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exfoliating need.
dense sands
scour
c r
i a
r l
c u
hard pelting
my skin
eroding
the pain away
leaving
me smoother
than
before
again,
supple
able
to
fully
drink
in
all of you.
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Re. exfoliating need.
5th Jan 2022 00:18am
Do you need a hand checking for softness lol
Great write beautiful
Love and light
Ron x
Great write beautiful
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. exfoliating need.
5th Jan 2022 1:55am
I girl always loves knowing that she feels good to the touch!! ;)
Glad you enjoyed it, Ron!
I appreciate the RL add and the kindness of your feedback!
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Glad you enjoyed it, Ron!
I appreciate the RL add and the kindness of your feedback!
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re. exfoliating need.
5th Jan 2022 1:01am
My mind goes weird with your poems, dear. You write supple......I read nipples. Kisses, Robert.
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Re: Re. exfoliating need.
Hahahaha... I hope it's a good thing!
Thanks for stopping by and taking a gander at my nipples... whoops 🤭, I mean my supple skin.... heh heh heh 😈
Much obliged, my friend!
🌹 - 💙
B
Thanks for stopping by and taking a gander at my nipples... whoops 🤭, I mean my supple skin.... heh heh heh 😈
Much obliged, my friend!
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. exfoliating need.
5th Jan 2022 1:08am
I wish I could join you in the shower, LOL. You are setting me on fire. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. exfoliating need.
5th Jan 2022 1:52am
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5th Jan 2022 1:54am
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5th Jan 2022 2:59am
Re. exfoliating need.
5th Jan 2022 1:15am
This write brought out the best of you ( whatever parts that may be ).
hugs,
buddhakitty
hugs,
buddhakitty
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Re: Re. exfoliating need.
5th Jan 2022 1:28am
It definitely made them glow!! ✨ 💫 ✨
lol...
Thanks for reading, bk
I always deeply enjoy your thoughts ;)
🌹 - 💙
xo
—B
lol...
Thanks for reading, bk
I always deeply enjoy your thoughts ;)
🌹 - 💙
xo
—B
Anonymous
- Edited 10th Feb 2022 2:45pm
5th Jan 2022 2:23am
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Re: Re. exfoliating need.
Ohhh you inspired and I changed my little curve to a yummy circle, too! 😶🤭 😈 👌🏻
The 'circular' did exactly what I had hoped, sultry lady! So very glad you could feel the intensity that I hopefully exuded....
It's always my delightful pleasure to see and read your thoughts ✨
All my warmest appreciation and thanks.
💋
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
The 'circular' did exactly what I had hoped, sultry lady! So very glad you could feel the intensity that I hopefully exuded....
It's always my delightful pleasure to see and read your thoughts ✨
All my warmest appreciation and thanks.
💋
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
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Anonymous
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Re: Re. exfoliating need.
I awoke to this comment, reading it while drinking my morning coffee.... feeling an intense heady warmth permeating ..... everywhere.
You're such an amazingly sensual being, Selina. I completely revel in your admission. With such divine pleasure pulsing a need, I funnel all of my searing passion that's been generated straight into vast imagination, where it continues to swell and stir such rich, creative juices.....
Thank you for sharing your truth with me.... it's going to eventually make for another (hopefully) delicious morsel to share..... Muah! 😘
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
You're such an amazingly sensual being, Selina. I completely revel in your admission. With such divine pleasure pulsing a need, I funnel all of my searing passion that's been generated straight into vast imagination, where it continues to swell and stir such rich, creative juices.....
Thank you for sharing your truth with me.... it's going to eventually make for another (hopefully) delicious morsel to share..... Muah! 😘
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re. exfoliating need.
5th Jan 2022 2:56am
The magic of the "circular" finds satisfaction in being invited in. WOW the magic is created. A+, and, again, my different and amazing blue-eyed poet. Hug and kisses.
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Re: Re. exfoliating need.
5th Jan 2022 2:44pm
That you for seeing a little bit of magic here, dearest Oral... ✨ 💫 ✨
Your comments are truly motivating and very much appreciated - 🙏🏻
Much love, - 💙
🌹 - B
xo
Your comments are truly motivating and very much appreciated - 🙏🏻
Much love, - 💙
🌹 - B
xo
Re. exfoliating need.
5th Jan 2022 3:51am
Now i want to retake my shower!
Your awesome idea with this, put to a great little, almost coercion like, poem.
Outstanding!
Your awesome idea with this, put to a great little, almost coercion like, poem.
Outstanding!
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Re: Re. exfoliating need.
heh heh heh 😈😏
Sometimes an idea is a a lightning strike of inspiration... at times, mixed with an abundance of innate need to sexify and stimulate.
I'm a sucker for touching smooth skin and just let that thought run away to where I followed...
To get an 'Outstanding' means that I'm not the only fan... ;)
Glad you enjoyed reading - your thoughts are valuable to me - 💙
🌹 - B
x
Sometimes an idea is a a lightning strike of inspiration... at times, mixed with an abundance of innate need to sexify and stimulate.
I'm a sucker for touching smooth skin and just let that thought run away to where I followed...
To get an 'Outstanding' means that I'm not the only fan... ;)
Glad you enjoyed reading - your thoughts are valuable to me - 💙
🌹 - B
x
Re. exfoliating need.
5th Jan 2022 6:15am
She comes with special effects!
I just adore the lights going off in my mind,
as your wonderful words caressed my eye balls. (being silly)
:)))
This is wonderful Blu.
I just adore the lights going off in my mind,
as your wonderful words caressed my eye balls. (being silly)
:)))
This is wonderful Blu.
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Re: Re. exfoliating need.
Sometimes silly 😋 can get you through the day... I never discount it's powerful affects.... *wink.
Thanks for those giggle worthy comments, I love them, so!!!
My mood is lightened and breezier and the gratitude I have is all yours, dear poet!
Happiness via my deep grin 😁 is contiguous... I hope you can feel it's charms ✨ 💫 ✨
Soooo glad you found a bit of enjoyment, here—
🌹 - 💙
xo
Blu
Thanks for those giggle worthy comments, I love them, so!!!
My mood is lightened and breezier and the gratitude I have is all yours, dear poet!
Happiness via my deep grin 😁 is contiguous... I hope you can feel it's charms ✨ 💫 ✨
Soooo glad you found a bit of enjoyment, here—
🌹 - 💙
xo
Blu
Re. exfoliating need.
5th Jan 2022 3:43pm
Beautiful, Lady Blue. The subtle sensuality is wonderful and the bathing metaphor is effective coupled with vivid imagery. I love the title and clever formatting. This stanza says volumes to me,
"again,
supple "
Bravissima, poetic goddess💖🐻💕🐰
"again,
supple "
Bravissima, poetic goddess💖🐻💕🐰
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Re: Re. exfoliating need.
6th Jan 2022 00:16am
Good evening, BB! 🐻💞🐰
I hope the new year is treating you well! I very much appreciate you taking the time to leave me your thoughts🤍 as they always instill me with confidence and hope. This was just a little lightning strike of inspiration and kind of just came to me .... lol...Although I am a huge proponent of exfoliation, keeping your skin as supple as possible, especially getting older!! 🙆🏻♀️..
🧽🛁🧼
I'm all smiles, seeing you and knowing that you found some 'nice clean fun' here.... Well, as clean as it gets with me!.. heh heh heh 😈... You always bring such loveliness and joy....
All my warmest appreciation and deep gratitude,
🌹 - 💙
xo
—B
I hope the new year is treating you well! I very much appreciate you taking the time to leave me your thoughts🤍 as they always instill me with confidence and hope. This was just a little lightning strike of inspiration and kind of just came to me .... lol...Although I am a huge proponent of exfoliation, keeping your skin as supple as possible, especially getting older!! 🙆🏻♀️..
🧽🛁🧼
I'm all smiles, seeing you and knowing that you found some 'nice clean fun' here.... Well, as clean as it gets with me!.. heh heh heh 😈... You always bring such loveliness and joy....
All my warmest appreciation and deep gratitude,
🌹 - 💙
xo
—B
Anonymous
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5th Jan 2022 8:41pm
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Re: Re. exfoliating need.
5th Jan 2022 8:58pm
There he is!
I was hoping you'd stop by :)
(blushes)
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, Jay. I am completely delighted you enjoyed reading. It was a little stroke of inspiration that I hoped didn't come across as hokey...So, I very much appreciate your feedback! 🙏🏻
Much love and happiness wishes sent your way ✨
Always a pleasure (and a favorite visit!)
🌹 - 💙
B
I was hoping you'd stop by :)
(blushes)
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, Jay. I am completely delighted you enjoyed reading. It was a little stroke of inspiration that I hoped didn't come across as hokey...So, I very much appreciate your feedback! 🙏🏻
Much love and happiness wishes sent your way ✨
Always a pleasure (and a favorite visit!)
🌹 - 💙
B
Anonymous
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Re: Re. exfoliating need.
5th Jan 2022 11:09pm
Re. exfoliating need.
7th Jan 2022 1:29am
Then a careful application of shea butter lotion to keep everything smooth, moist and supple.
💆♀️🧴
💆♀️🧴
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Re: Re. exfoliating need.
7th Jan 2022 4:45am
It really is an absolute must, you're quite, right!! 👍🏻💯🧴🧏🏻♀️🦵🏻🦶🏻👏🏻💆🏻♀️🛀🏻🧴💯
xo
*wink
xo
*wink
Re. exfoliating need.
7th Jan 2022 9:48am
Re: Re. exfoliating need.
7th Jan 2022 1:42pm
Much appreciated, LilD!
🌹 - 💙
Hope you're having a lovely start to the new year!
x
🌹 - 💙
Hope you're having a lovely start to the new year!
x
Re. exfoliating need.
8th Jan 2022 10:06am
Re: Re. exfoliating need.
Yessss!!... hahaha...
I just love it, eightmore!! My Saturday morning just started off with such smiles.
Thanks for that.
🌹 - B
☺ 😁
I just love it, eightmore!! My Saturday morning just started off with such smiles.
Thanks for that.
🌹 - B
☺ 😁
Re: Re. exfoliating need.
8th Jan 2022 2:21pm
I just could not resist. You raised the thought. It wasn't that hard. Glad I could help make a smiley Saturday morning more satisfactory. LOL
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Re. exfoliating need.
10th Jan 2022 9:10am
Exfoliation.....
Literally scrubbing death away....revealing nearly raw skin....back to basics...stripped down a layer or two.....
Enso....
......the Zen calligraphy circle....the power to create...no dust, no mirror, only pure, direct light....shadowless....raw, naked mindfulness.
Prometheus laid bare on a rock for the eagles to pluck.....punishment for bringing fire, enlightenment....
The end of annoyance, judgement, objectification, the subject laid open for inspection, submission to what is, the vibration of one with its infinite facets in the eternal diamond of infinity....
That circular....
The cycle of birth, life, death, rebirth....the skin that houses the soul, the casual sip of tea, the cup, the container, the vessel, the exquisite given for display in the house of touch....
Ineffable....the highly effable.....self-affable....tenderness retenderized...texture given new life.
Smooth, gliding, guiding, sensual, the point of intersection between the body, the mind, the heart, and the soul....
The gift of being without any friction....giving the final touch of hope....satisfaction....immersion in the ritual of complexion without compare....the metaphor of being ready....shaved legs, sugared...wet, without panties, gilded in nothing but skin....
It's amazing what a few words can bring to mind.
Literally scrubbing death away....revealing nearly raw skin....back to basics...stripped down a layer or two.....
Enso....
......the Zen calligraphy circle....the power to create...no dust, no mirror, only pure, direct light....shadowless....raw, naked mindfulness.
Prometheus laid bare on a rock for the eagles to pluck.....punishment for bringing fire, enlightenment....
The end of annoyance, judgement, objectification, the subject laid open for inspection, submission to what is, the vibration of one with its infinite facets in the eternal diamond of infinity....
That circular....
The cycle of birth, life, death, rebirth....the skin that houses the soul, the casual sip of tea, the cup, the container, the vessel, the exquisite given for display in the house of touch....
Ineffable....the highly effable.....self-affable....tenderness retenderized...texture given new life.
Smooth, gliding, guiding, sensual, the point of intersection between the body, the mind, the heart, and the soul....
The gift of being without any friction....giving the final touch of hope....satisfaction....immersion in the ritual of complexion without compare....the metaphor of being ready....shaved legs, sugared...wet, without panties, gilded in nothing but skin....
It's amazing what a few words can bring to mind.
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Re: Re. exfoliating need.
Amazing.... yes, it's indescribably amazing when your spectrum is generously including me and I'm finally able to really see.... with fresh eyes.....
*multiple sighs
...
Hands down, the best comments I've received... to date.
- x
*multiple sighs
...
Hands down, the best comments I've received... to date.
- x
Re. exfoliating need.
10th Jan 2022 7:51pm
A dirty poem with a clean (and soapy) process.
Rinse, lather and repeat.
Well done.
Rinse, lather and repeat.
Well done.
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Re: Re. exfoliating need.
Ya don't have to read the bottle instructions for this kinda cleanse.... Har Har Har.... 😏😂
(What a bad /hokey joke.... lmao!)
Thanks so much, Walter.
I am so so glad you enjoyed reading and I'm really appreciative of the generous list add.
Warm and hydrating well wishes,
🌹 - 🧼-
B
(What a bad /hokey joke.... lmao!)
Thanks so much, Walter.
I am so so glad you enjoyed reading and I'm really appreciative of the generous list add.
Warm and hydrating well wishes,
🌹 - 🧼-
B
Re. exfoliating need.
16th Aug 2022 4:02am
Your shower was a thing of erotic legend. Visualizing you in that steam and heat made me crave what you have painted so brilliantly. There is genius in your sensuality that grasps me and sends me into a whirlpool of emotion and passion. The touch of your words is a satiny caress that keeps me enthralled by your poetry.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. exfoliating need.
17th Aug 2022 6:01am
You're so devilishly delightful!!
I giggle in adoration of your sensuality and love that you're kind enough to think me an erotic legend, my dear. I am humbled that this little shower scene was so wonderfully penetrative for you. It gives me a jolt of pleasure knowing that impact!
🌹💙-🚿
xo
S
I giggle in adoration of your sensuality and love that you're kind enough to think me an erotic legend, my dear. I am humbled that this little shower scene was so wonderfully penetrative for you. It gives me a jolt of pleasure knowing that impact!
🌹💙-🚿
xo
S