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your deacon of passion
cajole
flatter
fill the void
of your emptiness
favorite song on the radio
a cool breeze by the window
the first glow of libation
a scent of yesterday's cologne
vibe, sensation, city life
wearing black till the brink
your deacon of passion
bringing it all back home
for you ....
flatter
fill the void
of your emptiness
favorite song on the radio
a cool breeze by the window
the first glow of libation
a scent of yesterday's cologne
vibe, sensation, city life
wearing black till the brink
your deacon of passion
bringing it all back home
for you ....
Author's Note
August 2014 redux
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Re. your deacon of passion
12th Dec 2021 2:26pm
Re. your deacon of passion
12th Dec 2021 2:41pm
Re: Re. your deacon of passion
12th Dec 2021 2:43pm
This is a poem I posted under a different title way back in 2014
One of my favorites so I brought it back for a Sunday morning visit …
BIG THANKS BRENDA
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One of my favorites so I brought it back for a Sunday morning visit …
BIG THANKS BRENDA
XX
Re: Re. your deacon of passion
12th Dec 2021 2:44pm
Re. your deacon of passion
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12th Dec 2021 2:59pm
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Re: Re. your deacon of passion
12th Dec 2021 3:05pm
Re. your deacon of passion
12th Dec 2021 3:17pm
Re: Re. your deacon of passion
12th Dec 2021 4:03pm
It's amazing how those organic poems formed
Back to my beginnings
Many thanks for reading and the comment 😀
Back to my beginnings
Many thanks for reading and the comment 😀
Re. your deacon of passion
12th Dec 2021 3:31pm
Re: Re. your deacon of passion
12th Dec 2021 4:04pm
Thanks Stoney
It's good to see your beginnings and learn from yourself
Appreciate you
It's good to see your beginnings and learn from yourself
Appreciate you
Re: Re. your deacon of passion
12th Dec 2021 5:46pm
I'm a firm believer can't no body be you for who is best to teach you about thyself then you 🙏👊😉
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Re: Re. your deacon of passion
12th Dec 2021 6:09pm
Re: Re. your deacon of passion
12th Dec 2021 7:49pm
Re. your deacon of passion
Love looking at this reflection of 2014.
I loved the whole thing. Especially
the cologne scent of yesterday.
I see it as this poem is the cologne. Very witty.
I sometimes look at my stuff as well.
Backstory poems. Stuff that I just wrote before
I knew of any form or even what the hell
a stanza was! LOL
Loved this back to the future post amigo!
I loved the whole thing. Especially
the cologne scent of yesterday.
I see it as this poem is the cologne. Very witty.
I sometimes look at my stuff as well.
Backstory poems. Stuff that I just wrote before
I knew of any form or even what the hell
a stanza was! LOL
Loved this back to the future post amigo!
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Re: Re. your deacon of passion
12th Dec 2021 9:40pm
Yes, the cologne part was my favorite too
There are certain scents I used to wear and each time I wear them brings back great memories. Usually summer scents.
It's amazing how scents do that....
I think I was a better writer then so I'm trying to get back to that observation writing mixed in with my usual eroticism
Glad you liked and I appreciate the nod sweet A ...
There are certain scents I used to wear and each time I wear them brings back great memories. Usually summer scents.
It's amazing how scents do that....
I think I was a better writer then so I'm trying to get back to that observation writing mixed in with my usual eroticism
Glad you liked and I appreciate the nod sweet A ...
Re. your deacon of passion
13th Dec 2021 00:53am
Fill the void of your emptiness...I like that line. Been trying to do that my whole life.
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Re: Re. your deacon of passion
13th Dec 2021 1:03am
Re. your deacon of passion
13th Dec 2021 2:13am
Ahhh. Good ole e.e. Master he was. Bent the rules until they broke, then rewrote them via form and punctuation.
Nicely done, Poet.
Nicely done, Poet.
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Re: Re. your deacon of passion
13th Dec 2021 2:46am
Might have to adopt his name style
ppSpeak
The original of my writing career were vivid and plentiful
Embracing it and starting over
Thx A
ppSpeak
The original of my writing career were vivid and plentiful
Embracing it and starting over
Thx A
Re: Re. your deacon of passion
13th Dec 2021 2:51am
Re. your deacon of passion
13th Dec 2021 2:14am
Amen Brother!
Poetspeak, the Deacon of the Deep Underground
poetizing the epiphanies of life/love.
... brilliant reflective verse of nostalgia.
The sights, sounds, smells, and emotional reminiscences of life/love.
Your philosophical revelations are profound Poet.
Masterpiece!!!
Poetspeak, the Deacon of the Deep Underground
poetizing the epiphanies of life/love.
... brilliant reflective verse of nostalgia.
The sights, sounds, smells, and emotional reminiscences of life/love.
Your philosophical revelations are profound Poet.
Masterpiece!!!
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Re: Re. your deacon of passion
13th Dec 2021 2:48am
Wow Feet
My head is swelling
Can hardly get through the door
Too kind Mister, Too kind
Thx brother
My head is swelling
Can hardly get through the door
Too kind Mister, Too kind
Thx brother
Re. your deacon of passion
Anonymous
13th Dec 2021 4:58pm
Wow PS……this absolutely stunning……felt my heart skip a beat……..emotionally beautiful…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. your deacon of passion
13th Dec 2021 5:32pm
Many purple thanks FG
I appreciate your comment
I took this from early on in my DUP journey and changed the title
It’s one of my personal favorites
Happy Holidays FG
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I appreciate your comment
I took this from early on in my DUP journey and changed the title
It’s one of my personal favorites
Happy Holidays FG
XX
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Re: Re. your deacon of passion
13th Dec 2021 8:27pm
Re. your deacon of passion
15th Dec 2021 7:56pm
Always looking to fill any open holes, where ever they me be, aren't you PS? I love the ambiance with the radio, cool breeze, libations, and smell of yesterday cologne. You really engaged so many senses. The city has so much energy and passion and you represent it well. Keep wearing black, it suits you... ;)
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Re. your deacon of passion
15th Dec 2021 8:31pm
I went black I'm never going back …
There’s even a sex story to go with that. Maybe best in a PM ….
I am your deacon, vapor or otherwise and you know my cologne ..
The city and I get along just fine, another back to the future story too
#30 KX, glad it was you
Thx
There’s even a sex story to go with that. Maybe best in a PM ….
I am your deacon, vapor or otherwise and you know my cologne ..
The city and I get along just fine, another back to the future story too
#30 KX, glad it was you
Thx
Re. your deacon of passion
27th Dec 2021 7:51pm
Filling the void, loved the overall tone, composed and confident, BIG LIKE.
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Re: Re. your deacon of passion
27th Dec 2021 8:53pm