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exfoliating need.

   
 
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†hard pelting †  
†my skin †  
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†the pain †away †  
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leaving †  
me smoother †  
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before †  
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again, †  
supple † †  
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able † †
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fully †  
drink † †
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all of you. † †
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Bluevelvete
Written by Bluevelvete
Published | Edited 5th Jan 2022
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© Blu2021
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