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Nocturnal 'admissions'
I think of you
.
.
.
and
then
I
crush
myself
across
a
pillow
perfectly
placed
to
force
forth
each and every
thought
I coax
Author's Note
Ohh those wee hours.... anything can happen ;)
©Blu2022
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Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
21st May 2022 1:03pm
Now that my dear is awesome
Live this, it's soooo yummy
Love and light
Ron xx
Live this, it's soooo yummy
Love and light
Ron xx
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21st May 2022 3:06pm
I'm giggling that you found this little naughtiness as delicious as you have. All smiles from here, dear Ron.
🌹 - 💙 - 😈
x
🌹 - 💙 - 😈
x
Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
21st May 2022 1:47pm
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heh heh heh... gotta keep some of my secrets!
I do love to have a bed full of pillows, though... After all, variety is the spice of life!!
🌹 - 💙 - 😏
xo
I do love to have a bed full of pillows, though... After all, variety is the spice of life!!
🌹 - 💙 - 😏
xo
Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
21st May 2022 2:02pm
😯 love it! You are so amazing such quills you wield so talented BlueBoo
Miss you 🥰
Always your sis
Jackie xoxoxo 😘
Miss you 🥰
Always your sis
Jackie xoxoxo 😘
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Re: Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
21st May 2022 3:11pm
lol... it was an off the cuff moment that popped into my dirty little mind.... I have zero shame about self gratifying!!
Lmao!
Thanks for the visit Jackie... I missed you!!!
Talk and catch up soon
🌹 - 💙 - 🤗
x
B
Lmao!
Thanks for the visit Jackie... I missed you!!!
Talk and catch up soon
🌹 - 💙 - 🤗
x
B
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Anonymous
21st May 2022 2:34pm
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Just a tad bit of naughtiness to spice things up!
heh heh heh 😈..... Thank you for stopping by and for leaving such kind words, Sawyer ...Alluringly tempting.... is so perfect 👌🏻
It's always a pleasure ✨
🌹 -B
heh heh heh 😈..... Thank you for stopping by and for leaving such kind words, Sawyer ...Alluringly tempting.... is so perfect 👌🏻
It's always a pleasure ✨
🌹 -B
Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
21st May 2022 2:35pm
deep.
in those
naughty
thoughts
of
you
my
ernest
most
urgent
of
wishes
is
to
be
your
pillow
of need
feeling
it crushing
on me
with
such
fervour
oh god
to be
all
that
pullow
represents
in your
most
secret
desires
and dreams
released
in those
naughty
thoughts
of
you
my
ernest
most
urgent
of
wishes
is
to
be
your
pillow
of need
feeling
it crushing
on me
with
such
fervour
oh god
to be
all
that
pullow
represents
in your
most
secret
desires
and dreams
released
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Re: Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
Ohhh naughty you!!!
hahahaha... lol... and here I thought mine was almost a bit too risqué... heh heh heh heh 😈
Tsk tsk... You saucy little flirt, you!!
(I tease!)
Ohhh what an excellent 'volley' of poetic emotion, from mine to yours .. You really did take my little nugget and wholly expand it's delightful lush headiness.... Oooolala!
🌹 - 💙
Loved it, C
hahahaha... lol... and here I thought mine was almost a bit too risqué... heh heh heh heh 😈
Tsk tsk... You saucy little flirt, you!!
(I tease!)
Ohhh what an excellent 'volley' of poetic emotion, from mine to yours .. You really did take my little nugget and wholly expand it's delightful lush headiness.... Oooolala!
🌹 - 💙
Loved it, C
Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
21st May 2022 4:28pm
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22nd May 2022 1:58am
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23rd May 2022 1:19pm
Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
21st May 2022 5:06pm
"There is a tide in the affairs of men,
Which taken at the flood, leads on..."
on the edge of a tsunami of sensation.....beautiful moment the essence of which you capture really well (in far fewer words than this comment...love it BV
Which taken at the flood, leads on..."
on the edge of a tsunami of sensation.....beautiful moment the essence of which you capture really well (in far fewer words than this comment...love it BV
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Re: Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
21st May 2022 9:32pm
Absolutely loved that thought... cresting upon that tsunami's edge.... riding....
My oh my what thoughts!! ....🌊
I'm so delighted you found an essence of beauty , here, L.
That's all I could hope for!
Much love and appreciation,
🌹 - 💙
B
My oh my what thoughts!! ....🌊
I'm so delighted you found an essence of beauty , here, L.
That's all I could hope for!
Much love and appreciation,
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
21st May 2022 7:14pm
:)))
Your zero shame is quite cool...
I was actually thinking about this recently... For some reason.
It's a long story... :p
Nevertheless... Thank you for admitting me into your Nocturnal 'admissions'... :p
Mhmm... :)))
Your zero shame is quite cool...
I was actually thinking about this recently... For some reason.
It's a long story... :p
Nevertheless... Thank you for admitting me into your Nocturnal 'admissions'... :p
Mhmm... :)))
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Re: Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
22nd May 2022 7:46am
Mmmm, indeedy... ;)))
Love the blatant honesty!! Wonder how those thoughts arrived upon this topic.. heh heh heh 😈
You're very welcome, P
I'm so tickled and pleased you enjoyed entry... lol
🌹 - 💙 - xo
B
Love the blatant honesty!! Wonder how those thoughts arrived upon this topic.. heh heh heh 😈
You're very welcome, P
I'm so tickled and pleased you enjoyed entry... lol
🌹 - 💙 - xo
B
Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
This wee confessing verse would be a sexy message to get from someone in the wee hours, especially if sent with the picture!
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Re: Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
22nd May 2022 7:39am
You're absolutely right, Solomon. Hopefully it was a bit sexy in this setting, too!!
Much obliged, for the thoughts and the visit.
Stay well.
🌹 - B
x
Much obliged, for the thoughts and the visit.
Stay well.
🌹 - B
x
Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
21st May 2022 10:14pm
how your words do express...
the simplest,
broadening the imagination,
and how it does manifest.
your words, have done wonders for my imagination.
enjoyed this.
how to imprint upon the mind....give Blue some ink and a quill.
the simplest,
broadening the imagination,
and how it does manifest.
your words, have done wonders for my imagination.
enjoyed this.
how to imprint upon the mind....give Blue some ink and a quill.
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Re: Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
21st May 2022 10:23pm
Sometimes imagination and reality commingle; producing little glistening moments of raw, honest life.... ;)
My mischievous Cheshire cat-like smile widens and I thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, lovely MS.
So glad you found your imagination stimulated, that's exactly what I hoped for.
🌹 - 💙
x
-B
My mischievous Cheshire cat-like smile widens and I thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, lovely MS.
So glad you found your imagination stimulated, that's exactly what I hoped for.
🌹 - 💙
x
-B
Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
22nd May 2022 1:51am
Nice hot picture. You should find a person to give you orgasmic bliss all day and night long. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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I've kinda given up on that search, I'll be handling my own bliss for a while... In all ways ;)
Thanks for always being a faithful reading and visitor, Francisco. It's always meant a lot to me.
I wish you well in all your days ahead.
🌹 - B
Thanks for always being a faithful reading and visitor, Francisco. It's always meant a lot to me.
I wish you well in all your days ahead.
🌹 - B
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22nd May 2022 5:10am
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Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
22nd May 2022 3:33am
Explain, what's the pillow for? Sometimes I'm a little slow.
Lol. Can't blame a guy for trying!
Hey, quite the enticing read!
Lol. Can't blame a guy for trying!
Hey, quite the enticing read!
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22nd May 2022 3:35am
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22nd May 2022 5:01am
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- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
22nd May 2022 5:05am
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I love that you found a bit of pleasure within this simple, spicy little reveal... it was a thought that erupted into this piece, very much in the moment.... I didn't plan on it.... so I appreciate your thoughtful comments and the generous list add.
You've been a great addition to my DU journey, Tim. Thanks for speaking out and calling things for what they are. I wish more people were as honest and forthright.
I wish you well in all your days ahead, my friend 🙏
🌹 - 💙
B
You've been a great addition to my DU journey, Tim. Thanks for speaking out and calling things for what they are. I wish more people were as honest and forthright.
I wish you well in all your days ahead, my friend 🙏
🌹 - 💙
B
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22nd May 2022 10:56am
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Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
29th May 2022 1:12am
Velvet! That u wrote went threw my soul and made me look at those words again! Such amazing eye grabbing u have in such small word form of poetry and this piece needs no change.
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Re: Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
7th Jun 2022 00:34am
I'm totally thrilled you enjoyed, S.
It was an off the cuff moment and I'm glad it worked on some level.
Appreciate the visit!
Be well
🌹 - B
It was an off the cuff moment and I'm glad it worked on some level.
Appreciate the visit!
Be well
🌹 - B
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7th Jun 2022 4:12am
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1st Jun 2022 6:25am
Dear B,
Wee hours change once personality. Sometimes it is hard to believe that such wild steamy ideas were crossing the mind with an action in the treasure valley when we wake up in the morning. I get up set when I can't recall it when I an awake. I love your sweet saucy words with added spices to make a moment crisp.
Love,
KS
Wee hours change once personality. Sometimes it is hard to believe that such wild steamy ideas were crossing the mind with an action in the treasure valley when we wake up in the morning. I get up set when I can't recall it when I an awake. I love your sweet saucy words with added spices to make a moment crisp.
Love,
KS
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7th Jun 2022 00:37am
You know how much I relish exploring the heat, passion and dephs to which we humans choose to dive..
It's wonderful seeing you and I'm grateful you stopped by leaving me your thoughts, KS
Much love and appreciation,
🌹B
It's wonderful seeing you and I'm grateful you stopped by leaving me your thoughts, KS
Much love and appreciation,
🌹B
Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
1st Jun 2022 4:02pm
Wow ! Exciting words and pic...
Do they suggest out-of-body experience and/or paranormal love?
Do they suggest out-of-body experience and/or paranormal love?
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1st Jun 2022 4:11pm
Wow, returned!! I believe those suggestions are totally on point, valid and (usually) only apparent by those select few who are able to transcend beyond, to see and feel, similarly....
I'm delighted you have the vision, dearest Marks!!
;)
Thanks for stopping by and feeling a bit of the excitement!! It's always a pleasure seeing you. ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
I'm delighted you have the vision, dearest Marks!!
;)
Thanks for stopping by and feeling a bit of the excitement!! It's always a pleasure seeing you. ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
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1st Jun 2022 4:21pm
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miss Blu
I never knew there were so many good uses for a pillow!
You truly squeezed those erotic thoughts out of yourself in such a nostalgic way
to somekind of marshmallow cliffhang!
A true sight to behold!
and a true fantasy to be that delightfully suffocating humble bedfellow of yours
(will I get a slap in the face for this?)
-CIU
I never knew there were so many good uses for a pillow!
You truly squeezed those erotic thoughts out of yourself in such a nostalgic way
to somekind of marshmallow cliffhang!
A true sight to behold!
and a true fantasy to be that delightfully suffocating humble bedfellow of yours
(will I get a slap in the face for this?)
-CIU
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Re: Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
3rd Jun 2022 9:48am
Of course no slaps!!
lol... Sometimes there's much emotion and eroticism to be found in the honesty that takes place in the dark shadows... ;)
I adore your comments, dear C-U.
and I'm glad you found some enjoyment.
🌹 - 💙
Always a pleasure ✨
-B
lol... Sometimes there's much emotion and eroticism to be found in the honesty that takes place in the dark shadows... ;)
I adore your comments, dear C-U.
and I'm glad you found some enjoyment.
🌹 - 💙
Always a pleasure ✨
-B
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Dec 2022 8:45pm
6th Jun 2022 9:32pm
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6th Jun 2022 9:32pm
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I'm not sure about anyone else, but this felt like a prayer. Perhaps because of the image, but there's a sense of spirituality within the erotic content, along with the aching and longing.
Great work.
Great work.
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5th Jul 2022 7:15pm
Thanks for seeing more than most, Walter.
It means a lot to me.
I appreciate you stopping by and leaving me your keen and insightful thoughts.
Glad you enjoyed
🌹 - B
It means a lot to me.
I appreciate you stopping by and leaving me your keen and insightful thoughts.
Glad you enjoyed
🌹 - B
Re. Nocturnal 'admissions'
5th Aug 2022 4:37am
A delicate moment preserved in poetry that is as enticing as it is beautiful. The image of a woman remembering her true love through self-pleasure is truly a treasure. I can see this in my mind and heart as it unfolds into the resonance of touch upon that place of spiritual joy. This is an everlasting painting that embodies the orgasm with passion soaring into bliss. I love this vision of a woman by you a woman. It touches my soul in ways of total happiness.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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I so adore where you mind travels, once you've soaked in the poem!! That's one of my favorite things about reading comments....I get to bask in the shared thoughts and all the various, delicious reactions.... What a treat!
There's various types of intimacy that partners can shared that are enormously impactful but there's such a different flavour of intimacy when you or your partner is self gratifying. For me, I'm completely and admittedly aroused by being the one participating in (being watched) , watching my partner, and even just KNOWING that my partner is or was self succumbing in the best of ways... Well damn, it's highly erotic and a big fetish; one I happily relish in.
This was just my little nod to that particular kink.
Again, your comments resonate perfectly and leave me all aglow, my lovely. I can't wait to see you visit in the future....
Much love and my deepest gratitude- ♡
🌹Susan
There's various types of intimacy that partners can shared that are enormously impactful but there's such a different flavour of intimacy when you or your partner is self gratifying. For me, I'm completely and admittedly aroused by being the one participating in (being watched) , watching my partner, and even just KNOWING that my partner is or was self succumbing in the best of ways... Well damn, it's highly erotic and a big fetish; one I happily relish in.
This was just my little nod to that particular kink.
Again, your comments resonate perfectly and leave me all aglow, my lovely. I can't wait to see you visit in the future....
Much love and my deepest gratitude- ♡
🌹Susan