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Acid Rain
No need to panic
As I feel my skin peel
Even at my upmost ugly
You see me as a prodigy
At home with the abuse
Never used an umbrella
Respecting the slivers
Made that don’t fade
Numb from human nature
Just let me melt until
Nothing is left but rubble
And bones of puddles
Burned skin made into
Rivers of pain
Just bring some more
Hell - bring a fucking downpour
Eventually I’ll evaporate
Into another day
And do it all again
Dancing and insane in the
Acid Rain
As I feel my skin peel
Even at my upmost ugly
You see me as a prodigy
At home with the abuse
Never used an umbrella
Respecting the slivers
Made that don’t fade
Numb from human nature
Just let me melt until
Nothing is left but rubble
And bones of puddles
Burned skin made into
Rivers of pain
Just bring some more
Hell - bring a fucking downpour
Eventually I’ll evaporate
Into another day
And do it all again
Dancing and insane in the
Acid Rain
Author's Note
Just one of those days. LOL
Still try to make the best of everything - even at the most challenging of times.
Listening to
Kurt Cobain - Burn the Rain (COVER)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iRPFp0o4N88
It is an unfinished song of his. Still love it!!!
Still try to make the best of everything - even at the most challenging of times.
Listening to
Kurt Cobain - Burn the Rain (COVER)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iRPFp0o4N88
It is an unfinished song of his. Still love it!!!
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Re. Acid Rain
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19th Jun 2022 3:09am
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Re: Re. Acid Rain
19th Jun 2022 5:45pm
Where would we be without looking forward
to another day. Frozen I guess - I'd rather melt:)
Thanks for stopping by Sawyer!!
to another day. Frozen I guess - I'd rather melt:)
Thanks for stopping by Sawyer!!
Re. Acid Rain
19th Jun 2022 3:54am
Couples in conflict here too
I'm in the dog house and trying to get used to the food ...
Cobain ... like
I'm in the dog house and trying to get used to the food ...
Cobain ... like
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Re: Re. Acid Rain
19th Jun 2022 5:53pm
Not only just a couple thing - life bites right now.
Working for nothing - I'm totally pissed about the gas
and inflation right now!! The fucking president and all the bullshit
excuses. Formula shortages? I mean what the fuck. We are not
a third fucking world country. I was born to be independent!!!
So should America!!!! Not depending on any other country for
our necessities. Just totally delusional bullshit!!!!
So glad I got that off my chest - so thanks you:)
On a lighter note Happy Father's Day:)
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment PS
Yes - Cobain rocks!!!!
Working for nothing - I'm totally pissed about the gas
and inflation right now!! The fucking president and all the bullshit
excuses. Formula shortages? I mean what the fuck. We are not
a third fucking world country. I was born to be independent!!!
So should America!!!! Not depending on any other country for
our necessities. Just totally delusional bullshit!!!!
So glad I got that off my chest - so thanks you:)
On a lighter note Happy Father's Day:)
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment PS
Yes - Cobain rocks!!!!
Re. Acid Rain
19th Jun 2022 3:59am
Dear A,
“Eventually I’ll evaporate
Into another day” what a brilliant phrase. What I think is so important is the idea that we get through it and onto another day where, for the most part, things can be brighter after a good nights rest. If that doesn’t do the trick then it’s retail therapy! This poem is so relatable and much appreciated. Well done. H🌷
“Eventually I’ll evaporate
Into another day” what a brilliant phrase. What I think is so important is the idea that we get through it and onto another day where, for the most part, things can be brighter after a good nights rest. If that doesn’t do the trick then it’s retail therapy! This poem is so relatable and much appreciated. Well done. H🌷
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Re: Re. Acid Rain
19th Jun 2022 5:57pm
Retail therapy sounds awesome!!!!
In a pinch right now but the light at the end of the tunnel
does lead me to the mall. hahahah
Home away from home!!!!
Me and my besite haven't gone in a while. Headed to the lake
this weekend - something to look forward to.
Thanks for leaving me with a smile Honoria:)
In a pinch right now but the light at the end of the tunnel
does lead me to the mall. hahahah
Home away from home!!!!
Me and my besite haven't gone in a while. Headed to the lake
this weekend - something to look forward to.
Thanks for leaving me with a smile Honoria:)
Re. Acid Rain
20th Jun 2022 4:01am
Who's popping your bubbles! Lemme at 'em!
You are allowed to be down, just not out.
Then again, writing it all out serves you well. And us, as readers.
Your poem is awesome, btw. Just hate to think you're feeling down.
You are allowed to be down, just not out.
Then again, writing it all out serves you well. And us, as readers.
Your poem is awesome, btw. Just hate to think you're feeling down.
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Re: Re. Acid Rain
21st Jun 2022 2:24am
Hey Styx,
I have a great big enormous smile on my dorky face right now.
Only one bad to the bone biker would utter the word bubbles.
You fucking rock. hahahah
Yes - I've been in a bad spot as of late but I hate crybabies. So I vent in my writing a lot. Have some darker stuff in my spirals from back in the day. In my opinion just shut the fuck up and write - don't want to necessarily talk about it. And don't just write it - style it with your words.
Glad you enjoyed this!!
Made my evening amigo.
Thanks for the RL and stopping by:)
I have a great big enormous smile on my dorky face right now.
Only one bad to the bone biker would utter the word bubbles.
You fucking rock. hahahah
Yes - I've been in a bad spot as of late but I hate crybabies. So I vent in my writing a lot. Have some darker stuff in my spirals from back in the day. In my opinion just shut the fuck up and write - don't want to necessarily talk about it. And don't just write it - style it with your words.
Glad you enjoyed this!!
Made my evening amigo.
Thanks for the RL and stopping by:)
Re: Re. Acid Rain
22nd Jun 2022 3:17am
Lol. Funny thing. I'm constantly the "fun one" when out and about with my hoodlums. They're so serious and glum. Boring asses. Lol. Yet I've also kicked more ass than all them combined.
-Only because they're all big dudes and rarely had to fight. Lucky bastards. One is so massive that he can't even swing his arms. So I give him a hard time about having a stinky butt, because there's no way his arms can bend back there.
He hates me. Lol. Not really, he has to take the tough love like all of us.
-Only because they're all big dudes and rarely had to fight. Lucky bastards. One is so massive that he can't even swing his arms. So I give him a hard time about having a stinky butt, because there's no way his arms can bend back there.
He hates me. Lol. Not really, he has to take the tough love like all of us.
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24th Jun 2022 1:23am
Re. Acid Rain
26th Jul 2022 2:46am
I'm a rainy day stormy night kinda fellow and Imma about to go insane. But all insanity aside this is a tight write, perfect for yet another dry night.
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Re: Re. Acid Rain
27th Jul 2022 2:49am
Hey Zinn
Look at you rhyming in comments too!!!
Now that is just awesome. hahahah
Thanks for the tight write!!!!!
Made my evening amigo:)
Look at you rhyming in comments too!!!
Now that is just awesome. hahahah
Thanks for the tight write!!!!!
Made my evening amigo:)
Re. Acid Rain
5th Aug 2022 3:02pm
Re: Re. Acid Rain
5th Aug 2022 4:31pm
Hi Bryan
Doing my best but there are days I wonder wtf. LOL
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment.
And the RL!
Woop Woop
Doing my best but there are days I wonder wtf. LOL
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment.
And the RL!
Woop Woop
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14th Sep 2022 2:05am