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Wow, lady Blue❣ I am speechless, gob smacked, enthralled with this piece it is so lush in its botanical imagery and metaphors. Its an explosion of color. "amethyst-pink creases" oh my. This passage reminds me of wisteria which always brings me peace,
"Kinetic thoughts  
weave poignant details  
into a trellis  
of royal purple foliage"
I feel sensually wrapped in your magical verse...caressed by each word. And oh my oh my the reading is enrapturing...I can see your smile in your voice; the pauses; the cadence; all is perfectly rendered. Bravissima bella poeta, BB🐻💞🐰

My jaw is on the floor, BB!!
Holy moly... I don't even know where to begin... You are beyond amazing.
Your comments have impacted me immensely and were the huge reason I didn't delete this poem altogether. I swear, I was so down about it's outcome until I read this beacon, warming me from all my cold struggling doubt.

You.... and your viscerally poignant pleasure, have me renewed and revived and totally filled with swagger and pride.

I'm over the moon, and utterly transfused.
Majestic bear, indeed.

You move me.
🌹💙
🐻🐰

Hoi hoi

Imagining    
seeing you  
inhaling you    
tasting you    
feeling you    

Pretty soon you have us spoiled rotten.
Really really soon.
And I like the excentric outfit too.
Kind regards, Gus

Hey there, Johnny ;)

Your comments are kind and genuine, thank you so much for sharing them with me.

I'm so glad you enjoyed, it mean a lot to me her you take the time to say so.

It's A Clockwork Orange costume, one of my favorite Halloween cosplay costumes!

It's a pleasure ✨
🌹 - B

a florid wonderland of sounds and visions...I really enjoy hearing poetry as spoken by the poet...you are excelling in this new dimension...love it...you..keep it coming  Lawrence

This is a total uplifting gem of a compliment, dear Lawrence! I am so humbled and heartened. Thank you for hearing me and feeling it.

You better believe I'll continue to strive for my best.

I'm beyond delighted that you found something here and stopped by to leave your thoughts.
It's enormously meaningful and allows me to continue writing with a bit more confidence.

Much love and appreciation,
🌹 - B

The wind keeps howling your name to me.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

Each letter gently rides upon the billowing breeze....

Glad to know you're listening, Francisco!
I appreciate you being here... it means a lot.

🌹 - B

The art of writing a poem in a pictorial way.
It invites readers to understand *mystically* something new about romance.

"Kinetic thoughts... weave poignant details... " ... ... 👍
"Heightening passions,... proving parallels... "  ... ... 👍

... ... ...

Wow, Marks.
You've really made me feel consequential and full of accomplishment. I thank you so much for your kind words and for totally getting what it was I had hoped to convey.

I'm deeply appreciative and so grateful you stopped by.... I adore your visits and look forward to each and every one.

Much love, dear friend
🌹 - 💙
B

You're most welcome, Bluevelvete.

... 👍

wonderful Blue

Awww... My favorite cute chipmunk! 🐿 .... Whew,
I thought you'd forgotten about me! ... *wink

In all seriousness, I'm enormously grateful for your visit and so delighted you found some small bit of wonder here; that does my heart and mind some lovely good.


Warmest,
🌹 - 💙
B

Such strong desire. I enjoyed every line. One of my favorites from you, friend 😁

Ohh, wow.
Thanks for that amazing feedback, DC.

You've made my night!

I was beating myself up about this piece and feeling like it wasn't coming across and you've literally shined new light on it for me.

My biggest thanks, friend.
Sincerely.

🌹-B

No need to second guess this one. The sentiment shines through 😁

Thanks again, DC.
I appreciate that!

-B

Blue Velvet,

      This sounds like u are talking directly to your luva or the luva u want with stout reason for this passion presented for his or her luv. Awesome work!🌷👁️🍑🍓🍇💖💯💋🌷👁️♥️🌃🛳️

Thanks for reading and listening, Birchel.


It's nice to hear be acknowledged and I sincerely appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts with me.

Means a lot

Take care of yourself out and there!
🌹 - B
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U are welcome always and u are appreciated!

lol... cute.... very cute!

Thanks for the lovely sentiments.
Glad you found a little something that you enjoyed.

Much love,
🌹 💙
B

I feel like you are like the five octave singer of poetry readings...  :p

You continue to evolve B...

I could really feel your command of the piece...  Like all of your experiences converging to a point of power...

That is so fucking inspiring...

Like you got the glow of personal evolution...

Whatever happens...  Your voice will always resound across the spectrum from paradise to the void...

This engages the senses deeply...

Structure so clean...  Perfectly paired with the reading...  

Multisensory magic...  :)))

🤯🤯🤯
You're a dark gem (I mean that in the best of ways) that shines it's own shade of iridescent obsidian...and oh how I love catching the refractive light.... randomly bouncing and highlighting.. ✨ 💫 ✨ 🖤  

I'm beyond thankful.
(you didn't need to do and I'm so so appreciative 🙏)

I have been second guessing this one and not really understanding my feelings about why, which is why I wanted another perspective.... -'ღ´-

Blue, this is everything at the heart of desire, sensuality, and love. I felt the erotic waves wash over me as I read. The oriental tone here gave it a spiritual nature that only increased the sexual subtext. I  loved this more than any classic poet I have ever read. There is authentic exoticism here that mesmerizes me into a trance of emotional bliss. This felt like floating down a river in Japan with cherry blossoms overhead to scent my journey. Each magical lilt of your voice brought me into total nirvana. You chose the perfect music as background. I feel your intonation long after hearing you. And your voice seduces my soul.

Xo
John

 John,
I can almost smell the scent of cherry blossoms blooming along the Japanese riverside, as my own senses roar to life within the remembrance of my mindset and how my whole body felt during my writing of this piece. What delicious recollections your remarks have led me to revisit.... that's a heady and truly pleasurable bonus - thank you-🙏  

I'm beyond grateful and sincerely humbled that you found yourself encapsulated so potently within the evocation of my spoken word audio and the poem itself. Reaching you with such intense effect has me giddy and utterly jubilant. There's enormous appreciation there but also oodles of deep erogenous satisfaction that comes from knowing the extent of which my words were construed; how I was able to stimulate someone's emotional and physical being to the kind of passionate heights I've only dreamed of doing but absolutely hoped to one day achieve.... Thank you (again) for feeling so so deeply with me and allowing me to take you to that heavenly heightened state.  

I'm left in gorgeous amazement
and shivers of excitement.

🌹💙
-Susan

You're spoken word reaches higher and higher levels. It's rich with passion and fervor, every line delivering breathless thoughts.

Amazing work.

You're far too kind.... thanks for the confidence boost, my friend.

I'm sincerely thankful that you continue to find enjoyment within my little pieces. I'm lucky for your support... I don't take it for granted.  

It means the world.
and I'm grateful.
🌹 - 💙
-B