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crave
forlorn and adored
kept promises seem like a death sentence
what have I done?
bespelled, I'm going mad
my need is greedy
it reaches out to grab a man
I silently rebuke it
still it touches the seduced
bringing him to his knees
even if you don't like me
you'll think about me later
there's just something different about me
a spark in the eyes
a challenge thrown down
will you rise to greet me in my want?
affectionate seductress
finessing your senses
titillating your pain
in the darkness we all crave
Published 17th Nov 2021
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17th Nov 2021 10:48pm
17th Nov 2021 11:13pm
17th Nov 2021 10:49pm
This is quite a daring piece, sexy with a darkened dare to it. Tight piece Lady
17th Nov 2021 11:15pm
thank you graciously dearest Me usually I write ones like this in the second person but I was reflecting today about my interaction with men and this write came into being I appreciate your thoughts💕
18th Nov 2021 12:49pm
Oh yes! I could feel the intense need and desire to be fulfilled. But this need can only be subdued and tamed briefly before it wells up again consuming. You are such a beautiful dark seductress having brought so many to their knees. I could not help but get a vampire feel to this one. Driving men mad with your bloodlust where they cannot think of anything else but satisfying your mad desires in the darkness we crave. That eternal need only growing stronger with each one. Another amazing expression of lust.
18th Nov 2021 12:52pm
good morning beautiful Kristina thank you so much for a very sexy comment... a vampire yes i could see that come to the masquerade won't you lovely one? smiles, I love your visits💕
18th Nov 2021 1:21pm
To visit the masquerade with you would truly be an experience. One to cherish and remember. Where the blood flows freely and the passions burn ever so strongly...
18th Nov 2021 1:45pm
23rd Nov 2021 4:26pm
Voracious hunger, quelled for a bit but it lingers deep somewhere underneath the surface.
Intense and extremely hot.
Well done.
Intense and extremely hot.
Well done.
23rd Nov 2021 4:54pm
good morning dearest Wally thank you for the love on this write it's deeply appreciated❤
