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burn
I weep jilted tears
pent up emotions
I feel you deeply
I went too far
it cost me my heart
everyone can see my scars
I mask my pain but the hurt is there
liquor truth don't tell no lies
I'm saying what I'm saying
cause you're the real thing
straight legit
pour me a shot straight up
moonshine, hundred proof heartache
nothing burns better than regret
bottled up feelings kill
bartender pour me another
cheers darlin
Published 17th Nov 2021
Author's Note
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17th Nov 2021 6:36am
17th Nov 2021 4:57pm
good morning dearest Swagger thank you for relating I think we've all felt this some time in our life I appreciate your presence deeply💕
17th Nov 2021 6:41am
17th Nov 2021 5:04pm
hello Dizzy this is about heartbreak I think we've all felt it in some way... thank you for reading and commenting💗
17th Nov 2021 8:57am
Powerful, heartfelt, sad. You convey such emotion. Sending a virtual hug across the void
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
17th Nov 2021 5:06pm
Anonymous
17th Nov 2021 10:16am
You had me at the very first line...
(hugs)
... and cheers! 🍻
🌹 - B
x
(hugs)
... and cheers! 🍻
🌹 - B
x
17th Nov 2021 5:06pm
17th Nov 2021 3:35pm
Very interesting and very moving as it comes with deepness of emotions nicely done dear poetess
17th Nov 2021 5:07pm
18th Nov 2021 2:17pm
17th Nov 2021 5:34pm
Oh this one passionately burns leaving the scars of a love that went too far but you still feel like it did not go far enough. Longing for those flames, trying to mask the pain and find the burn in hundred proof heartache. 'nothing burns better than regret' how true that is. I loved the depth of emotion captured in this... pour me another...
17th Nov 2021 8:38pm
hello beautiful Kristina I love you comments they are always so thoughtful...this one was sexy too thank you💕
18th Nov 2021 00:50am
18th Nov 2021 1:40am
good evening dearest Tim true enough we do our best and really changing my past would change who I am so I am happy enough thank you Tim💗
23rd Nov 2021 2:28am
I can only think of barflies reminiscing in the past, drowns the sorrow with burns of liquid courage.
Excellent spill
Excellent spill
23rd Nov 2021 4:57pm
thank you dearest Wally this was from my imagination I've never been one for the bar scene party yes but bars no... I deeply cherish your thoughts❤
