break me, but I break you instead.
That's why I have my own room.
Who's strapping who this time?
Yeah, you said BIG LIKE every time. I remember everything.
Well the stuff that matters...
The rest is all just non-sense.
Yes, floor 13 is the best. I love 13.
An entire floor now, that's an upgrade. Big Like.
I know exactly what goes on...
You try to break me, but I break you instead.
That's why I have my own room.
Who's strapping who this time?
Yeah, you said BIG LIKE every time. I remember everything.
Well the stuff that matters...
The rest is all just non-sense.
Re. The rest is all nonsense
5th Aug 2022 1:49am
... I prefer the roof. Lol.
But in lieu of such higher exaltation, tight spaces work too!
13 has always been my favorite number... So thirteenth floor it is. Lol
But in lieu of such higher exaltation, tight spaces work too!
13 has always been my favorite number... So thirteenth floor it is. Lol
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5th Aug 2022 3:03am
Oh yes! I love the roof...
The elevator is too fast. Mostly for priming lips and... other parts. ;)
For the roof or somewhere else. Somewhere we shouldn't be.
Yeah, it's always fun pushing into those tight spaces. Isn't it?
Love 13... I want to own a haunted castle too.
Give all the ghosts and monsters a thrill.
I want a proper one like Hunedoara castle with a dungeon and mote.
Oh yeah! a dungeon...
And Neuschwanstein castle too. Okay, I want more than one castle.
And all the other good stuff.
The elevator is too fast. Mostly for priming lips and... other parts. ;)
For the roof or somewhere else. Somewhere we shouldn't be.
Yeah, it's always fun pushing into those tight spaces. Isn't it?
Love 13... I want to own a haunted castle too.
Give all the ghosts and monsters a thrill.
I want a proper one like Hunedoara castle with a dungeon and mote.
Oh yeah! a dungeon...
And Neuschwanstein castle too. Okay, I want more than one castle.
And all the other good stuff.
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5th Aug 2022 3:18am
God I would love to own a castle. I wouldn't care how old or such. Just to take in the history in the air within it. I've visited several over the years, and all were awesome to me.
Maybe I will work towards that being a goal. Be an old guy in an old castle. Lol.
Maybe I will work towards that being a goal. Be an old guy in an old castle. Lol.
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5th Aug 2022 1:45pm
Castles are badass! I visited quite a few while living in the UK growing up and like you said each one was awesome and unique. And the history and things they have seen is incredible. Yet they still stand... Not like the rubbish that is built today - disposable everything. That sounds like a great goal. And have all those serving wenches and stuff too. lol
Re. The rest is all nonsense
5th Aug 2022 2:43am
I can't get the song Love in a Elevator from Aerosmith out of my mind now. LOL
They were my first concert!!!!
Okay now to the poem.
Love the combination of words you used in this.
These speak volumes!!
Button Press and Power.
When someone can press your buttons
and know what they are doing- you are right. The rest is just nonsense:)
They were my first concert!!!!
Okay now to the poem.
Love the combination of words you used in this.
These speak volumes!!
Button Press and Power.
When someone can press your buttons
and know what they are doing- you are right. The rest is just nonsense:)
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5th Aug 2022 3:16am
Haha... Okay I need to listen to that now.
Great first concert girl. I bet you did all kinds of bad stuff too.
You always understand me and that's saying something, Adelphina... :p
All those volumes can be confusing for sure.
But...
Absolutely, you totally get it.
Pressing those buttons really gets you off.
(The elevator...)
And drives you crazy.
Losing your mind.
Making you lose the plot.
And the rest is all non-sense.
Great first concert girl. I bet you did all kinds of bad stuff too.
You always understand me and that's saying something, Adelphina... :p
All those volumes can be confusing for sure.
But...
Absolutely, you totally get it.
Pressing those buttons really gets you off.
(The elevator...)
And drives you crazy.
Losing your mind.
Making you lose the plot.
And the rest is all non-sense.
Re. The rest is all nonsense
5th Aug 2022 5:24am
Entropy is just the universe getting down to it.
And....the rest is just pure D total nonsense.
And the "X" stands for....
And....the rest is just pure D total nonsense.
And the "X" stands for....
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5th Aug 2022 1:26pm
Ah, entropy - Yes indeed... The universe is forever getting down to it.
There is a lot of energy transfers in everything and certainly between people.
And there is a lot of nonsense too...
Someone once asked me that and this was my response...
Xtra-Crazy and/or Xtra-Sweet
depending on who you ask ;)
Xtra-quirky
X-Representing a filler for last initial
X-Because KX is kind of cool
X- factor (I got that from comments but I like it)
X-Because I like the way it looks
X-is a kiss when appropriate
X-rated
X-citing
X-stasy
eXhilarating - took that from what someone wrote. But I like it.
eXplosive - took that from what someone wrote. ...
X-because I can keep going ...
There is a lot of energy transfers in everything and certainly between people.
And there is a lot of nonsense too...
Someone once asked me that and this was my response...
Xtra-Crazy and/or Xtra-Sweet
depending on who you ask ;)
Xtra-quirky
X-Representing a filler for last initial
X-Because KX is kind of cool
X- factor (I got that from comments but I like it)
X-Because I like the way it looks
X-is a kiss when appropriate
X-rated
X-citing
X-stasy
eXhilarating - took that from what someone wrote. But I like it.
eXplosive - took that from what someone wrote. ...
X-because I can keep going ...
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5th Aug 2022 1:35pm
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5th Aug 2022 1:46pm
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5th Aug 2022 8:47am
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Haha, absolutely... Definitely need the red button in that case.
Well you gave me an idea to write there ... I may just have to do that.
The eagerness for touch is so strong, even the simple things... a kiss on the cheek, a handshake, a hug, animalistic desires enacted in every way touching every part of you. touching your heart and soul. We all have a greed for it and that's good since touch is one of the best things in the world. I love when everything else becomes nonsense losing yourself in that intense sensation where you simply cannot think straight, and don't need to.
I love mesmerizing... not sure I really put them together, they just kind of go wherever. I don't try to write. It just happens.
'pretty little mind' :p that's so cute. I love leaving you wanting more.
I know you felt it then. And I love when people feel it. ;)
Well you gave me an idea to write there ... I may just have to do that.
The eagerness for touch is so strong, even the simple things... a kiss on the cheek, a handshake, a hug, animalistic desires enacted in every way touching every part of you. touching your heart and soul. We all have a greed for it and that's good since touch is one of the best things in the world. I love when everything else becomes nonsense losing yourself in that intense sensation where you simply cannot think straight, and don't need to.
I love mesmerizing... not sure I really put them together, they just kind of go wherever. I don't try to write. It just happens.
'pretty little mind' :p that's so cute. I love leaving you wanting more.
I know you felt it then. And I love when people feel it. ;)
Re. The rest is all nonsense
5th Aug 2022 7:40pm
Hotel: Who gets up to let room service in?
Apt / Condo: Who gets up for water or make coffee?
I know the answer. 😀
Now let's see what props are available for round 2!!
Apt / Condo: Who gets up for water or make coffee?
I know the answer. 😀
Now let's see what props are available for round 2!!
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5th Aug 2022 7:51pm
I will get up for room service but do I have to get dressed?
Water and coffee, well that's all you... Sometimes I need you to do it. ;)
What's the answer? :p
Props, well... There are so many but bodies will always do.
Bodies are the best props.
But other things are so much fun too. ;)
Thanks so much for stopping by DaVinci and sharing your thoughts with me.
Round 2... Oh yes! what's the props?
Water and coffee, well that's all you... Sometimes I need you to do it. ;)
What's the answer? :p
Props, well... There are so many but bodies will always do.
Bodies are the best props.
But other things are so much fun too. ;)
Thanks so much for stopping by DaVinci and sharing your thoughts with me.
Round 2... Oh yes! what's the props?
Re. The rest is all nonsense
6th Aug 2022 1:04am
The combination of words works really well to create imagery without sentences. And the ending really ties it all together. Well done.
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6th Aug 2022 1:43am
I was actually concerned about that, if the words could carry the meaning I wanted to convey so I really appreciate you mentioning that. It seems like people got it fortunately. :) I love creating imagery and pulling someone in to my thoughts through words. The ending was certainly key to delivering the meaning in this case. But my thoughts are generally chaotic and strange anyway. lol Thanks so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate it a lot.
Re. The rest is all nonsense
6th Aug 2022 1:59am
“Shrapnel in my mind”
“Carnality “
Who can think clearly in that moment and who would want to?
Love this.
“Carnality “
Who can think clearly in that moment and who would want to?
Love this.
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6th Aug 2022 2:59pm
Oh yes! Exactly. ;) Part of the reason we love those moments is BECAUSE we don't have to think clearly, right? :p So much of the time there is no choice but to think and make difficult decisions and deal with stuff in life. But in those moments, none of that matters - just the intense sensations from the body taking over. That is so addictive... Thanks so much for visiting me Mary and sharing your thoughts... We definitely think a like and I am so happy you loved it.
Re. The rest is all nonsense
6th Aug 2022 5:54am
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6th Aug 2022 3:04pm
I really love that, when verbs and adjectives are active, interest is high - that's a perfect way to think about it. I like how you see things Jazz. And I am so happy you thought it was a splendid write. I know it was different so wasn't really sure if people would like it or not. But I do lots of different stuff. :p Thanks so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate it so much.
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7th Aug 2022 00:10am
Haha, yeah elevators are kind of difficult these days.... just stay in the corner out of view of the camera. :p Where there is a will there is a way... But elevator is just for warm up. Maybe just kissing hot and heavy to give the security guys something to watch. lol There are much better places to get in trouble. :p It's good to see you Tim, I am really happy you stop in and as always thanks so much for sharing your thoughts with me. I love that.
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Anonymous
8th Aug 2022 00:05am
Some nice things here I particularly enjoy:
the juxtaposition and transition of the mechanical with the sex;
the idea of pleasure as a fragmentation--shrapnel here.
Nice stuff!
Enjoyed!
the juxtaposition and transition of the mechanical with the sex;
the idea of pleasure as a fragmentation--shrapnel here.
Nice stuff!
Enjoyed!
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8th Aug 2022 00:41am
Hey there Mark, I am so happy you enjoyed this one. The mechanical, the sensual, the chaos, I love everything about sex. It makes life worth living in so many ways. Pleasure is so often fragmented in so many ways... And I love that explosion always. I have needs and without that... Things would just be mediocre and nobody wants that. ;) Thanks so much for visiting me and sharing your thoughts with me. I love your thoughts...
Re. The rest is all nonsense
9th Aug 2022 12:56pm
There's nothing like passion in unusual places
YOU know about that !
I like those little rooms at the bank where you keep your safe deposit box.
Get out some important papers and get your freak on with someone....
YOU know about that !
I like those little rooms at the bank where you keep your safe deposit box.
Get out some important papers and get your freak on with someone....
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9th Aug 2022 2:43pm
Absolutely know all about UNSUAL PLACES (you probably saw my posts on that ;) ) Love to get my freak on anywhere, anytime it's so thrilling and exciting... heart racing full of desire. Some things just can't wait. Thanks so much for stopping by Iconic and sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate it. ;)
Re. The rest is all nonsense
14th Aug 2022 2:20am
I'm just glad you made it out of there alive, to be honest...Was watching a documentary about Grace Millaine recently. I still feel so angry about what that arsehole did to her. I wanna kill him really cos he's an extreme example of man's inhumanity to woman. :-(
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14th Aug 2022 2:55am
Tell me about it, I am so surprised I made it out alive many times. I will have to look up that documentary, I am not familiar with the case at all. I read a little just now and it is definitely amazing what someone will do to another person. There is a lot of inhumanity in the world that's for sure. I think that masculine protectiveness is really wonderful and it's certainly a major contrast to other ways of treating women. Thanks so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me Billy.
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14th Aug 2022 3:11am
Just looking out for you, honey. (Vomit, Vomit! if that sounds a bit sickly sweet). But seriously, it's a shame we have to think about 'taking care'
And I do I mean 'WE'.
And I do I mean 'WE'.
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Re. The rest is all nonsense
17th Aug 2022 3:40pm
Damn that was intense, like flashes of photographs stripping at the fabric of lust.
Great work.
Great work.
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17th Aug 2022 4:51pm
You know me, I am so intense... 'like flashes of photographs stripping at the fabric of lust' Wow, that's so perfect. Absolutely feels like that to me so I am really glad you saw it too. I am always thoroughly stuck in the fabric in lust. That's something I just cannot escape. Something I would never want to escape. I don't know how to view the world any other way. And if that fabric were ever unwound, I would spent every moment winding it back up tight... There is just no other option for me. I love that you can make sense of non-sense. ;)
Re. The rest is all nonsense
24th Aug 2022 6:07pm
Going straight to that pink pussy head will speak for itself and spit out its wet thank you afterwards.
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24th Aug 2022 7:41pm
Oh yeah! the wet thank you is the best. It caresses the heat so tightly. And so many things spill into it, adding that viscosity of passion that is so desperately sought. Losing my mind, losing your head in me. There is so much nonsense in life but passion makes sense of it all. Perhaps it's chaos but it's what I need and want. Diving straight in so deep I almost drown in myself. And I learn to hold my breath longer... ;)
Re. The rest is all nonsense
17th Apr 2024 8:16pm
So I was speaking about your poems (with all good intentions of course) and came across this, I really like this one, through all the things we can say to the one(s) we love/want when you get write down to it nothing says it better than actions, a touch, a look at the right time, the brush of lips, full blown out of control sex. It all works, the irony that it's expressed in a poem does nothing but make me smile. Love this ;)
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17th Apr 2024 9:14pm
Speaking about my poems, well that sounds interesting... I am certainly happy to hear it was with good intentions... And I love that you are reaching back to find things you like. "when you get write down to it" - I like the play on words there. :p But yes nothing says it better than actions and all of those things communicate our feelings perfectly. I love that the expression worked and if I could make you smile then that makes me feel good. Loving that you love it! ;) Tell me what type of poem are you in the mood for?
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17th Apr 2024 9:42pm
When I find a poet I like i do like to read earlier work to get a good feel for them :)
Your writing is very expressive, I like that you play with the formats too it works really well :)
What type of poem am I in the mood for? I will think on and send you a prompt if that works for you ;)
Your writing is very expressive, I like that you play with the formats too it works really well :)
What type of poem am I in the mood for? I will think on and send you a prompt if that works for you ;)
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17th Apr 2024 9:55pm