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The Carrot
Sometimes I think about
blowing my brains out.
I entertain the thought
until it brings me to the
part where I survive.
Yikes.
Some fates are worse
than death so I guess
it's time to get ready
for the day.
Yay.
blowing my brains out.
I entertain the thought
until it brings me to the
part where I survive.
Yikes.
Some fates are worse
than death so I guess
it's time to get ready
for the day.
Yay.
Published 18th Feb 2022
Author's Note
My photo.
I'd never kill myself. My ego wouldn't let me.
I'd never kill myself. My ego wouldn't let me.
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18th Feb 2022 8:32pm
18th Feb 2022 11:16pm
Anonymous
19th Feb 2022 1:03am
That is not a bad use for it. Probably what it's there for, TBH.
Nice convenience store photo
Nice convenience store photo
19th Feb 2022 7:39am
I think such a perspective is more common than
we would like to admit.
So strange...
I mean... Many belief systems are built around the idea
of breaking free of the Ego...
As if it does no good, or has no purpose.
But it does.
It has its virtues.
I think rather than eliminate
it can be more advisable to integrate...
To grow with all the elements
of one's self.
Nevertheless. A powerful, thought provoking piece.
Nicely done.
we would like to admit.
So strange...
I mean... Many belief systems are built around the idea
of breaking free of the Ego...
As if it does no good, or has no purpose.
But it does.
It has its virtues.
I think rather than eliminate
it can be more advisable to integrate...
To grow with all the elements
of one's self.
Nevertheless. A powerful, thought provoking piece.
Nicely done.
19th Feb 2022 9:23am
10th Mar 2022 4:34pm
Surviving the ordeal and being left in an incapacitated state...sounds pretty scary. But glad your ego has the upper hand.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
