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bruising on an otherwise pretty body
I lust for you
It's not a day here or there
It's EVERYDAY
It's OBSESSION
I'm REPRESSED
You're a songbird
Flowing in vibe and heat
I'm an outsider
A Loner
A dark cloud hoping for rain
I paint
I do that for you
Do you feel it ?
Do you feel soft allure?
Watercolor
Pastels
Sometimes I'm so lonely
My lust turns negative
Then bruises babe
That's also for you ...
It's not a day here or there
It's EVERYDAY
It's OBSESSION
I'm REPRESSED
You're a songbird
Flowing in vibe and heat
I'm an outsider
A Loner
A dark cloud hoping for rain
I paint
I do that for you
Do you feel it ?
Do you feel soft allure?
Watercolor
Pastels
Sometimes I'm so lonely
My lust turns negative
Then bruises babe
That's also for you ...
Author's Note
Creepy epitome of a man possessed
Watercolor Painting by Poetspeak
Watercolor Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
6th Jul 2022 8:24pm
The painting is awesome! Very in sync with the beautiful piece of poetry... Over all it evokes a very sensual feel 🌹
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Re: Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
6th Jul 2022 8:40pm
I'm glad you like it ID, shows a side of you I didn't know about.
I appreciate your kind words and gratified by the RL.
Stay tuned for more dark sexuality..
💓
I appreciate your kind words and gratified by the RL.
Stay tuned for more dark sexuality..
💓
Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
6th Jul 2022 8:28pm
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6th Jul 2022 8:41pm
Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
6th Jul 2022 8:50pm
So bravely honest, and some great lines. My favorite is "A dark cloud hoping for rain."
Gotta have the rain...
Gotta have the rain...
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Re: Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
6th Jul 2022 8:59pm
This one truly wrote itself. Especially that rain line.
Anyone who swims in our waters knows the pain and the glory of obsession....
Thx so much for the visit and RL Wendy ❤
Anyone who swims in our waters knows the pain and the glory of obsession....
Thx so much for the visit and RL Wendy ❤
Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
6th Jul 2022 11:56pm
Loving the rich colors in that painting so much.
I could definitely see the bruises and the darkness
making such brilliant patterns...
Spelling out a night of obsession.
Perhaps with whips and chains ;)
Definitely feel the soft allure though.
Yes, you know everything is for me. :p
in this creepy epitome...
I could definitely see the bruises and the darkness
making such brilliant patterns...
Spelling out a night of obsession.
Perhaps with whips and chains ;)
Definitely feel the soft allure though.
Yes, you know everything is for me. :p
in this creepy epitome...
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Re: Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
7th Jul 2022 00:08am
Endless hours of obsession culminating in a night of searing passion and an Apex of pain
How else does my love spell out ?
Painting is Creation, BIG BANG, ultimate need, BEYOND REASON
You won't have to search me out
I'm in a black torn trench coat on the corner Bruised and Reason ....
How else does my love spell out ?
Painting is Creation, BIG BANG, ultimate need, BEYOND REASON
You won't have to search me out
I'm in a black torn trench coat on the corner Bruised and Reason ....
Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
7th Jul 2022 00:21am
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7th Jul 2022 00:45am
Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
7th Jul 2022 1:07am
Hey PS:)
I can definitely feel the vibe in this storm amigo.
Loved it. The yearning obsession, the painting, the word choice.
You created your own world with this. The painting looks
like it got rained on as well. Such a great delivery in this whole
MASTER piece. (See what I did there with the word master:) hehehe
I can definitely feel the vibe in this storm amigo.
Loved it. The yearning obsession, the painting, the word choice.
You created your own world with this. The painting looks
like it got rained on as well. Such a great delivery in this whole
MASTER piece. (See what I did there with the word master:) hehehe
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Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
7th Jul 2022 1:33am
Yes, you totally got it A
I am my own MASTER
Of your domain or MINE
I had to spill it once and for ALL
This painting is CREATION
Obsession might be a problem for some, NOT ME
I welcome IT
THX FOR THE STREET CRED HOT 🔥 SAUCE
I am my own MASTER
Of your domain or MINE
I had to spill it once and for ALL
This painting is CREATION
Obsession might be a problem for some, NOT ME
I welcome IT
THX FOR THE STREET CRED HOT 🔥 SAUCE
Re: Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
7th Jul 2022 1:39am
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7th Jul 2022 1:55am
Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
7th Jul 2022 3:27am
Since kidnapping is illegal, we have to simply write it out to let it out. I know this angst all too well myself amigo!
But, sometimes blunt and obvious is okay too, just to get it over with! Who knows!
(There's an underwater dude, in your painting. Time for him to surface?)
But, sometimes blunt and obvious is okay too, just to get it over with! Who knows!
(There's an underwater dude, in your painting. Time for him to surface?)
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Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
7th Jul 2022 3:40am
This is a synopsis of many relationships that yielded ultimate excitement but also chronic dismay....
I'm law abiding but my secret thoughts are only exposed here ...
Reality, fantasy, wanna be, was, indeed Who knows ??
I looked for that dude you mentioned, I might indeed see him
Thx for an intriguing comment Styx
Appreciate
I'm law abiding but my secret thoughts are only exposed here ...
Reality, fantasy, wanna be, was, indeed Who knows ??
I looked for that dude you mentioned, I might indeed see him
Thx for an intriguing comment Styx
Appreciate
Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
7th Jul 2022 8:27am
You gave yourself to this, discarded vulnerabilities and went with it. The mind is a powerful tool releasing just enough dopamine and oxytocin to keep you addicted crossing lines into outlets of pain, lust and art, then knowing when to pull back separating fantasy from reality. But what fun is that?
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Re: Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
7th Jul 2022 11:31am
There are all kinds of motives in the Chamber. Sometimes I'm there observing you, other times participated in your training from good girl to nymph 49. Yes, you're quite a transformation and irresistible to this lost soul. But the fun is in what I'm not saying publicly. You know all to well there are many sides to this obsession.
You know that ...
You're up late Goddess
You know that ...
You're up late Goddess
Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
Anonymous
7th Jul 2022 9:37am
The post-modern angst poems are my faves; this one fits the bill nicely! Great art too!
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Re: Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
7th Jul 2022 11:33am
Yes, indeed postmodern, it's where the real work gets done.
The art is Creation, angst living and breathing and taking our souls
Thanks for the visit Ted
The art is Creation, angst living and breathing and taking our souls
Thanks for the visit Ted
Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
7th Jul 2022 5:49pm
I can see the bruises in the painting, obviously. But the colors and the flow lend to passion.
Fits perfectly for your work.
Love both!
Fits perfectly for your work.
Love both!
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Re: Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
7th Jul 2022 5:55pm
Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
8th Jul 2022 10:59am
The exploratory effect of word choice, especially the verbs has never been so compelling for such brief a write.
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Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
8th Jul 2022 11:10am
Just writing the emotion as it floods me daily. All this stuff needs somewhere to go. Where better than the Swamp of DUP
I appreciate the read and comment Jazz
Always a pleasure to see you on my page
Thanks
I appreciate the read and comment Jazz
Always a pleasure to see you on my page
Thanks
Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
14th Jul 2022 4:37pm
Nice painting and words inspired by this I assume, and a good piece it is.
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14th Jul 2022 4:51pm
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14th Jul 2022 7:49pm
Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
31st Jul 2022 7:49am
Obsession, possession, the tortured artist creates great works in these phases.
Amazing work, both in image and words.
BIG LIKE
Amazing work, both in image and words.
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. bruising on an otherwise pretty body
31st Jul 2022 9:44am
Been holding a lot of stuff in fir too long
Had to be written
I was surprised by the outpouring of support
Bruises are funny that way
Thx W
Had to be written
I was surprised by the outpouring of support
Bruises are funny that way
Thx W