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Unforgiveable
I forgive you....
for being with another girl
But...
I will never forgive you
for not including me...
for being with another girl
But...
I will never forgive you
for not including me...
Author's Note
Some things are just unforgiveable.
And for all you sexy women out there that make me forget my orientation. You know who you are... ;)
And for all you sexy women out there that make me forget my orientation. You know who you are... ;)
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Re. Unforgiveable
Anonymous
16th Jun 2022 9:21pm
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Re: Re. Unforgiveable
16th Jun 2022 9:34pm
You knew Damnit! Don't you try those mind games with me buddy. You are in so much trouble. Provoking dirty thoughts and bringing you trouble, that's what I do. So much trouble. I bet you don't even remember her name do ya? >;p
Re. Unforgiveable
16th Jun 2022 9:52pm
Bitch has nice tits and wears a cross
She'll need help from above when you're done with her.
Topping from below and all that..
Fuck me look is happening but she has nothing on you ...
BiG CHEAT LIKE
She'll need help from above when you're done with her.
Topping from below and all that..
Fuck me look is happening but she has nothing on you ...
BiG CHEAT LIKE
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Re: Re. Unforgiveable
16th Jun 2022 10:54pm
She will get all kinds of help from above, help from below, help on the sides, help ... * nevermind * that would flag me as extreme content so fast and I am trying to be good. You know real good, or real bad - I am so confused which is which anymore. People always tell me I have a fuck me look. lol I just take it as a compliment. And then... * damint, nevermind again *
Re. Unforgiveable
16th Jun 2022 10:05pm
Always be faithful to your woman and communicate with her, she might surprise you. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. Unforgiveable
16th Jun 2022 11:06pm
Communication is so important. So many things can be avoided by just talking and being understanding. So often people just want to cause drama for no reason. And so often someone gets really hurt and they just wish that treatment would stop. Sometimes the other person just does not have the capacity to understand just how much they hurt you. Anyway yes, she might surprise you. :) Sorry went all serious there. :p Back to normal programming.
Re: Re. Unforgiveable
17th Jun 2022 00:29am
Re. Unforgiveable
16th Jun 2022 10:23pm
Re: Re. Unforgiveable
16th Jun 2022 11:07pm
No my dear Billy, but damn I would do that all day long, and all night too. I don't even know if I would let him join in, probably not. Yes, probably not. :p
Re: Re. Unforgiveable
16th Jun 2022 11:22pm
Fuck the looks, it's personality that counts most at the end of the day. I would dump her however beautiful, if her personality wasn't up to my required standard, no matter how good she was in bed too, lol.
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Re: Re. Unforgiveable
16th Jun 2022 11:35pm
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16th Jun 2022 11:38pm
You should have taped it then, lol. Just kidding. It don't mean shit to me. A walk in the park with you, grabbing a coffee & POSSIBLE DANISH PASTRY BEATS all that other shite, lol.
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Re. Unforgiveable
16th Jun 2022 10:39pm
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16th Jun 2022 11:19pm
Sounds like you are speaking from experience there Robert. Like lots of experience... I need to hear about this experience. lol Three verys in a row... Yep! I hear ya. ;)
Re: Re. Unforgiveable
16th Jun 2022 11:24pm
Re. Unforgiveable
16th Jun 2022 10:58pm
hey there sexy Kristina
I'm feeling this and I don't usually like girls that way
there's just something about you...
beautiful 💕
I'm feeling this and I don't usually like girls that way
there's just something about you...
beautiful 💕
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Re: Re. Unforgiveable
16th Jun 2022 11:15pm
If we got together there would be such an eclipse that the world would never see the sun again. The depths of that darkness would surely be the most beautiful thing the world has ever seen, at least to us. ;) I love this comment so much! You really tried to leave me speechless but I have too many words for you. You won't shut me up that easy. :p
Re. Unforgiveable
17th Jun 2022 00:06am
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17th Jun 2022 00:18am
Damnit Leo, you don't remember my order??? How can this be. So here I am going to have to remind you. You know what I like damnit!
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/410220-sex-at-waffle-house/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/410220-sex-at-waffle-house/
Re: Re. Unforgiveable
19th Jun 2022 11:22pm
I was well aware of your normal order and the poem, whereas the dalliance in your poem would imply a once in a while craving!! : )
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19th Jun 2022 11:48pm
Re. Unforgiveable
17th Jun 2022 1:58am
OK honestly, there is such an innocence in your writing that is quite at odds with your lusts and desires. Light shines through your darkest poems, that is a thing of beauty.
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Re: Re. Unforgiveable
17th Jun 2022 1:44pm
So many contradictions my dear Shaman. I can be your virgin or I can be your seductive witch casting the darkest of spells. Sometimes the succubus, sometimes the angel. I can be your whore or I can be your Cheerleader. (wait, is that the same thing * nevermind *) :p Anyway, you get the point. I love that you can see me in the dark. That you still see my light, sometimes I feel like there is none left. But I feel your light in this comment. Thank you!
Re. Unforgiveable
18th Jun 2022 3:40am
Okay off topic, but....
When I hear ignorant men bashing gay men, I say one thing.
"You dumbass. For every gay man, that's more women for you! "
Yeah, they have to rethink their logic after that. Lol.
Now, on topic. Never mind. Lol. I doubt you'd have to worry about your guy being with another woman without you knowing ahead of time. That would fall under cheating. And you've admitted to being crazy. So, hell no dude, don't do it!
Besides, why would he want to?
When I hear ignorant men bashing gay men, I say one thing.
"You dumbass. For every gay man, that's more women for you! "
Yeah, they have to rethink their logic after that. Lol.
Now, on topic. Never mind. Lol. I doubt you'd have to worry about your guy being with another woman without you knowing ahead of time. That would fall under cheating. And you've admitted to being crazy. So, hell no dude, don't do it!
Besides, why would he want to?
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Re: Re. Unforgiveable
18th Jun 2022 4:23pm
Damn right he wouldn't want to. He has a 'hard' enough time dealing with all my needs. Because I need it a lot. lol Logic, it's a thing sometimes. :p And yes, never upset a crazy woman. 'So, hell no dude, don't do it!' Some of the best advice ever. lol You seem to really have this logic thing figured out so well. ;)
Re: Re. Unforgiveable
19th Jun 2022 3:15pm
Damnit Adagio, you can't just say that! Tell me the secret, you know you want too... :p
Re. Unforgiveable
19th Jun 2022 4:54pm
Not sure if you are old enough to recall but this write reminds me a Berlin tune.
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Re: Re. Unforgiveable
19th Jun 2022 5:17pm
Haha... Oh my dear Jazz I guess you are right because I have no idea about that one. :) I want to listen to it though to see what it's all about.
Re. Unforgiveable
19th Jun 2022 6:40pm
Hi Kristina
You just can't help it - you're a flirt by nature. I have a friend like that.
We traded booty photos. Too funny.
My hubby has my booty on his phone screensaver. heheheh.
He took it off - to many people would glance at it. No worries for me on that end.
We both harmlessly flirt - you sexy thing. LOL
Great write chica.
You just can't help it - you're a flirt by nature. I have a friend like that.
We traded booty photos. Too funny.
My hubby has my booty on his phone screensaver. heheheh.
He took it off - to many people would glance at it. No worries for me on that end.
We both harmlessly flirt - you sexy thing. LOL
Great write chica.
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Re: Re. Unforgiveable
19th Jun 2022 7:22pm
And I would have been heartbroken if you did not comment on this one because you are someone who the Author's note was written for. ;) But you knew that I am sure. I can see why he would always want to see your booty, and I know he must miss it terribly when it is not within reach. But yes, I can imagine it would be distracting for anyone and there is work that must get done. lol I don't think I would do a threesome with you though because I would want you to have my full attention. ;) Okay, stopping flirting now. * innocent look *
Re. Unforgiveable
20th Jun 2022 6:33pm
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20th Jun 2022 8:13pm
Oh boy, that should definitely be put into the manual somewhere. Thanks for stopping by and sharing your wisdom. :)
Re: Re. Unforgiveable
20th Jun 2022 9:30pm
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/353094-be-that-man/
Even published about it
Even published about it
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Re. Unforgiveable
9th Jul 2022 2:45am
Re: Re. Unforgiveable
9th Jul 2022 2:03pm
I am full of surprises ABS, not many things are unforgiveable but clearly there are some things. lol If you liked this one you may like my senryu 'Wet' :p Perhaps that one will surprise you too. lol Thanks for stopping by and letting me surprise you. ;)
Re. Unforgiveable
22nd Jul 2022 4:22pm
It's like he lost on more. Then again some of us don't think straight (no pun intended) until after the fact. It takes a big heart to forgive, but it's nice of you to give even more of yourself to DUP.
;-)
;-)
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Re: Re. Unforgiveable
22nd Jul 2022 7:49pm
Yes, in that situation he definitely lost out on more. ;) But like you say often we don't think straight especially when sex is involved. Some things are forgivable and some things are not perhaps. How much more do you want Wally. ;) Just kidding... I am really happy you think it's nice. I like that a lot.