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Haiku/Senryu, Nr.07 — 2020-2030
The scaffolding will
come down but a frightening
wall will have been built.
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 17th May 2022
| Edited 21st Oct 2023
Author's Note
Haiku/Senryu, Nr.06 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/442399-practice/
Haiku/Senryu, Nr.08 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/450565-haiku-senryu-nr-08-1950s-nuclear/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/442399-practice/
Haiku/Senryu, Nr.08 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/450565-haiku-senryu-nr-08-1950s-nuclear/
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Re. Haiku/Senryu, Nr.07 — 2020-2030
17th May 2022 11:55pm
Re: Re. Haiku/Senryu, Nr.07 — 2020-2030
15th Aug 2022 9:19pm
a belated reply ... umm, yep, it's scary. I'll go and plant some more spuds and onions.
Re. Haiku/Senryu, Nr.07 — 2020-2030
18th May 2022 5:09am
Dear J,
This piece makes me recall when the Berlin Wall came down and families who’d been separated were able to reunite. Powerful sentiments in this write. H🌷
This piece makes me recall when the Berlin Wall came down and families who’d been separated were able to reunite. Powerful sentiments in this write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Haiku/Senryu, Nr.07 — 2020-2030
15th Aug 2022 9:26pm
a belated reply ... thank you H.
Yes, it was a rime of hope ... but 77 new border-walls have been built around the world since 2001 - it would have been nice if it was 77 new bridges ...
Yes, it was a rime of hope ... but 77 new border-walls have been built around the world since 2001 - it would have been nice if it was 77 new bridges ...
Re. Haiku/Senryu, Nr.07 — 2020-2030
27th Jun 2022 9:38pm
Whether it's the US-Mexico, Berlin, or Jericho, they fall down one way or another.
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Re: Re. Haiku/Senryu, Nr.07 — 2020-2030
15th Aug 2022 9:28pm
That's certainly true, Wally - maybe it starts with bringing down walls with our neighbours ... and moving outwards from there. Sorry for the late reply. Josh.
Re. Haiku/Senryu, Nr.07 — 2020-2030
24th Apr 2023 8:17am
Re: Re. Haiku/Senryu, Nr.07 — 2020-2030
24th Apr 2023 8:32am
Hi, thank you for commenting. True; a lot of beliefs and systems will come tumbling down - it will be scary & messy. Josh.
Re. Haiku/Senryu, Nr.07 — 2020-2030
10th Apr 2024 7:21pm
no walls should be placed between each country or neighbor. Live freely. Place the walls around world leaders who are obliterating this planet.
Great write Josh,
Great write Josh,
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Re: Re. Haiku/Senryu, Nr.07 — 2020-2030
10th Apr 2024 9:52pm
Thank you -- {by 'walls' I'm meaning 'institutionalised embedded structures' but it was too many syllables for a Haiku/Senryu :) }