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White Roses
We watched the dawn today
silent companions just a breath apart
and I gave you my voice
your words trembling through tears
Sunlight cleansed an open sill
no filter, no haze, succulent warmth awash in savory
particles sail direct yellow beams
ours is soaked, skin and hair
Twilight givings lay the fawn glisten to flowers
lone eyes of wilderness bright with wonder, shine
my sense of calm controlled by lilted leaf and apple blossom
earthen smoke wisp between trees, the far off cries, approaching deer
You live
through your poems
and I visit
everyday.
🌹
The poem in italics was written by Soul in word play Imagery Poem.
silent companions just a breath apart
and I gave you my voice
your words trembling through tears
Sunlight cleansed an open sill
no filter, no haze, succulent warmth awash in savory
particles sail direct yellow beams
ours is soaked, skin and hair
Twilight givings lay the fawn glisten to flowers
lone eyes of wilderness bright with wonder, shine
my sense of calm controlled by lilted leaf and apple blossom
earthen smoke wisp between trees, the far off cries, approaching deer
You live
through your poems
and I visit
everyday.
🌹
The poem in italics was written by Soul in word play Imagery Poem.
Published 17th Feb 2022
Author's Note
In memory of Gabriel Jackson @souladareatease who went to Glory on 18 Nov 2020.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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17th Feb 2022 11:52pm
The dawn is always beautiful to watch. His legacy lives on in you. Keep on writing.
18th Feb 2022 2:25am
18th Feb 2022 00:05am
I totally needed a dose of exactly, this!! ... The incredibly stunning beauty of every word that so clearly covets the natural world in Soul's unique poetic voice.... I always marvel at how he was able to so deeply understand language and apply that, in absolute perfection, to his love of nature. We're lucky to have you continue to share and turn on others to that talent and his lovely lovely poems.
Thank you for sharing with us Grace!
It's always such a treat
I love the avatar with all the blossoms!! 🌸
🌹 - 💙
B
Thank you for sharing with us Grace!
It's always such a treat
I love the avatar with all the blossoms!! 🌸
🌹 - 💙
B
18th Feb 2022 2:29am
Dear Blue, yes he was good with words when describing nature....he once said he couldn't let me too long in the city. Thank you for your constant support, B. 🌹Hugs🌹
19th Feb 2022 11:37am
20th Feb 2022 7:25am
