ashes to ashes

Super hot read, firey write beautiful
Love and light
Ron x

Thanks for feeling the heat of my flames... *wink
I'm delighted you liked it.

Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B

Thanks for visiting, Selina.
I wasn't quite sure about this one, so it's nice to read your amazing feedback.... Stoking flames into a poetic inferno of epic proportions, was the goal.... 😉.... I hope that it was conveyed...


I appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts...

🌹 - B

The bittersweet taste of smoldering desire....!!
xoxo

God, what a ride that was!

I'm extremely delighted you thought so, LV. Thanks for feeling the heat 🔥 with me.


🌹 - 💙
B

Dear Lady Blue, Mmmmmmmmm...this piece is so very seductive in it's sensual imagery so elegantly written...sapiosexual porn. When I read this passage, " Oh—how I burn over and over"  immediately I thought...she has got to record this🔥🥰🔥
This passage conjured delicious, high energy, elevating tingles,
"You, breathing in my lust
tasting the salty, decadent char
your mouth and tongue
thickly coated in me"
Bravissima, bella dea della poesia 🐻💕🐰

Ohhh myyy, BB!! 🔥🐻
I'm all aglow from the absolutely fiery essence of your thoughtful and deeply insightful sentiments. I think I'm enjoying the 'covertness' from which imagination must spring to (hopefully) properly construct and convey a metaphoric web to be intricately woven... I bask in the thought of tingly tingles... lol.... Yesss!!! That's exactly what I hoped to elicit. You have made me feel similar with your truly amazing feedback... 🔥💙🔥

Much love and... ✨ tingles ✨
🌹 - B

defined  
by igniting  
solar flares  
that carried  
on the  
cosmic currents  

our souls  
aflame  
like a  
dangerous  
burning
of a comet  

the trail  
of lust  
seen  
through  
the heavens  
high  

a ferocious.  
need only  
ancient gods  
possessed  
a hunger  
ocean deep  

we  
ravenously
drink.... taste  
of each  
others  
searing ambrosia  

a spicy  
recipe  
that is  
never  
truly  
forgotten  

signal fires  
of our  
passion  
light  
the world's  
darkness  

a lovers  
beacon  
torching  
scorching  
the skies  
above  

birth  
of a star  
true  
pure  
birth  
of  
us  
 
embers  
of the
big bang  
cosmic  
release  
in human form  

"signal fires  
of our  
passion  
light  
the world's  
darkness  

a lovers  
beacon  
torching  
scorching  
the skies  
above "

Your lines are like the wind's quiet song tinkling through the trees...

Thank you for being inspired and for sharing the fruits of that inspiration upon my page.
I'm humbly thankful - 💙
🌹 - B

You are rising from the ashes with orgasmic bliss.  My heart is beating for you.   Keep on writing.

Well, the bliss I'm continuing working on.... lol.
Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts, Francisco
🌹-

The more you work on it, the more you enjoy the wild ride.

This piece may have sat the erotic bar for this year, a tasty bit of soot covering our tongue. Super tight work Lady

heh heh heh... 🔥 👅
That's my favorite line, too..... Thanks for checking it out, Me. I always enjoy sharing something a little bit hot and spicy....

My night is exponentially better with the coveted 'super tight'... I'm humbly thankful for.


Much love and appreciation,
🌹 - 💙
B

Good God Woman!  
My fingers are getting clammy trying to type this reply, sliding all across my tablet, smearing inconceivable new words that make me babble-talk trying to recite them aloud.
I'm waving a white hankie; "Lawd, dat woman dun burnit down!".

This is searing quality.  What a great poem!

I was so moody tonight, just me battling my almost 49 year old hormone changes.... lol... And low and behold, your comments appear with such scintillating gusto!! I'm still giggling at "Lawd, dat woman dun burnit down!"... Omg 😂😂 😂
I hope you were able to step outside and cool off a bit— I kinda tease  😏  

I'm seriously thankful for the laughs and for you leaving me exactly what I needed for my mind, body and soul exactly when I needed it.

You definitely made my night - 💙
🌹 - B

Vivid... alluring... from start to finish... totally engaging... lost myself in the flow... buried in the ashes...

I do so love burning our twin flames! ... *wink


Thank you so much, S
Your kind words have left me all smiles (and almost annoyingly perky) ... lol


🌹-💙
—B

The "Fire Marshall" has his work cut out trying to sift through the metaphors of the would-be arsonist or a self-combustion cause. Very unique and requires thinking, which is great. Another example of your vast and unique talent my dear cherished poet. Hugs and peace, Oral, xoxo

Ohhh myyy... I love bringing you to the very brink of fiery oblivion, my dear Oral. It's teetering upon an a brink that we sometimes are able to really explore our deepest desires.... Experimenting with just how much heat we are able to withstand or maybe require?!?.... Mmmm.... Oh those thoughts where my imagination takes me!!!
You too, I'm guessing ;)

Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, it's always a deep deep pleasure ✨
🌹 - 💙
B

Hi Blue
Getting kinda over cooked over here., I look around me and wonder is Vesuvius at it again
I stand in your field of ashes
Yourds have a scorched mind policy
You leave me smouldering in your wake, I am bound speechless by your paintings.
You have incinerated my imagination
I am but Ash to your inferno

Love n peace always my friend
💜💜💜💜🙏🙏

Hey there, WM :)
It's wonderful to see you on my page 🦋 I'm totally thrilled that you were swept away into a whirlwind of super heated ash; that's some serious high praise, indeed!! I'm deeply thankful for it and so grateful you enjoyed sharing in the delicious burn!! 🔥🔥 🔥

Best wishes sent your way ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - B

Another intimate passionate write in which I picture candlelight late at night, just you & your lover. Have you ever heard the extended synth version of David Bowie's Ashes to Ashes? I stumbled on this poem as that song was playing. It's dreamy... Might be a good track to make love to but it only lasts 11 mins & 27 secs, which may not quite be long enough, lol. LINK: https://youtu.be/du_pVBhT4DE

Hey there!
Your comments are truly insightful and I will definitely check out the song recommendation! I always enjoy (and am humbled by) reading multiple perspectives and thoughtful takeaways inspired by my writings, It's truly motivational.
I deeply appreciate you taking the time to leave me your thoughts as well as a glimpse inside all the places that inspiration allowed your thoughts to take flight...

Warm regards,
🌹 - B

Awww... any comments are like pure gold and motivation, to me. I don't care if it's one word or a thousand!! ..... No worries, my friend 🙏🏻

Yes, there's definitely a combustible allure when accessing the deep depths of an intense erotic experience .... The bursting of conjoined twin fires that make you want to willingly beg to be turned to ash.....
🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥

Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, Tim.... I love to 'pick your brain'...

Much love, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - B

Beautifully stunning 👌

You're extremely kind, my dear poet 🙏🏻
Thank you for stopping by and taking a looksee, I deeply appreciate it and so very glad you found some beauty and worth.  

🌹 - B

The state of high emotions of sensuality that can't distinguish between sin and crime to appease those pent up feelings. I love the feelings evoke, smoke and then play as if waves are playing and then settle down at the end.
Great write. You are my morning glory.

Love,

KS

Hey there, KS
I love your comments and how you describe your perceptions from reading. The feelings and emotions you convey back to me, make me fully aware and totally immersive in your pov. What a wonderful treat that is!!! You, enjoying the fiery combustion of ardent desire, where fantasies melt into dreams come true, makes for some enormous, pleasurable satisfaction. I thank you deeply for sharing your thoughtful takeaways with me - 🙏🏻

Warmest regards,
🌹 - B

Nice to see the incendiary counterpoint to your Want³ poem. Great Yin yang balance.
❣️🙏🏼

You have to have balance, I believe.... thanks for that recognition, love


I am beyond pleased that you've seen what you've seen and have found something here that you find pleasure in, too...

🌹 - 💙
B

Scorched earth to cover your tracks.  Well, well, well, we'll see. Our forensic scientists may have an in row to your "carbon" dating.

You are surely classified as flammable and combustible, as is your poetry.  One must take special precautions in handling your burning desires or leave scorched.  🔥🧨😉

xxoo - 0088

Those scientists will have their hands full with the amount of energy and heat expulsion they're going to have to quantify!!! heh heh 😈

There's zero scorching when TWIN flames reach the same burning threshold, together ... Ohhh how I love when two roaring fires devour each other in the heat of a particular moment!!!

No worries, I'll leave you some aloe or ice 🧊 just in case.... 😉 😘 🩹

🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥
(Thank you my dear agent)

🌹 - 💙
xo

We love the burn, the glow, the afterglow, over and over again.
Very titillating write Blue.

Very kind comments, W
Thanks for the lovely visit, I'm glad to see you🦋 and I'm stoked you found some sexy stimulation, within. 🔥 🔥 🔥

🌹 - 💙
B

I’m a big fan of fire metaphors and the use of it in eroticism,


“exquisitely devastating
scalding a surrender
of pure carnal cremating

melting them away,

             
       ashes to ashes”

Perfect closing to a hot piece

Thanks, Gaps.
I appreciate the highlight; it's always a pleasure to find common 'interests'... Har Har...

Seriously, I deeply concur... fiery metaphors are a complete turn on... much obliged for the nod.

It's nice to have you visit 🦋
🌹 - B

Susan, you take that burning and bring it all into gorgeous ashes for an ending that is spiritual with burned relics of a passion that never ends. The sensory scents here remind me of the Arab perfume known as Oud made from the burnt scented agar tree. It has that raw scent of pure carnality like your delicious poem does. God girl, reading you is like entering an audiovisual performance like the Van Gogh one. I can't make it to the Van Gogh in New Orleans but I have your even more fantastic sensual lyrics to satisfy my soul.

Xo
John

My darling,
All of your amazingly beautiful comments and lovely feedback leave me utterly nourished and so truly cared for. I can't begin to thank you enough for showing up, reading and communicating with me the way only you do/can. I am so deeply and sincerely grateful you found your way back to my work and into my comments.
To say that I'm pleased your own soul is satisfied basking within my poetry, puts it far too mildly.
I'm enormously awed and humbled.

I adore you.....

Much love and respect,
-Susan