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Rebirth Possible on a Partly Cloudy Day
I want you vulnerable
I'm vulnerable too
Apart we're one thing
Together miraculous
Savagery and tenderness
That keeps me wanting
We're partly cloudy
Or mostly sunny
Possibilities
Rebirth
Too
I'm vulnerable too
Apart we're one thing
Together miraculous
Savagery and tenderness
That keeps me wanting
We're partly cloudy
Or mostly sunny
Possibilities
Rebirth
Too
Author's Note
Mixed Media Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Rebirth Possible on a Partly Cloudy Day
30th Oct 2021 4:15pm
good morning dearest Poet
the tenderness with an edge
the push, pull of it so much like passionate sex
so freaking hot...
I love the picture too it's so happy and vibrant💕
the tenderness with an edge
the push, pull of it so much like passionate sex
so freaking hot...
I love the picture too it's so happy and vibrant💕
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Re: Re. Rebirth Possible on a Partly Cloudy Day
30th Oct 2021 4:17pm
Yes Brenda
All of that
It's all here for the taking
Or mix and match
Wrote this a few times and this one stays
Many thanks
X
❤
All of that
It's all here for the taking
Or mix and match
Wrote this a few times and this one stays
Many thanks
X
❤
Re. Rebirth Possible on a Partly Cloudy Day
30th Oct 2021 5:04pm
This reads like as you're walking past your lover, you give them a hand rub across their shoulders. Just to let them know they are your center in this big galaxy.
Wonderful write.
Wonderful write.
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Re: Re. Rebirth Possible on a Partly Cloudy Day
30th Oct 2021 5:30pm
Re. Rebirth Possible on a Partly Cloudy Day
30th Oct 2021 5:38pm
Perhaps being secure enough to be vulnerable with someone is everything.
Together miraculous, the ultimate!
Wow PS
How long can you stay here? 👿 🤔 😉
This was beautiful 🌹
Together miraculous, the ultimate!
Wow PS
How long can you stay here? 👿 🤔 😉
This was beautiful 🌹
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Re: Re. Rebirth Possible on a Partly Cloudy Day
30th Oct 2021 5:44pm
I don't know how long I can stay here, there, anywhere
I just pen them as I feel them
Love your comment
Thank you 🤖☠🤠
I just pen them as I feel them
Love your comment
Thank you 🤖☠🤠
Re. Rebirth Possible on a Partly Cloudy Day
30th Oct 2021 6:31pm
I love the aspect of rebirth. for me it means growth.
together and separately - doesn't really matter because we will
always come home. This is really beautiful - the picture just adds to the uniqueness.
together and separately - doesn't really matter because we will
always come home. This is really beautiful - the picture just adds to the uniqueness.
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Re: Re. Rebirth Possible on a Partly Cloudy Day
30th Oct 2021 7:54pm
I totally agree with you A
Rebirth is a start over and a reinvent
Never to old to try again
Appreciate your comment and visit !
Rebirth is a start over and a reinvent
Never to old to try again
Appreciate your comment and visit !
Re. Rebirth Possible on a Partly Cloudy Day
30th Oct 2021 6:46pm
Re: Re. Rebirth Possible on a Partly Cloudy Day
30th Oct 2021 7:54pm
Re. Rebirth Possible on a Partly Cloudy Day
30th Oct 2021 11:05pm
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30th Oct 2021 11:40pm
Re. Rebirth Possible on a Partly Cloudy Day
31st Oct 2021 3:19am
I liked the openness to this, it's natural and spiritual at the same time.
BIG LIKE
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Rebirth Possible on a Partly Cloudy Day
This came together in parts and edits
Too, out a few lines and my message crystallized
Glad you like Wally
Thanks !! 🤠
Too, out a few lines and my message crystallized
Glad you like Wally
Thanks !! 🤠
Re. Rebirth Possible on a Partly Cloudy Day
31st Oct 2021 4:13am
Dear PS,
This write expresses a ton of wishes for me. By that I mean, I’m wishful for any or all of the sparks in your write. Real life doesn’t often compare to that vulnerability in your poem and it’s sad when it’s not apart of your world. Life just becomes a series of He-men and She-men with no possibilities. As per, I adore your hit and run style. Great art piece.
H🌷
This write expresses a ton of wishes for me. By that I mean, I’m wishful for any or all of the sparks in your write. Real life doesn’t often compare to that vulnerability in your poem and it’s sad when it’s not apart of your world. Life just becomes a series of He-men and She-men with no possibilities. As per, I adore your hit and run style. Great art piece.
H🌷
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Re: Re. Rebirth Possible on a Partly Cloudy Day
31st Oct 2021 12:16pm
Dear H
I love your description of my writing as Hit and Run !!
That's probably how it goes in real life
Sometimes I drop the bomb of love to someone I admire or lust for and then wait for the consequences hoping they feel something of my exclamation. Or is it just me..
When I feel it I have to say it
So yeah, I Hit, then Run, hoping for the best ....
Thx H
Appreciate the nod
🤠😶😳
I love your description of my writing as Hit and Run !!
That's probably how it goes in real life
Sometimes I drop the bomb of love to someone I admire or lust for and then wait for the consequences hoping they feel something of my exclamation. Or is it just me..
When I feel it I have to say it
So yeah, I Hit, then Run, hoping for the best ....
Thx H
Appreciate the nod
🤠😶😳
Re. Rebirth Possible on a Partly Cloudy Day
31st Oct 2021 11:15am
Check you out brother!
Displaying one of your awesome multifaceted musings of Love!
A Truly Powerful Metaphoric Love offering Poet.
Dig the concept of falling in love over and over again/ rebirth.
After all our world revolves around the sun /love & relationships.
And some days are pretty damn stormy/relationships
... embrace the vulnerability, great risks for great rewards/love
Much appreciate your bright sunny solar coaster ride of love poetry brother.
Empowering Message !!!
Displaying one of your awesome multifaceted musings of Love!
A Truly Powerful Metaphoric Love offering Poet.
Dig the concept of falling in love over and over again/ rebirth.
After all our world revolves around the sun /love & relationships.
And some days are pretty damn stormy/relationships
... embrace the vulnerability, great risks for great rewards/love
Much appreciate your bright sunny solar coaster ride of love poetry brother.
Empowering Message !!!
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Re: Re. Rebirth Possible on a Partly Cloudy Day
This is a WOW comment
I truly appreciate your talk on this write
Sometimes I wish I could just drop the L bomb more frequently but like most in matters of state I disguise it. That said I always believe in attraction both literary and in muse like dream states. It's a rush I can't ignore so I don't. I hope it's well received but sometimes I don't know. When it's good it's good and when it's Stormy it's a dust off and rebirth.....
Appreciate your phenomenal comment Feet
🤠😶🙄
I truly appreciate your talk on this write
Sometimes I wish I could just drop the L bomb more frequently but like most in matters of state I disguise it. That said I always believe in attraction both literary and in muse like dream states. It's a rush I can't ignore so I don't. I hope it's well received but sometimes I don't know. When it's good it's good and when it's Stormy it's a dust off and rebirth.....
Appreciate your phenomenal comment Feet
🤠😶🙄
Re. Rebirth Possible on a Partly Cloudy Day
1st Nov 2021 4:16pm
You have me vulnerable... Savagery and tenderness is a powerful combination; passion, lust, and love. Each needs the other and the rebirth is powerful and beautiful.
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Re: Re. Rebirth Possible on a Partly Cloudy Day
1st Nov 2021 4:20pm
Deer
Yes, they all work together and feed off each other
This one wrote itself and I know why...
Beautiful comment
Thank you
😍
Yes, they all work together and feed off each other
This one wrote itself and I know why...
Beautiful comment
Thank you
😍