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Divine Song
Have you ever loved - to a crazy wild shiver,
When a flame rages in the soul, when frost runs over the skin,
When all thoughts, all desires around her fall,
And with every word, every letter, poems strive for her!?
Have you ever seen how heart to heart breaks,
When a river of radiant tenderness ... from look to look flows,
When one touch gives rise to a storm of ardent passion,
In which there are so many adventures and so much crazy power!?
Have you ever heard a divine song,
When the bodies of two lovers will forever unite together,
When frantic moans... tear the silence to shreds
And screams of mad happiness ... blow up the city at night!?
Have you ever wanted ... to simply dissolve in your beloved ...
And ... to become a single whole ... to merge with one universe,
When you no longer notice the time of the flow
And only boils, rages, rages ... crazy attraction to her!?
And have you ever loved more than ever, like no one can ...
What does everyone dream of in life, and you, probably, maybe?
When a flame rages in the soul, when frost runs over the skin,
When all thoughts, all desires around her fall,
And with every word, every letter, poems strive for her!?
Have you ever seen how heart to heart breaks,
When a river of radiant tenderness ... from look to look flows,
When one touch gives rise to a storm of ardent passion,
In which there are so many adventures and so much crazy power!?
Have you ever heard a divine song,
When the bodies of two lovers will forever unite together,
When frantic moans... tear the silence to shreds
And screams of mad happiness ... blow up the city at night!?
Have you ever wanted ... to simply dissolve in your beloved ...
And ... to become a single whole ... to merge with one universe,
When you no longer notice the time of the flow
And only boils, rages, rages ... crazy attraction to her!?
And have you ever loved more than ever, like no one can ...
What does everyone dream of in life, and you, probably, maybe?
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Re. Divine Song
5th Nov 2021 8:04pm
Oh if only I could meet such a love, thats absolutely lovely. Great write, awesome read
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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5th Nov 2021 8:25pm
You deserve to meet someone as wonderful as you Ron. She is out there somewhere. 💖 I am really happy you thought it was lovely. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts! xoxo 🎻🎵
Re. Divine Song
5th Nov 2021 8:14pm
Two souls undressed in each others presence giving to each other their all...it doesn't get any better than this xx
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Re: Re. Divine Song
5th Nov 2021 8:26pm
Oh yes! We all want a love that consumes us body and soul. Over and over again. ;) That is something to live for. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts! xoxo 🎻🎵
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Re: Re. Divine Song
5th Nov 2021 8:37pm
I love the caps... makes me feel like I accomplished something. ;) I am really glad you could take in the imagery and think it is a great piece! Thank you so much for reading and the wonderful feedback! xoxo 🎻🎵
Re: Re. Divine Song
5th Nov 2021 8:43pm
Well, enough said! lol ;) Oh YES! I love Yes. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts! xoxo 🎻🎵
Re. Divine Song
5th Nov 2021 8:32pm
I've had many lovers whom I thought this way with ....
Where time stopped and there was no other
Where I was so wrapped up in their aura and mine I sat dreamily waiting for the next moment to be in their arms
Then there were those I never had but lusted after and this write covers that desire as well !!
Awesome entry
BIG LIKE
RL COUNTRY
Where time stopped and there was no other
Where I was so wrapped up in their aura and mine I sat dreamily waiting for the next moment to be in their arms
Then there were those I never had but lusted after and this write covers that desire as well !!
Awesome entry
BIG LIKE
RL COUNTRY
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Re: Re. Divine Song
5th Nov 2021 8:52pm
I hope I was able to bring up some good memories of past and present love. To get lost in each other makes life truly worth living. Always eagerly waiting for that next touch and kiss. To be together...
Yes, lust is so powerful as well. That insane desire that so often comes out in writing. Loving the BIG LIKE and RL COUNTRY.
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts! xoxo 🎻🎵
Yes, lust is so powerful as well. That insane desire that so often comes out in writing. Loving the BIG LIKE and RL COUNTRY.
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts! xoxo 🎻🎵
Re. Divine Song
5th Nov 2021 8:55pm
The possibilities seem endless, and endless isn’t enough! I want it all and more. “When one touch gives rise to a storm of ardent passion” That’s a must have…
Your bolds here work perfectly…”And screams of mad happiness ... blow up the city at night!? “
Yes!
NG🌹
Your bolds here work perfectly…”And screams of mad happiness ... blow up the city at night!? “
Yes!
NG🌹
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Re: Re. Divine Song
5th Nov 2021 9:02pm
Ah yes! I can tell you are full of passion; definitely a Night Goddess and we have needs damnit! ;) Gotta keep the storm of ardent passion going and blowing up the night always...
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts! xoxo 🎻🎵
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts! xoxo 🎻🎵
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5th Nov 2021 9:04pm
Re. Divine Song
5th Nov 2021 8:57pm
I have had many lovers in songs and dreams. Poetry and writing things, but never playing the fantasy ghost. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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Re: Re. Divine Song
5th Nov 2021 9:11pm
Lovers are what songs and dreams are made of! Poetry and stories too. :) Not sure about playing the fantasy ghost though. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts! xoxo 🎻🎵
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5th Nov 2021 11:24pm
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6th Nov 2021 3:22pm
Always! And got to have the orgasmic bliss Francisco. :) Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts! xoxo 🎻🎵
Re. Divine Song
5th Nov 2021 11:29pm
Welp-looks like I'm late to the party. LOL
Everyone covered all the bases.
When it's new it is amazing.
After a while it does take work to have that passion. Kids come along and distract or
knock on the door wondering - why the door is locked?
We learned we need to get away from the house
to really have that intense connection. Which we do but soon after we miss our boys and call home also to make sure there is no party being thrown. LOL
Everyone covered all the bases.
When it's new it is amazing.
After a while it does take work to have that passion. Kids come along and distract or
knock on the door wondering - why the door is locked?
We learned we need to get away from the house
to really have that intense connection. Which we do but soon after we miss our boys and call home also to make sure there is no party being thrown. LOL
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Re: Re. Divine Song
6th Nov 2021 3:24pm
You are never late Adelphina and it's not a party until you arrive. ;) I suppose kids do make things more challenging sometimes. I don't have any of those yet. :p But I can tell you have an abundance of passion to go around. Although I can imagine the knocking at the door and the parties. lol Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts! xoxo 🎻🎵
Re. Divine Song
6th Nov 2021 3:36am
Dear, Kristina
Beautiful, romantic piece. It also poses some soul searching questions. This is my favorite passage,
"When a river of radiant tenderness ... from look to look flows,"
Brava, lovely goddess, BD❣🌹
Beautiful, romantic piece. It also poses some soul searching questions. This is my favorite passage,
"When a river of radiant tenderness ... from look to look flows,"
Brava, lovely goddess, BD❣🌹
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I know you know romance so that makes me really happy. :) Passion comes from the heart and soul, always searching... Oooo I adore being called lovely goddess my dear GW. ;) Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts! xoxo 🎻🎵
Re. Divine Song
6th Nov 2021 1:11pm
"Have you ever heard a divine song"
as your words so beautifully describe...
ah, no.
each word
each line
all so complete
the description, the mood.
how you capture the lovers and their bond.
as your words so beautifully describe...
ah, no.
each word
each line
all so complete
the description, the mood.
how you capture the lovers and their bond.
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Re: Re. Divine Song
6th Nov 2021 3:35pm
Hey Mystic! I am so happy you could feel the mood, the love, and the bond completely as described. Your poetry flows like a song. And I hope you hear that divine song very soon. :) Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts! xoxo 🎻🎵
Re. Divine Song
6th Nov 2021 4:43pm
Cheese us this was good. All the passion and emotion emerging from the soul and on to the page. Palpable, hot and honest.
Bravo!
Bravo!
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Re: Re. Divine Song
6th Nov 2021 7:35pm
'Cheese us', you crack me up sometimes and I love that. ;) I have a lot of passion and emotion to give so I am very happy you could feel it Wally. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts! xoxo 🎻🎵
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Anonymous
7th Nov 2021 6:29am
Interesting poem, although in bits a little hard to follow!
Enjoyed!
Enjoyed!
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Re: Re. Divine Song
7th Nov 2021 1:05pm
Hey Mark! I suppose I can be hard to follow sometimes. :p Still I do like to keep things interesting and I am really glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts! xoxo 🎻🎵
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8th Nov 2021 3:16pm
Re: Re. Divine Song
8th Nov 2021 4:34pm
Hey LDF! I am so happy you liked it and thought it had nice flow. And I always love it if the formatting seems okay. :) Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts! xoxo 🎻🎵
Re. Divine Song
10th Nov 2021 6:05am
Re: Re. Divine Song
10th Nov 2021 12:23pm
It's always so great to see you Lj! Yes! let's go tearing silence and rock the city. ;) xoxo 🕯️🩸⛓️🕯️🩸⛓️
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
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Anonymous
10th Nov 2021 3:06pm
Awe Kristina…….how beautiful is this…….I’m sure most of us want things that only the imagination can bring us close to……gorgeous ink…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Divine Song
10th Nov 2021 3:34pm
Hey FG, it is always great to hear from you. Just trying to spread a little positivity and love around. :) Let's make the imagination a reality! I am so happy you think it's gorgeous ink and I always adore getting purple luv and hugs. I can definitely use them right now.
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts! xoxo 🎻🎵
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts! xoxo 🎻🎵
Re. Divine Song
16th Jan 2022 11:56pm
This is the true fire of love that burns in the heart. The intensified passion goes to the sky. The sensation tingle to take one the hight. The sensuality in coiled to reach the pinnacle. The bliss comes to take the lovers with a miracle.
I find an absolute love filled with joy and calm at the same time.
Three cheers.
KS
I find an absolute love filled with joy and calm at the same time.
Three cheers.
KS
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Re: Re. Divine Song
18th Jan 2022 4:53pm
Hey there KS, you understand me so well. I really appreciate your beautiful words. I can tell you are true romantic and your words speak directly to the heart. It makes me very happy how you have expressed these wonderful feelings that transcend space and time; filling every crevice with love, passion, tingles, bliss, and joy. :)
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts! xoxo 🎻🎵
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts! xoxo 🎻🎵