Your Pensive Smile

Ah, the dreaded long distance love...so close but so far...you bring it all together here with your smiling art...that's a like from me

There is a smile but that damn dreaded longing too ...

Thanks Tim ....

I initially thought this piece was about a lover but it's certainly about a love of sorts.

A little of both Billy
A lot going on to react to ...

Thanks B

Hmm, this one makes me.... pensive. Lots to contemplate here. (Or maybe it's just the wine.) Anyway... I like the mystery, and you can never go wrong with a little longing. 👍
❤k

Combo bourbon and rye here, like to make my own...
Mystery always good in matters of state ..

Xo

Always let out your true desires.  Keep on writing.

Will do Mister

Hey PS

The longing in this write can be felt. Well chosen words throughout.
That painting has little scribbled symbols all over it. In my minds eye I
even see a few yellow scribbled square post-its:)

I want the reader to feel the longing
Identify with it
Write love notes on post-its
Never send them
Fear cuts deep
Outlaws on the run

Dear PS,

Excellent. Totally relate to this poem. Felt guilty about these feelings for years. Not any more though. Adopted the “F” it approach to guilt. Life’s short. Busting a move. I think the painting is a great representation of the inner agita and energy of a relationship. Super Big Dig!
H🌷

Dear H

YES, bust a move
F guilt
Drink the expensive bourbon
Flirt
Have some fun with rewriting the music, play it faster or was it slower like Glenn Gould

Yo

Thx

It is an amazing thing, when you see that smile you know. Like a secret code.

That's exactly right Leo
You got this one
I hope you see that smile often ...

Thx

Oh how that secret desire shows through in a pensive smile. That unspoken language that is so beautiful and can only be heard by them. Those exciting sign posts that can only be seen by them. To be collected and owned, defined and wanting... The distance part can be quite challenging when you have this strong desire for someone. When you share so much. Really beautiful writing PS.

Distance is always an issue ...
I write these poems to try and stay close to her
Poem format works well for me, my outside shell is hard but inside, a real romantic
I hope she sees it

Thx Kx

Nothing quite like a pensive smile
Feel like I did my PhD in it
Glad this one brought it home for you

Thx Sir Ted

Gotta love the honesty in this, weaved nicely, the image also tells the story, the contrast of distance and closeness.

Well done.

Mystery and Longing
The beat goes on Wally
Glad this one made it for you

Thanks Mister