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The hidden language weeping willows speak
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 30th Apr 2022
Author's Note
O'temp you dark skies
spill forth sins of bloody ink,
so repeats the guise
©BLU2022
spill forth sins of bloody ink,
so repeats the guise
©BLU2022
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Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
30th Apr 2022 6:27pm
Re: Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
30th Apr 2022 9:35pm
Glad you enjoyed my little dark truth nugget, R.
It's much appreciated.
🥀🖤🖤🥀
B
It's much appreciated.
🥀🖤🖤🥀
B
Re: Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
2nd May 2022 7:26pm
Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
30th Apr 2022 7:00pm
Re: Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
30th Apr 2022 9:34pm
When it pours from your darkened well of honesty, it always feels so good to purge loudly, eh?!?... Yesss, it really does!!
Thanks for the awesomely penned reply, C.
Your talents in senryú are truly bar setting.... And yes, right there with all others you covet in such talents, too... I assure you.
Thank you for sharing that with me!
🥀🖤🥀
B
Thanks for the awesomely penned reply, C.
Your talents in senryú are truly bar setting.... And yes, right there with all others you covet in such talents, too... I assure you.
Thank you for sharing that with me!
🥀🖤🥀
B
Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
30th Apr 2022 7:37pm
Such a haunting image with an equally cryptogoth poem...
Righteous darkness...
Righteous darkness...
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Re: Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
30th Apr 2022 9:31pm
Thanks for appreciating and venturing into my little jaunt of gothic truths... I am lucky to have your keen eye and truly insightful soul, stop by...
Glad you enjoyed my creation.
🥀🖤🥀
-B
Glad you enjoyed my creation.
🥀🖤🥀
-B
Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
1st May 2022 00:22am
Weeping Willows oh how they continue to inspire artists forever...
Amazing job B.👌👏👏👏
Amazing job B.👌👏👏👏
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Re: Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
2nd May 2022 7:27pm
Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
You are my weeping willow. Very beautiful poem. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
2nd May 2022 7:28pm
Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
1st May 2022 8:50am
At least two ways I can interpret this one! I hope sparking a readers inquisitiveness was a goal.
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Re: Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
2nd May 2022 7:29pm
It's always a goal!
Thanks for bringing your questing mind, deeply appreciate it.
Take care!
🌹 - B
Thanks for bringing your questing mind, deeply appreciate it.
Take care!
🌹 - B
Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
1st May 2022 1:35pm
Re: Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
2nd May 2022 7:26pm
Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
2nd May 2022 3:16pm
Re: Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
2nd May 2022 3:25pm
Hmmm... Maybe you're not the only 🧐🕵🏻♀️🔎🔍 secret sleuth?!?!?
Heh heh heh 😈 😏
Lovely seeing you, L
🌹 - 💙
xo
Heh heh heh 😈 😏
Lovely seeing you, L
🌹 - 💙
xo
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Re: Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
3rd May 2022 3:49pm
Hey there, Jay ;)
I'm sure those huge ancient trees see much....
Thanks for stopping by and taking a bit of time to ponder... It's always a highlight, my friend 🙏
Warmest thanks - 💙
🌹B
I'm sure those huge ancient trees see much....
Thanks for stopping by and taking a bit of time to ponder... It's always a highlight, my friend 🙏
Warmest thanks - 💙
🌹B
Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
3rd May 2022 4:04pm
Dear BV,
While my love for weeping willow trees is of little interest or bearing to your beautifully mysterious poem, it lends itself to the alluring seduction of that specific tree calling you in and hypnotizing the truth from you. It’s like the keeper of all secrets good, bad and indifferent. This is what this made me think about and the picture, how do you find these works that support your work so perfectly? It offers just the right amount of mystery and appeal that the words do. The balance is awesome. Lovely piece. H 🌷
While my love for weeping willow trees is of little interest or bearing to your beautifully mysterious poem, it lends itself to the alluring seduction of that specific tree calling you in and hypnotizing the truth from you. It’s like the keeper of all secrets good, bad and indifferent. This is what this made me think about and the picture, how do you find these works that support your work so perfectly? It offers just the right amount of mystery and appeal that the words do. The balance is awesome. Lovely piece. H 🌷
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Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
5th May 2022 10:55pm
You've done it again! How do you come up with this stuff? I like the brevity & impact of this piece. It's like you've nicked it from another great artist but I know you haven't cos I've not heard this epic yet plus you wouldn't anyway cos you don't need to, lol. I also like that pic of you looking up at the falling autumn leaves in your latest (for now) poem. It's fantastic in its naturalness. It's always best finding beauty in things we may often overlook. It's like, " Wow, you're great!" ya know?
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Re: Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
6th May 2022 00:06am
Hey there!
It's sometimes the image that draws my inspiration.. However this time I actually had to go searching for the perfect visual .... Lol... It was a chore, indeed! ...
Thank you so much for seeing what you see when you read, that means a lot! It's truly motivating to get such thoughtful feedback, which allows me to continue on my explorative path via poetry... What a treat!!
I'm delighted you enjoyed the pic from my most recent poem, as well... It's a favorite, for sure!
Warmest regards and appreciation -
🌹-B
It's sometimes the image that draws my inspiration.. However this time I actually had to go searching for the perfect visual .... Lol... It was a chore, indeed! ...
Thank you so much for seeing what you see when you read, that means a lot! It's truly motivating to get such thoughtful feedback, which allows me to continue on my explorative path via poetry... What a treat!!
I'm delighted you enjoyed the pic from my most recent poem, as well... It's a favorite, for sure!
Warmest regards and appreciation -
🌹-B
Re: Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
Lol, you'd continue your explorative path via poetry with or without my feedback because you have a seemingly bottomless well in which to fish from. You're a star. ;-)
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6th May 2022 1:03am
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9th May 2022 11:10pm
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10th May 2022 00:35am
Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
29th May 2022 4:51pm
I'll finish it.
Spill forth threw my days
I ah tell of this unvague
For this is my aluv u
Spill forth my count the ways
Spill forth threw my days
I ah tell of this unvague
For this is my aluv u
Spill forth my count the ways
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Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
23rd Jun 2022 4:18pm
Re: Re. The hidden language weeping willows speak
23rd Jun 2022 4:50pm
Awww... Yesss!!
You're so talented at visual poetry this comment means the world!
Thanks for sharing those thoughts, W.
You're awesome.
Glad you enjoyed
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You're so talented at visual poetry this comment means the world!
Thanks for sharing those thoughts, W.
You're awesome.
Glad you enjoyed
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