an unassuming conduit

Omg blue
Last line killed me, that was just the best line ever.
Love all the other lines before that too though.
I feel like your poem at times.
Wonderful read
💜💜💜💜

I an so stoked that you found that last line as potent as I hoped!! Yessss! That's an exciting and awesome takeaway my friend 🙏🏻 I deeply appreciate your visit and I'm incredibly grateful you take the time to read and leave your insightful feedback. It's a great motivator and help to spur my desire to keep my pen to paper!

My warmest thank you!!
🌹 - B
x

God o wish I write real poetry
That was awesome beautiful truly awesome
Love and light
Ron xx

Awww.... You're far too kind, Ron. I'm humbly thankful and I really cherish your thoughts and your generosity of continued readership. The awesome support and excellent encouragement you bestow me, is always deeply appreciated. Man, am I truly lucky and grateful!.... - 🙏🏻  

Thank you again, for the visit and all the goodness!

Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B

A hand-carved spoon to feed the inner being, orb woven, and subterranean...

Maybe it's just my bodies capability to harness electricity!? ...Hmmm... I was thinking about this experience —As a kid, I once went to our city's Museum of Science and Industry, where they had a ton of interactive hands on 'experiments' intended to show kids via different types of scientific properties and via fun and surprising ways. Fun that was meant to teach and for the kids to be marveled by...  I remember putting my palm down on one of the contraptions (I can't remember it's name, I was too little) and when all the other kids were only able to move the indicator needle (which I think measured your body's volts;electrical output or something like that ...).. to barely halfway, the needle went all the way to the other side, for me, Indicating that my output was even higher than what could be measured by the device! This memory has always stuck out for me because I was held there, "as an example" for what seemed like forever, because no one believed it. They all tried it with their hands, then made me go... again and again and again ... Even adults did this, It was crazy! I almost started to cry because I started to think something was wrong with me..... hahaha.... Obviously, there wasn't. Although I do notice that I'm unusually susceptible to static electricity... 😁

Long story longer.. that memory kind of spurred this piece.....a kernel of thought that grew...

🌹 - ⚡
x

The Orb Weaver, Francis...
The Subterraneans...Kerouac

The extremes of the extremes....

So, ironic, eh?

ironically, (or is it embarrassingly) I am not understanding....



Like I said previously, my little noodle is no comparison...
(eek!)

Francis, gay, was abandoned by Frost in the late 50's....as he became famous.

Kerouac poked a stick in the mother earth and humped the hole.

I had dandelion wine with Francis on his 83rd birthday....he said it would be the last bottle....it was.

Every birthday he would burn his 500+ rejection notices in the yard on a huge flat rock. Pink notices never stopped him.

Just wow! ..... You continually astonish me.... I am becoming Pavlov's dog.... salivating at just the sight of your avatar, in my greedy desire for further 'brain picking'..... sheesh...  


Deep thanks, RT
x

You have inspired us all.  Life is an Enigma.  You write from your heart and mind.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman  

An enigma, indeed! You definitely nailed it. Thanks for the sentiments, Francisco.
🌹 - B

You are truly welcome my beautiful strong smart sexy woman.

Pretty much every line of this poem counts.  Every word counts.  You have nailed ''brevity'' right there with it.
     Whispering from shadows

      Atune   (stay tuned....)

      Capturing mental images............
 
    Very well done, dear lady.

You really have me beaming, Robert! Thank you so much for your thoughtful insights. I tried my best to utilize each line, so you recognizing that, means a ton.

I'm glad you found enjoyment here, it's a true joy for me!

Much love and appreciation,
🌹 - 💙
xo
—B

(Whistle~Whistle)  
I am tickled that you can feel the energy of my poetic vibrations! You, picking up the signs and radiowaves, means the world and elicits such warmth and joy.  
 
I'm also a returned fan of yours, 100%!!  
Just more we seem to have in common! ... 😉 😘😏  
 
You bring me much bliss and mirth, sultry lady. The thoughts and insights you graciously share with me are valuable and truly meaningful.  
 
I can't help but look forward to seeing you visit!  
Much love,  
🌹 - 💙  
—B

That would be completely impossible!  
You're always welcome.  
🌹 - 💙  



(no need to comment or anything... )
I thought you might enjoy this.... a little sexy one you might have missed.... if you've already read, no worries!!
😉 - 💋
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/438964-the-blasphemy-of-wander/

If a machine gun could shoot lasers, it'd be like this powerful piece of yours.  Holy smokes!  
It's funny, because I was getting visions of flipping TV channels when reading this, and then I get to the end and hmm, there ya go!
You sure do cover a broad spectrum of subjects/ideas.  And you should!  It's empowerment as a writer. No fear!

I am beyond speechless, S.    
Your thoughts and opinions always leave me pondering deep; helping me to learn how to view ideas differently from new and very impactful places. I deeply cherish those feelings you've had a hand in allowing me to uncover for myself as well as the wise perspective from which you shine so bright. I adore you noticing my attempt at variety or not trying to hang my hat continuously on personal erotic passions or sex sex sex....Sometimes I scroll through DUP and that's all I seem to find!.. hahaha (ok, maybe I'm looking for it!.. lol. 😉 ) ... I can't or would never knock it, because I'll always be a fan and it'll always be yummy subject matter that I'll write about. However, it's definitely not all that I want to say.... Not even close. I'm reminded of another poetess here and I think I agree 100% with. She wrote about how she's tired of (from her POV) rehashing the same ol same ol and how sometimes we can become so bored or predictable with ourselves. (I'm greatly paraphrasing her from memory ) She's a wise and very loved friend, so those thoughts of agreement with her, popped into my head, when reading your comments.... She's spot on, though... Branching out, writing on whatever floats your boat, is imperative and a wonderful tool to help improve one's writing skills... At least I like to believe that it does!!! 📝  
    
Sorry for the long reply... lol.... I do  get on a roll!!.. ha!    
  
Again, I am incredibly grateful for your thoughtful feedback. It's always a true pleasure seeing you on my page 🦋    
🌹-B    
x

Miss B,
Writing is deeply motivating.  Even if it's just to spill our guts and brains.  It's also a tonic to what ails us.  
I don't just read, I learn.  We all benefit from an author's journey, not just them.  
So take us where your words are going.  We're your audience.  We don't get to decide where.  Lol.

Nice reminder!
gotcha. 👌🏻


🌹 - x

Dreams while regenerating in a Borg alcove.  Very James Joycian... love it.

Ha!... lol....Resistance is futile!
Nicely put, Lawrence! Thanks for visiting, the kind words and the smile I'm now wearing this morning....

I appreciate it muchly!
🌹 - 💙
x

This was an awesome piece that speaks to the soul. Once again another beautiful write.

Hey, CS
It's great to see you and I'm stoked that you came to visit. I dig the kind words and I'm glad you enjoyed my thoughts on inspiration and creativity.

I hope your new year is treating you well and continues to do so!
🌹 - 💙
B

Hey there, my friend ;)  
Your lovely LOVELY sentiments are felt immeasurably. I do hope that my essence is thoroughly enjoyed, especially if I've been unknowingly lucky enough to leave lingering affects.... Hee hee hee.... You have me silly grinning, Jay 😁.... Thank you, dear poet.  
 
I'm so grateful for you,the generous list add and I'm beyond delighted you enjoyed reading.  
🌹 - 💙  
x

your antenna
is briadcasting
on full power
blasting out
into vast
universe

its frequency
is on all
cosmic channels
louder than
the big bang
you are recieved

a revered station
of midnight
wonder
the best
songs of the heart
play nightly

Colin!! I do so love seeing your kilted legs this morning ☀ 🦵🏻..... heh heh heh! 😏  
Glad yer back, my dear- x

So, this lovely poem-ply, eh!?!? (that's poem/reply)  
I love love love that last line... (the rest, too but that last line really stuck with me....  
"The best songs of the heart play nightly"

First - Don't disappear from DU out of the blue.
Second - I dig (completely) that you are so inspired by my poem to reply in kind. That's seriously the BEST compliment!  
Third - This last line that I like so much, might need to be flushed out into something more, as it's truly inspired wording....Just my thoughts...  

Lastly -
I'm beyond appreciative 🙏🏻
Thank you, my friend
.... for everything.  
Keep up all your hard work and progress, I believe in you.
🌹 - 💙
B

i hear your heart song
broadcasting every night ~ on
the radio of love

Wow!!  
I think I missed this one's notification!  
Marvelous senryú, Colin!  
👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻  
 
🌹 - 💙  
B

This is sort of subject matter requires great courage and superhuman strength
to begin to broach.

I greatly admire your resolve.

And the outcome of this is powerful.

I like the metaphors of electricity and radio signals.

You know...

I think writing in the night permits unique access to unique "signals and electricity."

Some cite Schumman Frequencies, while others deny that such things exist.

I was just thinking...

Yesterday.  How 3 am is a very interesting window.

I write really anytime.

But 3 am is an interesting region to explore.

(That is actually the time of the Schumann Frequencies.)

I like the "scents of ozone and sense of metal"...

Just brilliant.

This is such a cool write.

Hey there, Cipher ;)
I absolutely feel the additional tingle or current that travels throughout the night air... perhaps thinning the veil... allowing for better access to creativity and helping those juices to flow freer...

I'm totally stoked that you found some cool things within my writing, it makes for smiles and much pride.  

Love seeing you, my dear🦋
🌹 - 💙
xo
S

I can smell the ozone and feel the energy.
❣️🙏

Ohhh how those comments leave me buzzing, KP! I'm so glad that you could see and feel my words, like you described ;)  To me, it's a little bit of magic and tiny bit of mystery, where we pluck our thoughts and inspirations from; that's always interested me to write about, so I appreciate your feedback  

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me. I always look forward to see you 🦋

🌹 - 💙
B

This reminds me very much of Ginsberg, his unabashed jazz, it was at once surprisingly visceral and also rather ethereal as I let the meanings as they struck me sink in, so like Ginsberg I've been going over it for several minutes. I sounded it out quickfire and then more contemplatively. This would really be served by an audio methinks, anyhow your word choices are rather gorgeously inspired. On allpoetry the few comments I got were about the word choices in my new writing like chassis and nucleus, to me it's just the words that occurred to me because they fit my meaning most precisely.

Hey there Daniel :)  
I had briefly considered doing audio for this one but it's never easy for me to record. It's gotten way way better with numerous tips from you and others, that alone has improved my capabilities reading and recording spoken word, exponentially.  I'm between 20 and 30 recordings done, I think now. Yet even so, it's still never an easy task. lol... I might revisit that notion, though.  
 
The care you took, giving me your feedback, really makes for such a positive and rewarding 'exchange' between us. I'm beyond lucky to be so fortunate. Yeah, I always read aloud my poems before I publish them just to make sure I can hear them in my head and see them on the page and that completely coincides. So I am with you there...  
 
I feel like I got a gold star 🌟 from you when you said that you like my word choices... lol.... and dammit I'll absolutely take it!.... hahaha. You might have had those words just occur to you, to include in your poetry because you are you— with a vocabulary unlike most, so I'm not surprised that some allpoetry members made comments to that effect.... I love language and really enjoy keeping my writing comprehensible without anyone needing a dictionary but perhaps with little nuggets of words that aren't as common or structuring a phrase a bit differently than usual.....  
 
Your comments and insights are invaluable to me. Thank you for taking the time you have. I greatly appreciate you!  
🌹 - 💙  
Susan

It's always wonderful to talk with you Susan. Thank you sweetheart. I hope you've been well.

I know I've said this plenty of times but you are an inspiring poetess.  Tight metaphors Blue, I like this.

Wow, Remy!, Thank you.
Yours are kind words that I humbly cherish and fully appreciate. I'm delighted that you found inspiration and dug the metaphors, that lifts me up, to read. Truly.

All my best wishes for creativity to bloom bright.
Much love,
🌹 - B
x

"atune  
of born sensitivity  
deciphering pain  
reconstructing sorrow  
caressing joy into  
momentous happiness  
or layered hatred  
prevailing in an atom bomb fire-rage  
fostering a formulation  " this whole stanza was like magic, just a few of the examples of what inspires and fuels our creativity to write and express ourselves.

It's pretty amazing blue.

Thank you very much, Walter!
I'm so so glad you could feel where I was going, that's what's so amazingly cool....and meaningful.

So grateful and appreciative 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
B

Great work!

It reads like a pulsating R.K.O. transmission tower of perpetually staccato money shot superlatives in full ADHD auto reload dispensation mode!
Clearly your muse had her Wheaties for breakfast that day.

Reminds me of what Colbert does to introduce his "Meanwhile" segment on The Late Show. Very cool!

Hey there, Midnight S!

That's exactly the idea 💡... I'm soo impressed that you totally nailed that RKO transmission vibe, I was going for!!! That made my night!!  Yes, I am a sucker for superlatives and find myself often over using but I just cannot help it sometimes...I love descriptive poetry... I am who I am.  ha!!

Yes, super charged that day, indeed. 💪🏻

Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me... it means so much to be able to read other's insights and takeaways... I know it makes me a better writer... without a doubt.

I've really really enjoyed your style and your distinct poetic voice...I need to stop by again and say as much!..Soon! 🤞🏻

Warm regards and much appreciation,
🌹 - 💙
B