Tits

Damn two women having sex is hot.  Keep on writing.

Damn right it is Francisco! ;) I am glad you appreciate this one. I love that you stopped in to give me your thoughts. 🌋💦☔

Some Tanka to contemplate lol...the places a mind will go, delicious x

I am all about expanding minds and well other stuff. Oh the places my mind goes... :p I have a hard time following the rules so I am glad you appreciate it. lol I love that you stopped in to give me your thoughts. 🌋💦☔

What doesn't this poem have  ?
You've got 2 hot blondes  French Kissing  
You've got the hot poetess talking about girl girl  
You've got Tanka
You're getting it for free on your favorite literary site  
Fucking Awesome is what you got
Best erotic writer on DUP

THIS IS BIG LIKE COUNTRY

RL AWARD - yeah I want to go back and read again !

Damn! Deer in the headlights. Actually Deer was run over but is still barely breathing. Yes hot girls, girl on girl, tanka; it does have a lot going on doesn't it. lol I am at a loss for words. Thank you so much for the compliment, BIG LIKE, and RL award. Damn! I love that you stopped in to give me your thoughts. 🌋💦☔

hmmm...
quite the write.
how could one say more.
think you covered it.

Ah yes! covering it. ;) Really happy you think it's quite the write. I love that you enjoyed all it says.  And I love that you stopped in to give me your thoughts. 🌋💦☔

Oh this is so very delicious indeed.

xx

Hey Journey, you have a special place in my heart as the first woman to comment. ;) I am so happy you found very delicious; as it was meant to be.   xx I love that you stopped in to give me your thoughts. 🌋💦☔

How could I not stop by, so so good!

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Wow! Bravo. You have taken your poetry to a new and exciting level. Oh, tits are an UP creator. Hugs and peace, O

Tits are just the start my dear Oral. ;) I love going to new exciting levels and and creating many UPs. It's so nice to see you back. Hugs. And I love that you stopped in to give me your thoughts. 🌋💦☔

To say the pleasure is all mine is an understatement. My UP is waiting for more. Hugs and kisses, O

What's not to like...

Hey Joshsam, I wholeheartedly agree with the sentiment. ;) And I love that you stopped in to give me your thoughts. 🌋💦☔

Girl on girl awesome
Love and light
Ron x

It is awesome right! ;) Much love and light back at ya Ron. And I love that you stopped in to give me your thoughts. 🌋💦☔

You had me at the title.

Great, just what I needed more competition!  👗😦😎

I thought the title was catchy and relevant. ;) I think I will pull first. lol Thanks for stopping in and giving me your thoughts. 🌋💦☔

Has me channeling Katy Perry
"the taste of her cherry chapstick"

Felt like I had to elbow my way in to leave a comment chica. LOL
Your sex aura is off the chart madam.

Hey Sexy A. I might have been channeling you so I would have been crushed if you did not find your way in to leave a comment on this one. If we combine my aura with yours we will really be dangerous. I love that you stopped in to give me your thoughts. 🌋💦☔

Sexy and nice.

Hey Robert! Sexy and nice, that's how I like to be. :p I love that you stopped in to give me your thoughts. 🌋💦☔

titillating....love being titillated...:)

Hey BC, I am here to titillate you! ;) I love that you stopped in to give me your thoughts. 🌋💦☔

Wicked. Desire for something new can definitely create problems but the desire never dies. Amazing truth in each line.  

Ah yes! Always full of desire. We have to channel those desires depending on our situation. ;)  Was having a little fun with words and style here. This is my first tanka and I am so happy you liked it. And I love that you stopped in to give me your thoughts. 🌋💦☔

Those first 2 lines are probably the truest, most honest, most self-aware lines penned by a woman.
Period.
Possibly.
Ever.
Hard to say. But definitely up there.
Then the last line or 2:  ambiguous. Licking him clouds HER memory.
Indeed!
Were it mine, I'd tweak it a bit.
There's so much bite, wit, irony in such a small space.
I guess I know what would happen if Dorothy Parker, Samuel Clemmens, and a 70s pornographer all got together.
Enjoyed!

I am all about the honesty my dear Mark. I love that you could feel it! ;)
'Licking him clouds HER memory' it's more about licking HER clouds HER memory.
After all she is being pulled away from him by the allure of another woman. ;)
Haha... I am not sure exactly what would happen but it definitely brought up some memories.
I am so happy you enjoyed it! I love that you stopped in to give me your thoughts. 🌋💦☔

That packed a punch, like I was carrying a tray of all sorts of snacks and it just flew off into the air.
Dayum that was good.
Thank you for sharing.

Lol, it's so funny when you drop the snacks Wally. But dayum the whole tray... I really love that - not in a mean way. ;) It just makes me happy to get a shock out of you. xo There is always more for you to snack on in the future. ;) I love that you stopped in to give me your thoughts and liked it. 🌋💦☔

Damn!!!! Could so visualize you licking her to cloud the memory

Hell yes! That's a score in my book then. I absolutely love when someone can visualize my writing, especially ones that can make the reader really 'feel' something. ;) 🌋💦☔

Love your writing and letting us experience your wet walls and volcano orgasms :)