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Be still my heart...
I would carve roses
out of my heart
to offer you
as a token of my love
I would blanket you
with my skin
and let the time be still
...you are my beautiful sin
I would sell my soul to you
if you were the devil
just to be owned by you
even if it were for a
moment...
out of my heart
to offer you
as a token of my love
I would blanket you
with my skin
and let the time be still
...you are my beautiful sin
I would sell my soul to you
if you were the devil
just to be owned by you
even if it were for a
moment...
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Re. Be still my heart...
25th Jul 2022 8:39pm
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26th Jul 2022 8:08am
Re. Be still my heart...
25th Jul 2022 8:50pm
You honestly can write some of the most beautiful poetry, this is to freaking tight. We love every word of this piece
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Re: Re. Be still my heart...
Such beautiful n encouraging words coming from a poetic genius like you, it really means a lot to me, dear Me. Much thanks 🙏🌹😊
Re: Re. Be still my heart...
26th Jul 2022 8:13am
Thank you so much, dear Tim for the great feedback😊 I'm truly honoured by the reading list add... Thanks for stopping by🌹
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Re: Re. Be still my heart...
26th Jul 2022 8:14am
So glad you liked this piece.. Thanks a bunch, dear poet for the wonderful review😊😊😊
Re. Be still my heart...
25th Jul 2022 10:50pm
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26th Jul 2022 8:16am
Hey, thank you dear PS . 🥀🥀🥀Yayyy, here it goes to your reading list... Wow. 😊
Re. Be still my heart...
26th Jul 2022 1:19am
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26th Jul 2022 8:18am
Thank you so much, dear poet...🌹
What an honour to see this piece making it your reading list. much thanks 😊
What an honour to see this piece making it your reading list. much thanks 😊
Re. Be still my heart...
26th Jul 2022 4:03am
Re: Re. Be still my heart...
26th Jul 2022 8:19am
What a great comment! 😊😊😊
I'm ever grateful to you, dear Francisco for your continued support for my poetry. 🌹
I'm ever grateful to you, dear Francisco for your continued support for my poetry. 🌹
Re: Re. Be still my heart...
26th Jul 2022 8:20am
Why thank you, dear poetess 💕💕💕
It's so nice to have your presence on my page😊
It's so nice to have your presence on my page😊
Re. Be still my heart...
26th Jul 2022 6:09am
Beautiful romantic piece. Favourite verse (most seductive):
I would blanket you
with my skin
and let the time be still
...you are my beautiful sin [I could say Yes to such an offer!]
I would blanket you
with my skin
and let the time be still
...you are my beautiful sin [I could say Yes to such an offer!]
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Re: Re. Be still my heart...
26th Jul 2022 8:33am
Even that's my favorite verse too😊
Glad that verse appeals to you😊
Thank you, dear Solomon for your kind feedback. Much appreciated 🥀🥀🥀
Glad that verse appeals to you😊
Thank you, dear Solomon for your kind feedback. Much appreciated 🥀🥀🥀
Re. Be still my heart...
26th Jul 2022 6:40am
That's some out of sight passion for real for a luva u convey and display within your writing. The beats of my heart ah fell within each letter of each word within each stanza. Fabulous job fast! Just fabulous!
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Re. Be still my heart...
26th Jul 2022 8:35am
"The beats of my heart ah fell within each letter of each word within each stanza"
Wow, your comment is poetry in itself!
What can I say....Your fabulous review made my day 😊🥀💫 Thanks a bunch for adding this piece to your reading list 🌹
Wow, your comment is poetry in itself!
What can I say....Your fabulous review made my day 😊🥀💫 Thanks a bunch for adding this piece to your reading list 🌹
Re. Be still my heart...
Anyone would be envious
of someone loved to such a
level. It’s is beautifully written
and conveys such a love.
~NE~
of someone loved to such a
level. It’s is beautifully written
and conveys such a love.
~NE~
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Re: Re. Be still my heart...
26th Jul 2022 7:09pm
Thank you so much, dear NE for your gracious comment... 💕💕💕 Such an honour to see this piece finding a place in your reading list😊 thanks for stopping by 🌹
Re. Be still my heart...
28th Jul 2022 3:33pm
Well, I say 'Be still my heart' just from seeing your beautiful smile InDreamz. :) The images you paint are always so beautiful, straight from a pure and loving heart. Carving roses from the heart is such a gorgeous expression of love and passion. And to blanket another with your skin, and you theirs is so intimate... oh yes, the sin will certainly come. ;)
That incredible desire that you would do anything to feel reciprocated. To be owned can be so beautiful. Made me think of this song which I love. :) Anyway, truly lovely like you.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PX7LLua5NCM
That incredible desire that you would do anything to feel reciprocated. To be owned can be so beautiful. Made me think of this song which I love. :) Anyway, truly lovely like you.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PX7LLua5NCM
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Re: Re. Be still my heart...
28th Jul 2022 9:31pm
I checked out that song... Nice one... 😊 and I know why my poem reminded you of that song... 😊
Thank you so much, sweet Kristina 🌹 You are such a doll 😘 Its always a matter of great pleasure to read your lovely, encouraging and insightful comments... You are so thoughtful and kind, dear poetess 💕 Your beautiful words never fail to bring smile on my face... Thank you so much dearest for taking time to read and leave such wonderful review.... And yes, it's always an honour to have my piece find a place in your reading list 😊🥀🥀🥀
Thank you so much, sweet Kristina 🌹 You are such a doll 😘 Its always a matter of great pleasure to read your lovely, encouraging and insightful comments... You are so thoughtful and kind, dear poetess 💕 Your beautiful words never fail to bring smile on my face... Thank you so much dearest for taking time to read and leave such wonderful review.... And yes, it's always an honour to have my piece find a place in your reading list 😊🥀🥀🥀
Re. Be still my heart...
28th Jul 2022 6:54pm
Re: Re. Be still my heart...
28th Jul 2022 9:34pm
Thanks a lot, dear James.... I'm so flattered to get this wonderful review from you... Much thanks😊❤
Re. Be still my heart...
12th Feb 2023 6:49pm
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12th Feb 2023 7:04pm
It's the first time i have posted here. Had penned this last year.
Thank you 🌹
Thank you 🌹
Re. Be still my heart...
A beautiful and heartfelt write. To give yourself whole heartedly to another is so vulnerable and brave. Completely worth it to love that much. Thanks for sharing your heart with us. Bless
Mel
Mel
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Re: Re. Be still my heart...
16th Feb 2023 5:07pm
Thank you so much, dear mel for a beautiful comment. Very much appreciate you gracing my page with your presence. Thanks ❤
Re. Be still my heart...
18th Apr 2024 6:11pm