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burn
I'm lost in the darkness of your smile
you flash your heat
then back away
I'm burning in your void
twisting in depravity
seeking your touch
I need
you rebuke me
my desire rises higher
a sadist of want
you know I will run
but return knees bruised
I feed your ego
it is a push pull relationship
I hate you, I swear
you fill my soul with contempt
my body betrays me
it casts itself before you
passion peaks and I am weak again
masochistic hate, hanging on your words
I am a fallen woman
just another sunflower
burned by lust
Published 12th Nov 2021
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12th Nov 2021 2:52pm
Absolutely fantastic write, great read, your darker work is my favourite stuff style
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
12th Nov 2021 5:29pm
good morning dearest Ron thank you I'm glad you enjoy my darkness I love to write dark😈
12th Nov 2021 4:01pm
12th Nov 2021 5:30pm
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12th Nov 2021 6:13pm
12th Nov 2021 10:00pm
Love the idea of a sunflower being burned.
Just something ironic about it.
Lots of love - hate. The push and pull.
The Yin and Yang of erotica.
Well done amiga:)
Just something ironic about it.
Lots of love - hate. The push and pull.
The Yin and Yang of erotica.
Well done amiga:)
12th Nov 2021 11:24pm
hello beautiful poetess I'm happy you liked the idea of that I was a little uncertain about that line then finally decided it was fitting have a beautiful evening💗
13th Nov 2021 1:55am
Well written!
"I'm burning in your void
twisting in depravity
seeking your touch"
"my body betrays me
it casts itself before you
passion peaks and I am weak again"
- loved these lines
I find this is be very skilled yet still very enticing. Great write ✍️!!
"I'm burning in your void
twisting in depravity
seeking your touch"
"my body betrays me
it casts itself before you
passion peaks and I am weak again"
- loved these lines
I find this is be very skilled yet still very enticing. Great write ✍️!!
14th Nov 2021 10:12pm
hello dearest William forgive my late response I've been off and on with my ability to connect on a deeper level... I hope this finds you well... have a beautiful day and thank you from my heart💕
21st Nov 2021 1:12am
"you fill my soul with contempt
my body betrays me" sums up the frustration when lust really takes over and we lost all logic and reasoning.
Titillating write crimsin.
my body betrays me" sums up the frustration when lust really takes over and we lost all logic and reasoning.
Titillating write crimsin.
21st Nov 2021 7:13pm
good morning dearest Wally thank you for the love on this write...yep you get it♥
