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renewal in leather and lace
Gone, are the nights
where folly
of a past life
trickle in
to wreak havoc
no more self
censoring
hiding away
from my own life
Renewal,
is
fresh air
beckoning
across alabaster,
mint and lavender
commingling with waves
of night jasmine
and
dire anticipation of
perfectly worn in leather
Desires of dreamt servitude,
[inflamed by years
of sequestration]
roar to life— mighty
amidst internal screams
of wanton demand
(as reflected by
the perfect pose)
Deep requirements
of delivered freedom
are soulsearched found
where complete
con(sensual) submission
meets the apex
of innate need
To be longed for
understood,
within exposure
of harshest pain
and fear
is my manifest destiny
There inside, lurked
an always known
an inkling
turned to certainty
a must
of relinquishing control
of needing to trust,
implicitly
Handing myself over
altering everything
lived previously,
allowing wildest dreams
to beautifully molt;
emerging of lacey wings
and turbulent
flight
O'
sweetest
welcome
to
this
life's
morphing
into
the very
me
I was
always
meant
to be.
Published 13th Oct 2021
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©Blu2021
Memories of truth and acknowledgement
Memories of truth and acknowledgement
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Anonymous
- Edited 29th Jan 2022 7:45am
13th Oct 2021 11:32am
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I love the "straight A's"... lol... I always aspired to get good grades!! 😏 Thanks so much for sharing your insights and the confidence reminder! You're so apt, I CAN only be me, indeed. The caliber of one's character and living your own valid truth, are the building blocks to make the limited time we have, as happy as possible.... ☺... In other words, life's too short to settle! Imo *wink
Your thoughts are always welcomed and appreciated, T. ✨
Much obliged, dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹-B
Your thoughts are always welcomed and appreciated, T. ✨
Much obliged, dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹-B
13th Oct 2021 12:33pm
Be yourself is the best thing for you and everyone you are a nice lovable woman. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
13th Oct 2021 5:29pm
Dawww... Nice and lovable are wonderful things to be! Thanks so much, Francisco, I appreciate you.
🌹
🌹
13th Oct 2021 2:16pm
good morning beautiful Blue I love the way this poem builds and unfolds
and the ending was sheer perfection...
so sensual and sexy with your vulnerable truths confessed beautiful...
and the ending was sheer perfection...
so sensual and sexy with your vulnerable truths confessed beautiful...
13th Oct 2021 5:42pm
Hey there, B :)
Your lovely comments have me totally beaming! I'm so very delighted that you found some beauty within my poem. I truly adore that you felt it unfold they way I hoped it would— the build up, intended.... That's so inspiring, to me - sometimes being so vulnerable is difficult (and a bit terrifying!) and your support is like a sigh of relief, calming any fears ... Your insights are deeply appreciated and I humbly thank you for taking the time to share with me - 💙
It's always such a joy to see you on my page 🦋
Much love, dear lady
🌹 - B
Your lovely comments have me totally beaming! I'm so very delighted that you found some beauty within my poem. I truly adore that you felt it unfold they way I hoped it would— the build up, intended.... That's so inspiring, to me - sometimes being so vulnerable is difficult (and a bit terrifying!) and your support is like a sigh of relief, calming any fears ... Your insights are deeply appreciated and I humbly thank you for taking the time to share with me - 💙
It's always such a joy to see you on my page 🦋
Much love, dear lady
🌹 - B
13th Oct 2021 2:33pm
Hey gorgeous strong write,
BE STRONG BE BEAUTIFUL AND BE YOU
never change
Love and light
Ron x
BE STRONG BE BEAUTIFUL AND BE YOU
never change
Love and light
Ron x
Yesss!!
I'm so glad you enjoyed and could feel the strength 💪🏻.. That means the world to me!
Your words and kind sentiments make me instantly smile, dear sir!
The knowledge that you're always team -💙
feels like the biggest comfort.... I just wanted you to know that!
Much love and appreciation for everything!
🌹 - 💞
—B
x
I'm so glad you enjoyed and could feel the strength 💪🏻.. That means the world to me!
Your words and kind sentiments make me instantly smile, dear sir!
The knowledge that you're always team -💙
feels like the biggest comfort.... I just wanted you to know that!
Much love and appreciation for everything!
🌹 - 💞
—B
x
13th Oct 2021 2:49pm
Great pic. Superb superb superb reflection. A crossing of the road. A flower coming to full bloom.....Kisses, Robert.
Wow!
Three superbs!?!?... I'm all smiles!
So delighted you found pleasure, reading... Your comments are so uplifting —I'm humbly thankful, Robert.
Warm regards,
🌹 - 💙
x
(glad you enjoyed the pic! Not all of us are blonde stick figures... hahaha... (truly no offense to blonde stick figures the world over!)....)
Three superbs!?!?... I'm all smiles!
So delighted you found pleasure, reading... Your comments are so uplifting —I'm humbly thankful, Robert.
Warm regards,
🌹 - 💙
x
(glad you enjoyed the pic! Not all of us are blonde stick figures... hahaha... (truly no offense to blonde stick figures the world over!)....)
13th Oct 2021 3:34pm
13th Oct 2021 7:24pm
Ohh my, J
Your words bring me the most skips of my heart beats!
I think I'm so affected by your visits because I am deeply deeply in awe of your talents as a writer. I think I probably 'fan girl' a little bit, getting so excited, that I end up writing a response that's too much 'admission of admiration' ... like maybe admitting I'm a Javalini fan girl...for instance
bahahahaha.... My sense of humor grows on you! ...
(No one can say I'm not honest!)
Thanks for bringing me unfettered joy today, dear poet.... I hope you're left smiling
Much obliged and warmest regards,
🌹 - B
Your words bring me the most skips of my heart beats!
I think I'm so affected by your visits because I am deeply deeply in awe of your talents as a writer. I think I probably 'fan girl' a little bit, getting so excited, that I end up writing a response that's too much 'admission of admiration' ... like maybe admitting I'm a Javalini fan girl...for instance
bahahahaha.... My sense of humor grows on you! ...
(No one can say I'm not honest!)
Thanks for bringing me unfettered joy today, dear poet.... I hope you're left smiling
Much obliged and warmest regards,
🌹 - B
13th Oct 2021 6:22pm
Oh, my Princess, I am at a loss for words, which is rare, BUT this is beyond amazing and a message for all to consider to dare and be real, whatever that might be. I needed this. Hugs and kisses, O
13th Oct 2021 7:05pm
Your words become the inner light that needed stoking. Thanks for the lovely sentiments, O.
You're a bard and a true warm soul.Please remember that.
I ALWAYS adore and take great consideration of your viewpoints.
It's your visits that are some my most cherished
-💙.... my heart is full knowing that I was able to deliver something you felt in need of.
Much love, dear friend
🌹 - B
xo
You're a bard and a true warm soul.Please remember that.
I ALWAYS adore and take great consideration of your viewpoints.
It's your visits that are some my most cherished
-💙.... my heart is full knowing that I was able to deliver something you felt in need of.
Much love, dear friend
🌹 - B
xo
13th Oct 2021 7:10pm
like watching a butterfly emerging from a chrysalis....sensual and erotic...really enjoyed this B
Oooo! ... That's one of the images I had in mind while writing.... It's incredibly lovely to read you thought so too, L.
Thank you so much for sharing with me !
I'm all a flutter, knowing that you found enjoyment
💙- 🦋
—B
Thank you so much for sharing with me !
I'm all a flutter, knowing that you found enjoyment
💙- 🦋
—B
13th Oct 2021 7:59pm
Such lovely thoughts, Donjohn ...
I thank you for sharing them with me.
Much obliged, 🙏🏻
It was a pleasure ✨
🌹 - B
I thank you for sharing them with me.
Much obliged, 🙏🏻
It was a pleasure ✨
🌹 - B
Anonymous
13th Oct 2021 8:16pm
I agree with others.
A metamorphosis into the realisation that you are a speciality, that there is no one like you....
So rejoice and spread those wings in a flight of delight. For now in your hands are the keys to inner completeness.
Being just what you were meant to be.
You are marvellous.
A metamorphosis into the realisation that you are a speciality, that there is no one like you....
So rejoice and spread those wings in a flight of delight. For now in your hands are the keys to inner completeness.
Being just what you were meant to be.
You are marvellous.
13th Oct 2021 9:51pm
Hey there, my friend ;)
Your thoughts and generous insightfulness, has me soaring.... floating among the breezes of fortuitous flutters.... with wings spread wide and my most beloved marvelous nature on display for all.... to be kind enough to bear witness to.. 🦋 🍃
In other words—
I'm sending you deep heartfelt appreciation and thanks, aplenty, dearest poet 🙏🏻
(you're thoughts are always welcomed!)
Much love,
🌹-B
Your thoughts and generous insightfulness, has me soaring.... floating among the breezes of fortuitous flutters.... with wings spread wide and my most beloved marvelous nature on display for all.... to be kind enough to bear witness to.. 🦋 🍃
In other words—
I'm sending you deep heartfelt appreciation and thanks, aplenty, dearest poet 🙏🏻
(you're thoughts are always welcomed!)
Much love,
🌹-B
BlueV, I absolutely adore your beautiful spirit so eloquently expressed in your genuine & beautiful shares.
Your heartfelt expressive writings are pure genius.
I simply find myself immersed by your descriptive self-reflections.
Hence beware, I am bringing the leather to this lacy sensual masterpiece, lol.
Your genuine poetry never wavers from gripping your readers with your passionate compositions.
It is pure bliss to be so deeply captivated by your personal erotic poetry.
Gem!!!
Your heartfelt expressive writings are pure genius.
I simply find myself immersed by your descriptive self-reflections.
Hence beware, I am bringing the leather to this lacy sensual masterpiece, lol.
Your genuine poetry never wavers from gripping your readers with your passionate compositions.
It is pure bliss to be so deeply captivated by your personal erotic poetry.
Gem!!!
Ooooo lala!!.
There's something to be said for anticipation!! My thoughts swirl with such imagination and creative wonderings at your warning of "Beware"... heh heh heh 😈
(Of course I had to start with the juiciest bits first!! Yum! 😋)
Well, FF....
I must admit that I have missed the care and respect you bestow when leaving your thoughts and generous insightful remarks. My confidence has been waning recently, so you're kindness is like a shot of your pure blissful motivation and the reinvigorated umpf, that I needed. I thank you so much for that. It's sometimes difficult to get back on track once you've veered off.
You're so awesome, FF... sincerely.
I am so over the moon you're back and that you found exactly what I had hoped to convey!
Much love, dear friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
–B
There's something to be said for anticipation!! My thoughts swirl with such imagination and creative wonderings at your warning of "Beware"... heh heh heh 😈
(Of course I had to start with the juiciest bits first!! Yum! 😋)
Well, FF....
I must admit that I have missed the care and respect you bestow when leaving your thoughts and generous insightful remarks. My confidence has been waning recently, so you're kindness is like a shot of your pure blissful motivation and the reinvigorated umpf, that I needed. I thank you so much for that. It's sometimes difficult to get back on track once you've veered off.
You're so awesome, FF... sincerely.
I am so over the moon you're back and that you found exactly what I had hoped to convey!
Much love, dear friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
–B
14th Oct 2021 5:29pm
This captures the core of submission.:
"Deep requirements of delivered freedom "
I love the intent and the wordplay of this beautiful work.
A++
❣️🙏🏼
"Deep requirements of delivered freedom "
I love the intent and the wordplay of this beautiful work.
A++
❣️🙏🏼
Ohhh my, KP
For a Master and true expert at understanding from whence I came; to leave such rewarding compliments, has me and my submissive nature, deeply affected— shivering with excitement and true joy that you found a semblance of accuracy and beauty in what I was able to convey.
My heart is full and my humble appreciation, vast.
Thank you muchly for the wonderful A++
*wink
🌹 - 💙
—B
For a Master and true expert at understanding from whence I came; to leave such rewarding compliments, has me and my submissive nature, deeply affected— shivering with excitement and true joy that you found a semblance of accuracy and beauty in what I was able to convey.
My heart is full and my humble appreciation, vast.
Thank you muchly for the wonderful A++
*wink
🌹 - 💙
—B
14th Oct 2021 7:07pm
Could the human animal be a oxymoron of itself. Through destruction of our self our phoenix is risen, through a total release of our freedom is our path to freedom. We are purged and cleanest in some of the filthiest states of coexisting. There is so much we sacrifice to see that birth of a new beginning with the perfect orgasm. Tight work Lady
14th Oct 2021 10:57pm
Hey there, Me :)
The idea you convey, is definitely part of my human experience. You aptly describe rising from the ashes of our own destruction , as our Phoenix selves; in essence, being born anew. That's close to how I understand my innate needs and emotional drivers. To find and explore a part of one's self that is as ingrained as eye color or skin color. It's deep requirements of a hope in delivered freedom.
Your thoughts and generous insights mean a lot to me and sometimes help me to reconcile my own reasonings. I truly treasure that along with your supportiveness, via your visits. Getting a 'tight work' makes for ear to ear smiles.
Much appreciated, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
The idea you convey, is definitely part of my human experience. You aptly describe rising from the ashes of our own destruction , as our Phoenix selves; in essence, being born anew. That's close to how I understand my innate needs and emotional drivers. To find and explore a part of one's self that is as ingrained as eye color or skin color. It's deep requirements of a hope in delivered freedom.
Your thoughts and generous insights mean a lot to me and sometimes help me to reconcile my own reasonings. I truly treasure that along with your supportiveness, via your visits. Getting a 'tight work' makes for ear to ear smiles.
Much appreciated, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
14th Oct 2021 9:43pm
Splendid erotic write ... pulsating flow ... building ... so capturing the essence of this divine play ...
Thank you, LilD.
Your comments are true high praise and so meaningful to me. I absolutely love that you felt I was able to capture that essence of submissive play, emanating clearly my intention.... Oh, how that makes me smile, wide! 😁 as your generous list add, humbly honors ... 🙏🏻
-I hope you have an excellent retreat-
All my warmest appreciation,
🌹 - B
x
Your comments are true high praise and so meaningful to me. I absolutely love that you felt I was able to capture that essence of submissive play, emanating clearly my intention.... Oh, how that makes me smile, wide! 😁 as your generous list add, humbly honors ... 🙏🏻
-I hope you have an excellent retreat-
All my warmest appreciation,
🌹 - B
x
15th Oct 2021 6:08pm
Dearest, Lady Blue
You constantly satisfy the sensual being in me. I love the romantic fragrances mentioned in the second stanza. And "beckoning across alabaster" I am choosing to picture supple porcelain skin so exhileratingly warm to the touch.
And this stanza is myb tingle-maker,
"Deep requirements
of delivered freedom
are soulsearched found
where complete
con(sensual) submission
meets the apex
of innate need"
So beautifully composed💋
As a;ways I appreciate the authenhticity of your words. Baravisima, bella diosa de poesia 🐻💕🐰
You constantly satisfy the sensual being in me. I love the romantic fragrances mentioned in the second stanza. And "beckoning across alabaster" I am choosing to picture supple porcelain skin so exhileratingly warm to the touch.
And this stanza is myb tingle-maker,
"Deep requirements
of delivered freedom
are soulsearched found
where complete
con(sensual) submission
meets the apex
of innate need"
So beautifully composed💋
As a;ways I appreciate the authenhticity of your words. Baravisima, bella diosa de poesia 🐻💕🐰
My lovely BB!!
You're a sight for sore eyes, dear friend 🙏🏻 🐻
Well, your comments/aka: admissions of pure motivational loveliness, have my heart skipping beats and my hands sweaty with nervous anticipational (yes its a made up word) joy!! 👏🏻
Ohh how you flatter; while simultaneously building me up, when I very much needed it the most!
My heart soars, knowing that I was able to convey and satisfy the BB sensual side as well as the romantic. For me, it doesn't get much better than that!! Your deep dives and gracious words of uplifting insight, bring true joy; poignancy and a humbling sense of a job well done.
You're the one whose authentic nature shines so very bright..I adore your visits and I've missed them, so!! What a great treat and the best surprise!!
Much love and endless respect,
🌹🐻🐰💋
B-💙
x
You're a sight for sore eyes, dear friend 🙏🏻 🐻
Well, your comments/aka: admissions of pure motivational loveliness, have my heart skipping beats and my hands sweaty with nervous anticipational (yes its a made up word) joy!! 👏🏻
Ohh how you flatter; while simultaneously building me up, when I very much needed it the most!
My heart soars, knowing that I was able to convey and satisfy the BB sensual side as well as the romantic. For me, it doesn't get much better than that!! Your deep dives and gracious words of uplifting insight, bring true joy; poignancy and a humbling sense of a job well done.
You're the one whose authentic nature shines so very bright..I adore your visits and I've missed them, so!! What a great treat and the best surprise!!
Much love and endless respect,
🌹🐻🐰💋
B-💙
x
16th Oct 2021 9:24pm
So the caterpillar is exiting her cocoon as a winged butterfly. Free of self-imposed constraints seeking to explore her sexuality and sensuality. Searching for the handler who's net doesn't harm, and she trusts enough to pin her wings, exposing all of her.
Confident, virile and sexy you turn over your canvas to him/her, allowing he or she to draw the masterpiece out of you.
Confident, virile and sexy you turn over your canvas to him/her, allowing he or she to draw the masterpiece out of you.
Ohh Leo!!
🐛✨🦋
Mmm.. the very thoughts..... purrr...
The will and want and driving need. ☯️ Matched equals, of sorts. To be so coveted, cherished— that his strength is enough to handle me (I can be strong willed at times), definitive trust and the surety that my submission can flourish and satisfy his various demands. Two sides of one beautiful and carefully crafted coin.
Your comments blew me away, in their accuracy, dear poet 🙏🏻.... you get it.... completely.
Thanks so much for sharing your mind.
Much love —
🌹-🔗 ⛓️
B
🐛✨🦋
Mmm.. the very thoughts..... purrr...
The will and want and driving need. ☯️ Matched equals, of sorts. To be so coveted, cherished— that his strength is enough to handle me (I can be strong willed at times), definitive trust and the surety that my submission can flourish and satisfy his various demands. Two sides of one beautiful and carefully crafted coin.
Your comments blew me away, in their accuracy, dear poet 🙏🏻.... you get it.... completely.
Thanks so much for sharing your mind.
Much love —
🌹-🔗 ⛓️
B
17th Oct 2021 4:56pm
Mmmm..... I do love those spy games.... so. very. much.
... and Just when I thought it was good as it could get...... it gets that much better. *🤭 😉 😏*
🌹 - x
... and Just when I thought it was good as it could get...... it gets that much better. *🤭 😉 😏*
🌹 - x
17th Oct 2021 3:16am
Wow, this is a well written erotic poem. It's is a turn on but an intellectual one rather than graphic. Great write!
17th Oct 2021 3:52am
Hey there, William :)
I am so pleased you found the eroticism enticing! What a fantastic compliment. I really enjoy your perspectives and deeply appreciate you taking the time to leave me your thoughts.
I hope you are doing well, dear poet
🌹-💙
—B
I am so pleased you found the eroticism enticing! What a fantastic compliment. I really enjoy your perspectives and deeply appreciate you taking the time to leave me your thoughts.
I hope you are doing well, dear poet
🌹-💙
—B
17th Oct 2021 3:56am
I'm happy you're happy! It makes me feel good that my comments excite you. Your writing is very good. Not to be to frank, but this was a turn on and most erotica isn't for me.
17th Oct 2021 4:24am
Awwww.... (blushes) Now, THAT'S a truly beautiful admission and extremely awesome compliment you've paid me, William
All my heartfelt thanks - 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
All my heartfelt thanks - 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
17th Oct 2021 4:38am
17th Oct 2021 5:56am
21st Oct 2021 3:48pm
21st Oct 2021 4:04pm
I never looked at it that way but I believe that's pretty astute and kinda brilliant. It's nice to meet you and thank you for sharing your thoughts and for the generous list add.
Be well and be safe,
🌹 - B
Be well and be safe,
🌹 - B
22nd Oct 2021 11:30pm
23rd Oct 2021 00:14am
12th Nov 2021 8:42pm
Love the imagery in this poem. I'm not an expert in imagery as I have mostly focused in meter, rhyme, and metaphor in my classical works but I have a real interest In learning how to do Imagery and master it. I realize that contemperary poetry is a lot about imagery.
I wholeheartedly appreciate your gracious comments, William.... Thank you so much 🙏🏻
The devil is in the details, they say!!
I think that a good story teller can take a reader's imagination and their mind's eye, to places that have yet to be explored..... a new universe of emotional experience. It's like that for poetry, too. I am drawn to unique and freshly written forms of expression.... Something that I might not have come across before. I find that's what excites me and really stokes my passion for finding excellent reading material.... Grabbing me hard by the metaphorical usages; dragging me into reading, where I can relish and bask!!
I adore it... lol
Thanks again!
Much obliged - 🌹
💙 - B
The devil is in the details, they say!!
I think that a good story teller can take a reader's imagination and their mind's eye, to places that have yet to be explored..... a new universe of emotional experience. It's like that for poetry, too. I am drawn to unique and freshly written forms of expression.... Something that I might not have come across before. I find that's what excites me and really stokes my passion for finding excellent reading material.... Grabbing me hard by the metaphorical usages; dragging me into reading, where I can relish and bask!!
I adore it... lol
Thanks again!
Much obliged - 🌹
💙 - B
12th Nov 2021 9:01pm
You know how to vogue. I love your detailed comments. They really impress me. If I was six feet under they would still impress me. Thankyou for your kindness in your response.
Anonymous
- Edited 10th Feb 2022 2:45pm
19th Dec 2021 5:19am
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19th Dec 2021 6:41pm
It's titillating, I agree... I have found come to learn many things about myself and have willingly pushed passed some limits to acquire that information...In rare instances the fantasy wasn't even as good as what reality had in store. Although there has been some epic failures too... lol...that are laughable now...
Your comments bring joy and a warmth, Selina.
It's a divine pleasure to hear your confessions ;)
🌹 - 💙
x
B
Your comments bring joy and a warmth, Selina.
It's a divine pleasure to hear your confessions ;)
🌹 - 💙
x
B
This is the apotheosis of an angel reborn in spirit and flesh. A celebratory confessional that reveals a woman discovering her true nature and reveling it. There is nothing more beautiful than a soul rising into the heaven it was born for. The trembling unfolding of a blossom in that moment of transcendence is the opening of a gate for truth in all its splendor. And here you have created a wonder of life's genesis that shows the path for others in their journey.
XoXo
John
XoXo
John
