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The obscurity of lavender wishes
Permanently damaged
that tender underbelly
of cosmic purity
rots away
diseased by a singular gesture
to a final wish
to blow up the ground
of multi-colored
or another
and then the night
breath is not predestined
but the way
of her mouth
and even more
then can be found
The very ones whose love
is withheld,
now are the only seen
I am not sure
how to get ahold of
the same rare person
who I am meant to be
that look, roars fiercely
but is the rip of a single page
and it is
I
I'm not a good day,
forgotten too
It's always
the pain of the world
where change often
is a resurrection
The best way possible
to make
a little more than
enticing of
lavender scents and
leaving me a bit of
what I wanted
a final wish for me
not to be a stranger
in the world.
Published 12th Oct 2021
Author's Note
Inspired by the predictive text stories forum.... Just a bit of fooling around. This was written like 99.8% via my predictive text. I only removed a few random 'is's'' that didn't work at all, changed 'scented' to scents and pretty much the rest actually did write itself... lol
I just let it ride. I don't know quite what to make of it but I found it kind of surrealistic and teenie bit like abstract art...
Avant-garde poetry!
just my musings....
-x
©Blu2021
I just let it ride. I don't know quite what to make of it but I found it kind of surrealistic and teenie bit like abstract art...
Avant-garde poetry!
just my musings....
-x
©Blu2021
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Anonymous
- Edited 29th Jan 2022 7:45am
12th Oct 2021 11:05am
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Ohh cool! 😎
Thanks for checking it out, T!..
That's much appreciated :)
I felt lulled by it, weirdly.... hahaha...
I'm glad I could get my hooks in...
( heh heh heh!!)
Much obliged, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙 - B
Thanks for checking it out, T!..
That's much appreciated :)
I felt lulled by it, weirdly.... hahaha...
I'm glad I could get my hooks in...
( heh heh heh!!)
Much obliged, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙 - B
12th Oct 2021 12:02pm
That's very clever, I love all the ways you change designs, formats, I wish I could change styles ect. Beautiful you truly are a word Goddess
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
or very lazy.... haha 😂
Thanks so much for stopping by to check out my little experiment, Ron. I always crack up @ the predictive text stories, via that forum, so I figured it might (just maybe) work out to be somewhat coherent if I was able to write a whole poem that way. It's definitely somewhat avant-garde.... lmao!
I am so grateful you enjoyed it! - 💙
Yes, changing the fonts, is key! It's easy, select the "full edit options" button when you're creating the poem, highlight what words you want to accent and then select the button you want to use
B = bold font
I= italicized font
U = underlined font
S = strike through font
and it will add the formula to that particular word or words, for the font, itself... So when you go to view it in 'preview' you'll see it has been changed!
Play around with it and see if you can do it... it's easier than you think!! I promise!!
(just an opportunity to expand your creativity!!)
Much love and endless respect, dear friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Thanks so much for stopping by to check out my little experiment, Ron. I always crack up @ the predictive text stories, via that forum, so I figured it might (just maybe) work out to be somewhat coherent if I was able to write a whole poem that way. It's definitely somewhat avant-garde.... lmao!
I am so grateful you enjoyed it! - 💙
Yes, changing the fonts, is key! It's easy, select the "full edit options" button when you're creating the poem, highlight what words you want to accent and then select the button you want to use
B = bold font
I= italicized font
U = underlined font
S = strike through font
and it will add the formula to that particular word or words, for the font, itself... So when you go to view it in 'preview' you'll see it has been changed!
Play around with it and see if you can do it... it's easier than you think!! I promise!!
(just an opportunity to expand your creativity!!)
Much love and endless respect, dear friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
12th Oct 2021 12:30pm
Awesome!!
I love that comment, cs
Thanks so much for reading and letting me know what you thought of my pseudo avant-garde experiment!!
Much obliged, my friend
🔬🧪⚗️🧫
🌹 - B
I love that comment, cs
Thanks so much for reading and letting me know what you thought of my pseudo avant-garde experiment!!
Much obliged, my friend
🔬🧪⚗️🧫
🌹 - B
12th Oct 2021 1:16pm
"not to be a stranger
in the world"
Now that could never be your heart is colossal your soul vast
A beauty that never fades
in the world"
Now that could never be your heart is colossal your soul vast
A beauty that never fades
Ohhh.... my... (blushes)
I ask for a 'well done' and he gives me swoon worthy poetic gold!! Wfew!!
(Jeez.... I'm totally unworthy of your beautifully written kindness, C.... lol.. Like, sooo much so!)
OK ok, I'll relent and humbly thank you Also, another thanks for being truly wonderful; I'm beyond grateful for you visiting, the list adds here and elsewhere and the all around support and very helpful, amazing and cherished friendship!!
Much love—
🌹 - 💙
B - xo
I ask for a 'well done' and he gives me swoon worthy poetic gold!! Wfew!!
(Jeez.... I'm totally unworthy of your beautifully written kindness, C.... lol.. Like, sooo much so!)
OK ok, I'll relent and humbly thank you Also, another thanks for being truly wonderful; I'm beyond grateful for you visiting, the list adds here and elsewhere and the all around support and very helpful, amazing and cherished friendship!!
Much love—
🌹 - 💙
B - xo
12th Oct 2021 8:53pm
You aren't a stranger, you are a nice lovable woman. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
13th Oct 2021 2:24am
14th Oct 2021 12:49pm
Avant Garde Poetry.
Abstract Art.
These are a few of my favorite things for shore...
Love this experimentation... So cool.
Wait... There's a predictive text stories forum?
I will check this out...
Yes... I very much like "post modern"...
it sort of stimulates my mind and nurtures my soul.
Super cool...
I am going to look also into predictive text and maybe some other stuff...
Abstract Art.
These are a few of my favorite things for shore...
Love this experimentation... So cool.
Wait... There's a predictive text stories forum?
I will check this out...
Yes... I very much like "post modern"...
it sort of stimulates my mind and nurtures my soul.
Super cool...
I am going to look also into predictive text and maybe some other stuff...
14th Oct 2021 12:56pm
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/speakeasy/read/11225/1200/#542474
Here you go!
xo
Here you go!
xo
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Nov 2021 10:45pm
14th Oct 2021 2:12pm
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14th Oct 2021 2:46pm
Hi there,L :)
Well, I can't seem to figure out how to remove the censoring of the vast and plentiful curse words that I use via talk to text (which is how I usually use text) on my text app that I downloaded to my phone, not the pre-installed one... Every time I say fuck it types f***... and so on, for every curse word... hahaha. I think it's the manufacturer of the app, as my Google talk to text settings has that filter off... I've tried to change it numerous times, even emailed SwiftKey... the app, itself... I love its functionality, otherwise.... but I digress....
I guess I was lucky to be able to make
coherence out of it.....and I'm truly delighted you enjoyed it!
Thanks for the RL add and your kind words, I look forward to reading more of your work, as well
🌹 - B
Well, I can't seem to figure out how to remove the censoring of the vast and plentiful curse words that I use via talk to text (which is how I usually use text) on my text app that I downloaded to my phone, not the pre-installed one... Every time I say fuck it types f***... and so on, for every curse word... hahaha. I think it's the manufacturer of the app, as my Google talk to text settings has that filter off... I've tried to change it numerous times, even emailed SwiftKey... the app, itself... I love its functionality, otherwise.... but I digress....
I guess I was lucky to be able to make
coherence out of it.....and I'm truly delighted you enjoyed it!
Thanks for the RL add and your kind words, I look forward to reading more of your work, as well
🌹 - B
22nd Oct 2021 5:23pm
I've been meaning to delve into that forum, but it really interesting that the tech we use already has some algorithm, picking up your commonly used words and predicting them. Yours works really well.
Pretty awesome text Blue.
Pretty awesome text Blue.
22nd Oct 2021 8:55pm
Thanks Walter! I had been meaning to try it out for a while poetry lengths worth of writing to see what would happen for awhile, so when I got around to it, it actually surprised me a bit.
I feel like the predictive text is way more accurate than talk-to-text as far as guesstimating AKA predicting.. (lol) the following word that might
correlate correctly. It's still "mad libs"-esque but pretty cool....
I appreciate your thoughtful comments, and insights!
Glad you felt a bit of the tech awesomeness!
🌹 - B
I feel like the predictive text is way more accurate than talk-to-text as far as guesstimating AKA predicting.. (lol) the following word that might
correlate correctly. It's still "mad libs"-esque but pretty cool....
I appreciate your thoughtful comments, and insights!
Glad you felt a bit of the tech awesomeness!
🌹 - B
