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Untitled Tapestry
It's not about anything
Just paint and cold pressed paper
15 x 12
Gouache
Worked on it for awhile
It was hard to photograph
A lot of moving parts someone said
I make art because it's a calling
Unlike a love poem
That's expression too
I slept 8 hours last night
Unheard of in my nucleus
Not sure what to do with the energy
Perhaps another painting
A trip to buy greeting cards
My mentor and cousin were born on the same day
Same year
Both are Vietnam veterans
One was in intelligence, the other communications
One killed people, the other probably not
Their lives were not parallel post war
They will both receive funny cards ....
Just paint and cold pressed paper
15 x 12
Gouache
Worked on it for awhile
It was hard to photograph
A lot of moving parts someone said
I make art because it's a calling
Unlike a love poem
That's expression too
I slept 8 hours last night
Unheard of in my nucleus
Not sure what to do with the energy
Perhaps another painting
A trip to buy greeting cards
My mentor and cousin were born on the same day
Same year
Both are Vietnam veterans
One was in intelligence, the other communications
One killed people, the other probably not
Their lives were not parallel post war
They will both receive funny cards ....
Author's Note
Watercolor Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Untitled Tapestry
9th Jul 2022 1:28pm
The whole business is about expressing yourself. One way ot another. It's got to come out.
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9th Jul 2022 1:39pm
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9th Jul 2022 2:56pm
That's a comment I can believe in Sms
I thank you for seeing that and saying so ....
I thank you for seeing that and saying so ....
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Anonymous
9th Jul 2022 9:46pm
I love the stormy grays, orange optimism, pink love, and blue lakes and skies. Love the close of the poem too.
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9th Jul 2022 10:08pm
There's a little of everything in there.
Combo platter
These usually come out pretty good when I sit with them partly finished waiting for the next idea to arrive.
In some ways I feel like the painting and the poem are the best I've done in awhile
Thanks so much Pink
Appreciate you !
Combo platter
These usually come out pretty good when I sit with them partly finished waiting for the next idea to arrive.
In some ways I feel like the painting and the poem are the best I've done in awhile
Thanks so much Pink
Appreciate you !
Re. Untitled Tapestry
10th Jul 2022 00:46am
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10th Jul 2022 00:54am
Re. Untitled Tapestry
Dear PS,
It’s the way you just say what you mean that I find so admirable. As I work to find this expression for myself I really enjoy these peeks into the life of our PS! Lovely painting also. H 🌷
It’s the way you just say what you mean that I find so admirable. As I work to find this expression for myself I really enjoy these peeks into the life of our PS! Lovely painting also. H 🌷
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10th Jul 2022 1:30pm
Dear H,
It's always nice to get a comment that my writing supercedes the painting. After being here forever and penning over 1700 poems I still don't see myself as a poet. I guess more of a narrative writer.
I didn’t know where this one was going but I feel
like it finally got there !!
Thanks for commenting H, it means a lot to me !!!
PS
Xx
It's always nice to get a comment that my writing supercedes the painting. After being here forever and penning over 1700 poems I still don't see myself as a poet. I guess more of a narrative writer.
I didn’t know where this one was going but I feel
like it finally got there !!
Thanks for commenting H, it means a lot to me !!!
PS
Xx
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10th Jul 2022 11:04pm
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10th Jul 2022 11:33pm
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13th Jul 2022 12:17pm
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13th Jul 2022 12:21pm
Thank you !
There was a lot of love in making this painting
Appreciate the nod
There was a lot of love in making this painting
Appreciate the nod
Re. Untitled Tapestry
14th Jul 2022 4:35pm
A nicely balanced art piece, both colors and form. I like to paint myself, but haven't much in recent years. Time to get back to it. I think your words made sense for the feelings for others you care about and just life.
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Re. Untitled Tapestry
14th Jul 2022 4:53pm
This was a real write itself entry
No tricks or darkness
I appreciate your comment, it's nice when they flow like that ..
Thanks
No tricks or darkness
I appreciate your comment, it's nice when they flow like that ..
Thanks
Re. Untitled Tapestry
31st Jul 2022 8:30am
Interesting write Poet. People can try to interpret what it means using psychological terms. I just see it as you expressing yourself.
Great work.
Great work.
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31st Jul 2022 9:40am
Thats how I see it too
Abstraction allows for that. I just do it until I think its finished....
Thx for getting it Wally
Abstraction allows for that. I just do it until I think its finished....
Thx for getting it Wally