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The subtle velvety notes of apricot and caramel finished with the burning essence of spice-peppered aged oak
Carve me out
raw and hollow
splay open hidden crevices
exposing
a sweetened well kept rage
Tastebuds flux, tingling
instant endorphin rush
a rippling soft crush
slow pours... over open wounds
indistinguishable hushed-howls
painful 'lil pleasures
bold heated ecstasy
slow sips
gingerly savored
Twisted aromatics—
time strengthened tenacity
aged perfectly,
warm lips in spiced caress
A scintilla of sticky mouthfeel
gently sashays tongue swept sensation
rallying gumption
-stars haze to burnt-orange glaze-
Mysteries unfold
as legs and shoulders
release harbored up old
"On the rocks, please,"...
... flows free the bourbon gold.
Author's Note
Every now and then, only the delicious burn will do! Last night's mini sunset celebration on the porch, cheers-ing to poem #400! *tink* 🥃
Purists would look down on the order of 'on the rocks', but I really like the punch of initial flavor and then deeply enjoy the mellowing the ice cubes give it.
On hand, in the very infrequently used liquor cabinet— Buffalo Trace and Maker's Mark. Woodford Reserve is my special occasion go to ... but I like exploring new flavors/distilleries, too.
©Blu2022
Purists would look down on the order of 'on the rocks', but I really like the punch of initial flavor and then deeply enjoy the mellowing the ice cubes give it.
On hand, in the very infrequently used liquor cabinet— Buffalo Trace and Maker's Mark. Woodford Reserve is my special occasion go to ... but I like exploring new flavors/distilleries, too.
©Blu2022
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Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finished wi
13th May 2022 12:34pm
Re: Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finishe
13th May 2022 1:58pm
Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finished wi
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13th May 2022 12:49pm
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Re: Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finishe
13th May 2022 1:58pm
Thanks for the kind words, S!
I appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts.... it's always a super cool gesture and motivational impetus. ✨
Warm regards,
🌹 -
I appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts.... it's always a super cool gesture and motivational impetus. ✨
Warm regards,
🌹 -
Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finished wi
13th May 2022 2:09pm
Hoi hoi B.,
Hope this finds you well.
Beautiful imagery.
We all know speech to text, what we may try to invent speech to image. To make things a little extra adventurous. Not that you need that.
The 400th eh? Cheers to you.
And long may you run!
Kind regards, Gus
Hope this finds you well.
Beautiful imagery.
We all know speech to text, what we may try to invent speech to image. To make things a little extra adventurous. Not that you need that.
The 400th eh? Cheers to you.
And long may you run!
Kind regards, Gus
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Re: Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finishe
13th May 2022 2:25pm
Hey there, Gus!
I think there's always room for a 'lil more adventure!! ;) Charming thought, it's much appreciated, kind sir!
I appreciate your visit and you taking the time... thanks for the well wishes on my 400th... I never would have thought I could do that!.. It still is mind boggling..
Thanks again and I hope to see you again soon!
🌹 - 💙
B
I think there's always room for a 'lil more adventure!! ;) Charming thought, it's much appreciated, kind sir!
I appreciate your visit and you taking the time... thanks for the well wishes on my 400th... I never would have thought I could do that!.. It still is mind boggling..
Thanks again and I hope to see you again soon!
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finished wi
13th May 2022 2:35pm
Re: Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finishe
13th May 2022 2:37pm
It's one of the reasons why Scotland is on my bucket list!!! I like a good Scotch, too! lol...
😋 Yum!
Thanks for the not so subtle reminder... heh heh heh.... loved it.
🌹 - 💙
Cheers! 🥃
😋 Yum!
Thanks for the not so subtle reminder... heh heh heh.... loved it.
🌹 - 💙
Cheers! 🥃
Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finished wi
13th May 2022 2:55pm
Our uncle is retired military and he still works out everyday. He swears there is nothing like soaking tired muscles with a drink in your hand. We may have a drink afterwards, but we would probably the the first to drown in a bathtub after only one drink. Your description is so descriptive as if you're making love to every sip. Tight
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Re: Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finishe
13th May 2022 4:06pm
Thanks for that awesome compliment, Me. Your Uncle has a killer way to recoup from his daily workout, that's for sure... lol... I'm with you, I'd be under the table with just one...😂
Glad you enjoyed reading... cheers! 🥃
🌹 - 💙
B
Glad you enjoyed reading... cheers! 🥃
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finished wi
13th May 2022 4:38pm
Whew! Well, that was a delicious read. 🔥 How the hell am I supposed to concentrate on working now?? 🤪
❤️k
❤️k
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Re: Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finishe
13th May 2022 8:24pm
Ohhh k, that silky burn MUST be shared!! 😉
It's beyond awesome to have you visit, I can't tell you how much I enjoyed reading your NaPo poems, it was such a wonderful treat... I was immersed in such great talent... it was amazingly mesmerizing!!! Just fyi....
Thanks for the mouthwatering kind words... hahaha.. I hope it wasn't much of a distraction but maybe it made for a nice faux "liquid lunch".... lmao!! 😂
Glad you dug it - cheers, dear lady!!
🌹-🥃
—B
It's beyond awesome to have you visit, I can't tell you how much I enjoyed reading your NaPo poems, it was such a wonderful treat... I was immersed in such great talent... it was amazingly mesmerizing!!! Just fyi....
Thanks for the mouthwatering kind words... hahaha.. I hope it wasn't much of a distraction but maybe it made for a nice faux "liquid lunch".... lmao!! 😂
Glad you dug it - cheers, dear lady!!
🌹-🥃
—B
Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finished wi
13th May 2022 5:18pm
I very seldom drink. And if she needs one to be with me, she's thinking of someone else....
But after, Gentleman Jack with 3 cubes and then, unstirred, amaretto. I want to taste the differences in a single mouthful. And, that melting, and then the mingling, only slightly diluted....I like taste.
On my plate, the laste bite is the best bite, so I save those tidbits I most cherish.
In bed, the exact same aesthetic. Taste above all in the cherished proportions.
But after, Gentleman Jack with 3 cubes and then, unstirred, amaretto. I want to taste the differences in a single mouthful. And, that melting, and then the mingling, only slightly diluted....I like taste.
On my plate, the laste bite is the best bite, so I save those tidbits I most cherish.
In bed, the exact same aesthetic. Taste above all in the cherished proportions.
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Re: Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finishe
lol.... You made me literally laugh out loud, RT! I seldom drink either, it's maybe once or twice a year (give or take) but I have definitely developed an affinity, when I do partake!
Ohhh yes, to cherish those tastiest bits, absolutely! ... it's another way to build anticipation.... and heighten those sensations!
Maybe it's not about needing one to be with you but about her liking the feel of an occasional cocktail.... the exposure... that slow smokey change.... The heated, tingly sensation that both sipping her cocktail of choice, like an old fashioned and being in your presence can create.... doubled the intensity... a little bit risky... playful...
Just my thoughts..
I am dreamily pondering your last two sentences -
Always leave 'em wanting more....Mmm.
heh heh heh 😈
Thanks for stopping by... yours remain some of my favorite visits.
x
🌹 - B
Ohhh yes, to cherish those tastiest bits, absolutely! ... it's another way to build anticipation.... and heighten those sensations!
Maybe it's not about needing one to be with you but about her liking the feel of an occasional cocktail.... the exposure... that slow smokey change.... The heated, tingly sensation that both sipping her cocktail of choice, like an old fashioned and being in your presence can create.... doubled the intensity... a little bit risky... playful...
Just my thoughts..
I am dreamily pondering your last two sentences -
Always leave 'em wanting more....Mmm.
heh heh heh 😈
Thanks for stopping by... yours remain some of my favorite visits.
x
🌹 - B
Re: Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finishe
14th May 2022 1:06am
Yeah, I'm not really one to mince words.
When someone
Tells me that
He'd really like
To jump her,
I think,
How crass
To make
A dash;
I'd rather
Spend the evening
Sucking chrome
Right off
Her bumper!
When someone
Tells me that
He'd really like
To jump her,
I think,
How crass
To make
A dash;
I'd rather
Spend the evening
Sucking chrome
Right off
Her bumper!
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Re: Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finishe
14th May 2022 2:15am
Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finished wi
13th May 2022 6:24pm
Dear BV,
Make mine a double, please! Smokey, woodsy, peaty,
delicious-y. I really enjoyed the details in this write. I could almost smell the aroma. But I’ve been known to have these hallucinations before. 😏
Congratulations on #400. That is a tremendous accomplishment! Well done and brava! H🌷
Make mine a double, please! Smokey, woodsy, peaty,
delicious-y. I really enjoyed the details in this write. I could almost smell the aroma. But I’ve been known to have these hallucinations before. 😏
Congratulations on #400. That is a tremendous accomplishment! Well done and brava! H🌷
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Re: Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finishe
🥃*tink*🥃
I knew I could count on you!!!
Absolutely comin' right up!! ✌🏻 A double, it is!! ;)
I'm beyond thrilled that you felt this viscerally...
I was hoping that it all came through, so thank you .. Also much thanks on my benchmark... It still leaves me awed, Honoria... I tell you, in all seriousness, I never in a million years thought that I could write decent poetry much less 400 different ones!! (not that they're all decent... I wound never be so bold to think that!) I mean, Holy cow! 🤪😱🤯🐮 I know there are much more prolific writers here, which makes me speechless but I am fully grateful for simply making it to this 400th poem, the opportunities I've had here and the deep appreciation that I've developed for the writing process and those who take the time to leave their thoughts, encouragements and extremely helpful laughs with me.... I'm very very lucky!
We'll have to find a happy hour one day, dear lady!!
Until then, a very heartfelt cheers! 🥃
🌹 - 💙
B
I knew I could count on you!!!
Absolutely comin' right up!! ✌🏻 A double, it is!! ;)
I'm beyond thrilled that you felt this viscerally...
I was hoping that it all came through, so thank you .. Also much thanks on my benchmark... It still leaves me awed, Honoria... I tell you, in all seriousness, I never in a million years thought that I could write decent poetry much less 400 different ones!! (not that they're all decent... I wound never be so bold to think that!) I mean, Holy cow! 🤪😱🤯🐮 I know there are much more prolific writers here, which makes me speechless but I am fully grateful for simply making it to this 400th poem, the opportunities I've had here and the deep appreciation that I've developed for the writing process and those who take the time to leave their thoughts, encouragements and extremely helpful laughs with me.... I'm very very lucky!
We'll have to find a happy hour one day, dear lady!!
Until then, a very heartfelt cheers! 🥃
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finished wi
13th May 2022 7:21pm
Wow B...
The depths of sensory engagement
in this piece are astonishing...
Beautiful & brilliant...
Gleaming with ice cube cool & sophistication...
May you write many more beautiful works of art...
The depths of sensory engagement
in this piece are astonishing...
Beautiful & brilliant...
Gleaming with ice cube cool & sophistication...
May you write many more beautiful works of art...
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Re: Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finishe
13th May 2022 8:17pm
Hee hee hee...
I'm not a big drinker at all but when I do, I swing for the fences.... haha...
Thank you for the lovely sentiments and the generously kind list add. I am beaming!
Cheers! 🥃
🌹 - 💙
B
I'm not a big drinker at all but when I do, I swing for the fences.... haha...
Thank you for the lovely sentiments and the generously kind list add. I am beaming!
Cheers! 🥃
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finished wi
Love it how you seem to bring a little bit of yourself into the mix. Can never completely relax when reading this. There's something uneasy about it, like past regrets the whiskey, sorry bourbon, oh hell, what is it? is bringing out.
Lol. See...I'm all mixed up!
Lol. See...I'm all mixed up!
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Re: Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finishe
14th May 2022 1:38am
Thanks for the kind visit and for leaving me with your thoughts. It's much appreciated! I wasn't regretful while writing, so that's certainly interesting and one of the reasons why I enjoy poetry, –the subjectivity that artwork can bring!
Warm regards,
🌹 B
Warm regards,
🌹 B
Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finished wi
Congrats on the 400 poems. Then you must do something wild and crazy. Get down with your bad self. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman. 👙
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Re: Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finishe
14th May 2022 1:40am
Thank you so much for that congrats, Francisco!! It's always smile making to have you visit and leave such kind words!
You're awesome ;)
🌹 -
You're awesome ;)
🌹 -
Re: Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finishe
14th May 2022 2:33am
Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finished wi
15th May 2022 7:07pm
#400 _ Salute!
A much more impassioned and descriptive appreciation of bourbon. My creativity would have resulted in, " the belt of bourbon went down smooth and it F'ed me up!". Your verses are much more elaborate and discernible.
Our notes indicate bourbon makes you more pliable! : )
A much more impassioned and descriptive appreciation of bourbon. My creativity would have resulted in, " the belt of bourbon went down smooth and it F'ed me up!". Your verses are much more elaborate and discernible.
Our notes indicate bourbon makes you more pliable! : )
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Re: Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finishe
15th May 2022 9:47pm
heh heh... Maybe your notes are correct maybe not?? 🤷🏻♀️.... (ohh the mystery???!!)
😏---😉
Thank you for the kind words, dear Leo.
I deeply appreciate a fine stiff 🧐 cocktail 🥃, to be certain. Yet, I partake only sparingly... I really enjoy savoring those different inflections of flavor on my tongue and the brilliant warmth that softly makes it's way throughout.... my body.
;)
It's a pleasurable joy, L
🌹-💙
B
x
😏---😉
Thank you for the kind words, dear Leo.
I deeply appreciate a fine stiff 🧐 cocktail 🥃, to be certain. Yet, I partake only sparingly... I really enjoy savoring those different inflections of flavor on my tongue and the brilliant warmth that softly makes it's way throughout.... my body.
;)
It's a pleasurable joy, L
🌹-💙
B
x
Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finished wi
17th May 2022 1:34am
Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finished wi
17th May 2022 5:14am
That Poem Was So Ah Diddling, which, means also self calming. And, me too as I read. I looked forward to the next line.
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Re: Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finishe
17th May 2022 5:49am
Good evenin' Birchel :)
Ahh, cheers 🥂 to your very fine and extremely kind comments. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for taking time out to read and add my to your RL.. That's very generous, indeed.
I'm so glad you enjoyed!
lovely to meet you -
🌹-B
Ahh, cheers 🥂 to your very fine and extremely kind comments. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for taking time out to read and add my to your RL.. That's very generous, indeed.
I'm so glad you enjoyed!
lovely to meet you -
🌹-B
Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finished wi
17th May 2022 12:30pm
I will drink to your 4th Century this weekend with a bottle of Rum- umm correction, shot of Rum
and without the rocks,
but unfortunately it will not do justice to your excellent verse
-CIU
and without the rocks,
but unfortunately it will not do justice to your excellent verse
-CIU
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Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finished wi
17th May 2022 9:00pm
Mmm.
Warmth spreading smokey aftertaste.
Lovely way to celebrate 400.
(Wild Turkey Long Branch is one of my favorites)
Warmth spreading smokey aftertaste.
Lovely way to celebrate 400.
(Wild Turkey Long Branch is one of my favorites)
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Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finished wi
17th May 2022 9:00pm
Mmm.
Warmth spreading smokey aftertaste.
Lovely way to celebrate 400.
(Wild Turkey Long Branch is one of my favorites)
Warmth spreading smokey aftertaste.
Lovely way to celebrate 400.
(Wild Turkey Long Branch is one of my favorites)
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Re: Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finishe
17th May 2022 9:41pm
I completely concur and I've just added that Wild Turkey Long Branch to my shopping list, dear KP
Cheers! 🥃
Thank you for the recommendation
and for stopping by.
🌹-💙
Cheers! 🥃
Thank you for the recommendation
and for stopping by.
🌹-💙
Re: Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finishe
18th May 2022 2:50am
I’m a sentimental, not a connoisseur. Wild Turkey is what my Grandpa liked. Long Branch is where I was born.🙏
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Re: Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finishe
18th May 2022 3:10am
Awww, love that, KP. I totally relate, too. That's why I like to drink Dewars White label every so often; my dad introduced me to scotch (only that particular Dewars) which I used to loathe now I wholly enjoy it's depth (along with bourbon, too.) When I drink his favorite scotch out of his favorite cocktail glasses, it's almost like he's here with me...... What a comfort.
Thank you for sharing with me.
🌹 - 💙
B
Thank you for sharing with me.
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finished wi
19th May 2022 3:16am
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19th May 2022 3:29am
Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finished wi
27th Jun 2022 7:20pm
Read this a couple of times because my mind went somewhere else, as if it was all metaphorical and thought about when I used to drink.
Either way, it's an intriguing piece filled with vivid details and descriptions, like expertise - I'd thought you'd be a connoisseur or an excellent sales person.
Sold!
Either way, it's an intriguing piece filled with vivid details and descriptions, like expertise - I'd thought you'd be a connoisseur or an excellent sales person.
Sold!
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Re. The velvety burn, subtle notes of apricot and caramel, finished wi
20th Oct 2022 1:49am
You make this wine drinker desire something stronger and with fire. The bourbon feeling you celebrate is a flavor told in words that feel good to go down as I read. I have never ever come across a bourbon poem as luscious and delectable as this. You made the taste come alive with sensations so delicious I am enthralled.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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