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Re. Washing Dishes in the Dark (Take 2)
27th Dec 2021 9:16am
Re: Re. Washing Dishes in the Dark (Take 2)
31st Dec 2021 9:47pm
Thanks Nora, I do have to say that even with the lights on I’ve stabbed myself.
Have a Happy New Year
Have a Happy New Year
Re. Washing Dishes in the Dark (Take 2)
27th Dec 2021 10:57am
Re: Re. Washing Dishes in the Dark (Take 2)
31st Dec 2021 9:48pm
Re. Washing Dishes in the Dark (Take 2)
27th Dec 2021 11:59am
lol... I thought I needed new 👓 glasses trying to read the first one.... hahaha...
Clever, all around! Poem and visual... Thanks for Illuminating us (and for the candle!.. lol)
Enjoyed the giggle 🤭
🌹 - B
Clever, all around! Poem and visual... Thanks for Illuminating us (and for the candle!.. lol)
Enjoyed the giggle 🤭
🌹 - B
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Re: Re. Washing Dishes in the Dark (Take 2)
31st Dec 2021 9:51pm
Blue, I’m glad it made you giggle. We lost power for a bit during a storm, needless to say, it’s a little hard to do some chores without electricity. Then again I know you’ve experienced hurricanes.
Re. Washing Dishes in the Dark (Take 2)
28th Dec 2021 2:12am
Love your humor, Wally, and where your mind takes you when washing dishes. I have discovered that the everyday, seemingly mundane chores have always provided an opportunity for thoughtful discourse between myself and the world.
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Re: Re. Washing Dishes in the Dark (Take 2)
31st Dec 2021 9:53pm
Thank you Ahavati. I find myself composing poems or having ideas for a poem at odd times. If you’re familiar with the Walk Hard movie, my wife tells me to stop composing poems while we’re having conversations when I start rhyming out of nowhere.
Re. Washing Dishes in the Dark (Take 2)
Anonymous
30th Dec 2021 7:45pm
Take 1 was so dark that I whacked my funny bone on the counter looking for the poem. I didn't think you could top that, but I stand corrected. You've become a master of the visual poem while my back was turned.
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Re: Re. Washing Dishes in the Dark (Take 2)
1st Jan 2022 00:59am
Johnny, thanks for the comment and RL. I'm afraid my poetry will hurt people (jk). Yes, take one was just a gag, this take is still a little hard to read, but you know I like to make it fun.
Have a Happy New Years.
Have a Happy New Years.