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I've Wanted to Write a Love Poem all Week
Frame of mind
That's what's needed
In the quiet of the dawn
I reach out to you
The day will be chaotic
Treasure this moment
Moving next to you
A morning caress
We embrace and kiss
One thing leads to another
Slide into you
What dreams are made of ....
That's what's needed
In the quiet of the dawn
I reach out to you
The day will be chaotic
Treasure this moment
Moving next to you
A morning caress
We embrace and kiss
One thing leads to another
Slide into you
What dreams are made of ....
Author's Note
Watercolor Painting by Poetspeak
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24th Jun 2022 12:15pm
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24th Jun 2022 12:24pm
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24th Jun 2022 12:59pm
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Re: Re. I've Wanted to Write a Love Poem all Week
24th Jun 2022 1:04pm
I've always said I was a romantic but other things get in the way.
Glad you see it
Thanks Sms
Glad you see it
Thanks Sms
Re. I've Wanted to Write a Love Poem all Week
Anonymous
24th Jun 2022 3:22pm
Good read, good advice & matching artwork. A+!
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24th Jun 2022 3:24pm
All I need in the morning is this to prompt a man/woman poem
Appreciate your comment Ted
Thanks
Appreciate your comment Ted
Thanks
Re. I've Wanted to Write a Love Poem all Week
24th Jun 2022 4:19pm
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24th Jun 2022 4:21pm
Re. I've Wanted to Write a Love Poem all Week
24th Jun 2022 4:43pm
Dear PS,
It was worth the wait! The intimacy and longing are very well depicted and the painting is beautiful. Have to say, I really dig your romantic side. It’s just the perfect blend of kind and gentle and urgent.
HUGE LIKE!
H 🌷
It was worth the wait! The intimacy and longing are very well depicted and the painting is beautiful. Have to say, I really dig your romantic side. It’s just the perfect blend of kind and gentle and urgent.
HUGE LIKE!
H 🌷
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24th Jun 2022 5:12pm
Dear H,
Maybe I should let this side out more often. I always think if I do, it wouldn't be as effective. Despite my penchant for writing dirty poems I still see myself as a romantic. I'm glad you see it too !!
Thanks H
Appreciate your comments always
PS
Maybe I should let this side out more often. I always think if I do, it wouldn't be as effective. Despite my penchant for writing dirty poems I still see myself as a romantic. I'm glad you see it too !!
Thanks H
Appreciate your comments always
PS
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24th Jun 2022 6:01pm
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24th Jun 2022 6:12pm
Re. I've Wanted to Write a Love Poem all Week
24th Jun 2022 10:28pm
hello dearest Poet this is so beautifully tender
I can feel your heart here please forgive my late visit
I was unsure what I would say and I know you hater rl
without comment...
I love this ❤️
I can feel your heart here please forgive my late visit
I was unsure what I would say and I know you hater rl
without comment...
I love this ❤️
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24th Jun 2022 11:43pm
You know my mind set so well
I never understood just the RL
We are writers so ..... write
You always leave comments
Brenda is not guilty of what I call Billboarding
Thanks so much, I enjoyed writing tender instead of my usual porn
I never understood just the RL
We are writers so ..... write
You always leave comments
Brenda is not guilty of what I call Billboarding
Thanks so much, I enjoyed writing tender instead of my usual porn
Re. I've Wanted to Write a Love Poem all Week
25th Jun 2022 00:02am
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25th Jun 2022 1:59am
Re. I've Wanted to Write a Love Poem all Week
25th Jun 2022 00:05am
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25th Jun 2022 2:01am
You are so kind k
I do like to write this way
Most appreciated on all fronts
Thx
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I do like to write this way
Most appreciated on all fronts
Thx
💕💕
Re. I've Wanted to Write a Love Poem all Week
25th Jun 2022 10:39pm
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25th Jun 2022 11:17pm
Re. I've Wanted to Write a Love Poem all Week
26th Jun 2022 00:04am
Well Love is definitely in the air tonight. :) Sorry I am late to the party, felt like I had to scroll down forever. That moment when you reach out and caress means everything. It means you still feel the love through it all. That kiss is something to live for. But to be your dreams that is the best reward ever. When you can make your dreams come true by being someone else's. Now that's one of the most beautiful things in the world.
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26th Jun 2022 1:13am
Wow, what a beautiful sincere comment Kx
When you decide you love somebody, you never forget the first time you tell them, then you hope to hear it back.
I cut my teeth on writing love way back when. Sometimes you just have to express it. Who doesn't like a good love poem ??
Appreciate the read and RL
When you decide you love somebody, you never forget the first time you tell them, then you hope to hear it back.
I cut my teeth on writing love way back when. Sometimes you just have to express it. Who doesn't like a good love poem ??
Appreciate the read and RL
Re. I've Wanted to Write a Love Poem all Week
26th Jun 2022 7:54pm
Hey PS.
I'm late to the party too. Love this watercolor painting. It's a poem all by itself. I see so many
messages in it. Like an upside picture of clouds fixing to rain of the flowers in the sky.
I also see it as reaching for the love - on its way to absorb it all. Such a wonderful vision for me to look at.
So many messages in that in painting. One of your best in my humble opinion:)
The poem is a bonus for me - thanks for making my Sunday afternoon amigo!!
Love this!!
I'm late to the party too. Love this watercolor painting. It's a poem all by itself. I see so many
messages in it. Like an upside picture of clouds fixing to rain of the flowers in the sky.
I also see it as reaching for the love - on its way to absorb it all. Such a wonderful vision for me to look at.
So many messages in that in painting. One of your best in my humble opinion:)
The poem is a bonus for me - thanks for making my Sunday afternoon amigo!!
Love this!!
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26th Jun 2022 9:21pm
Thanks so much for the comment and art review Adelphina.
I thought you might like this combo. The softness of watercolor and a love poem can't be beat. So happy when you approve. RL too.
Makes my day too !!
Stay tuned, more coming
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I thought you might like this combo. The softness of watercolor and a love poem can't be beat. So happy when you approve. RL too.
Makes my day too !!
Stay tuned, more coming
🤠💕
Re. I've Wanted to Write a Love Poem all Week
27th Jun 2022 2:37am
Amen brother. You poet-speak for all men here. Women too!?
The painting; Not to ruin it, but I see what Bigfoot feels, when he steps on the brambles in the woods. ..
The painting; Not to ruin it, but I see what Bigfoot feels, when he steps on the brambles in the woods. ..
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Re. I've Wanted to Write a Love Poem all Week
27th Jun 2022 2:59am
I looked, I can see BIG FOOT TOO
THAT'S A PRETTY AWESOME COMMENT STYX
I WENT TO ALL CAPS TO THANK YOU
DAMN, I APPRECIATE YOU
THANKS !!
THAT'S A PRETTY AWESOME COMMENT STYX
I WENT TO ALL CAPS TO THANK YOU
DAMN, I APPRECIATE YOU
THANKS !!
Re. I've Wanted to Write a Love Poem all Week
27th Jun 2022 12:56pm
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27th Jun 2022 2:29pm
That's a mighty fine comment PoH
You know and I know what this is about !!
Thank you
Stay tuned !
You know and I know what this is about !!
Thank you
Stay tuned !
Re. I've Wanted to Write a Love Poem all Week
27th Jun 2022 6:50pm
Re. I've Wanted to Write a Love Poem all Week
27th Jun 2022 9:39pm
Poetspeak can still do it !
Romantic stuff
I cut my teeth on these poems then went slightly astray.
You know what Lj, I still love writing them ...
Thank you for the lovely comment !
Romantic stuff
I cut my teeth on these poems then went slightly astray.
You know what Lj, I still love writing them ...
Thank you for the lovely comment !
Re. I've Wanted to Write a Love Poem all Week
28th Jun 2022 12:32pm
The first verse is the best, in my opinion, but it’s all good. Lovely and warm and sweet.
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I agree with you on the first verse
Gotta have something to keep you reading
Based on a real morning kiss so I wrote this ...
Appreciate the comment and RL
Thx Mr Karswell
Gotta have something to keep you reading
Based on a real morning kiss so I wrote this ...
Appreciate the comment and RL
Thx Mr Karswell
Re. I've Wanted to Write a Love Poem all Week
5th Jul 2022 12:43pm
Lovely poem... And a very pretty painting complimenting the piece ❤
The writing n the artwork together has such a tranquil n soothing effect on my mind.... Splendid job overall 👌
Thanks a lot for sharing, dear poet 🌹😊
The writing n the artwork together has such a tranquil n soothing effect on my mind.... Splendid job overall 👌
Thanks a lot for sharing, dear poet 🌹😊
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5th Jul 2022 1:20pm
It's my pleasure InDreamz
Comments like this make me want to do more ...
Very much appreciate you !
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Comments like this make me want to do more ...
Very much appreciate you !
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Re. I've Wanted to Write a Love Poem all Week
31st Jul 2022 00:11am
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31st Jul 2022 00:21am
This was sort of a home run poem.
I don't write them often like this so I'm glad you really got into it.
BIG THANKS FOR THE READ AND RL WALLY
I don't write them often like this so I'm glad you really got into it.
BIG THANKS FOR THE READ AND RL WALLY