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exfoliating need.

   
 
   
dense sands    
scour    
   
    c      r  
  i           a  
  r           l  
     c   u    
      
 hard pelting    
 my skin    
   
eroding    
 the pain  away    
   
leaving    
me smoother    
than    
before    
   
again,    
supple      
   
able    
to    
fully    
drink    
in    
   
   
   
   
   
   
all of you.    
   
   
Bluevelvete
Written by Bluevelvete
Published | Edited 5th Jan 2022
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© Blu2021
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