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A Sensitive Thrill
A thin trail of coffee aroma touched her soul strings.
And the bright rays of the sun played in a light haze
In the soft foam of the airy drink, she built her locks.
The smell of coffee, caressing her thoughts, carried her far
Dreams of happiness swirled over her, forcing her to forget
A cup of coffee embodied in itself a sensitive thrill, exciting
As she was taking a fragrant sip in a pleasant woody vapor,
She wanted to become invisible, not to feel the burden of roads.
So invisible and incorporeal, and airy, like those clouds,
She flew into the heavenly distance, into infinity ...
And the bright rays of the sun played in a light haze
In the soft foam of the airy drink, she built her locks.
The smell of coffee, caressing her thoughts, carried her far
Dreams of happiness swirled over her, forcing her to forget
A cup of coffee embodied in itself a sensitive thrill, exciting
As she was taking a fragrant sip in a pleasant woody vapor,
She wanted to become invisible, not to feel the burden of roads.
So invisible and incorporeal, and airy, like those clouds,
She flew into the heavenly distance, into infinity ...
Published 10th Oct 2021
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10th Oct 2021 3:36pm
"thin trail of coffee"
oh and it aroma...
how it does upon the mind play...
giving thoughts of the day's may.
nice write to read along with coffee.
as one makes plans for the Sunday.
oh and it aroma...
how it does upon the mind play...
giving thoughts of the day's may.
nice write to read along with coffee.
as one makes plans for the Sunday.
10th Oct 2021 3:41pm
Perfect, I thought it might make for a good Sunday morning over coffee read. Coffee does play upon the mind, exciting the day. Enjoy your brew. :) And thank you for stopping in and giving me your thoughts. 💖☕xo
10th Oct 2021 3:42pm
Aura floating thrill
Cosmic in a sense
I love the elevation performed here
BIG HARMONY LIKE
Cosmic in a sense
I love the elevation performed here
BIG HARMONY LIKE
10th Oct 2021 3:45pm
Ooo I love giving an aura floating thrill. Yes, a cosmic heady lift for the senses elevating one for the day. Loving the BIG HARMONY LIKE. And thank you for stopping in and giving me your thoughts. 💖☕xo
10th Oct 2021 4:00pm
Enjoy your cup of Juan Valdez Coffee. You look very beautiful in that picture.
10th Oct 2021 9:51pm
Juan Valdez and I are good buddies as much I love coffee. Thank you so much for the compliment. :) And thank you for stopping in and giving me your thoughts. 💖☕xo
10th Oct 2021 4:11pm
I can only imagine what a cappuccino would do! ☕🤔
The sip and start of a new day!
The sip and start of a new day!
10th Oct 2021 9:56pm
It has been so long since I have had a cappuccino, now I want one so bad! No telling what that would do, it might be dangerous. I think I will get one tomorrow and find out. And thank you for stopping in and giving me your thoughts. 💖☕xo
10th Oct 2021 4:19pm
10th Oct 2021 9:59pm
I am so happy you liked it and thanks for the compliment, Ron and I love that new avatar. ;) And thank you for stopping in and giving me your thoughts. 💖☕xo Much love and light back at ya...
10th Oct 2021 4:19pm
10th Oct 2021 4:19pm
10th Oct 2021 6:12pm
10th Oct 2021 10:01pm
I am really happy you liked it Journey! It's always great to see you. Thank you for stopping in and giving me your thoughts. 💖☕xo
10th Oct 2021 6:54pm
Hiding from the future by existing in the moment, as time stands still, drinking coffee. Flowing write.
10th Oct 2021 10:04pm
I love to exist in the moment Heart of Stone, time does seem to at least slow down with that initial cup of coffee. Just sip and enjoy! I am so happy you liked it and the flow. :) And thank you for stopping in and giving me your thoughts. 💖☕xo
10th Oct 2021 8:51pm
I totally get it. I have a great love for coffee and all the exciting frothy variety of creamers.
Mixing it up and having fun with it! Almost like breakfast dessert. LOL
Mixing it up and having fun with it! Almost like breakfast dessert. LOL
10th Oct 2021 10:11pm
We definitely share a love for this wonderful substance. ;) Breakfast desert, I love that - that's so true especially when you consider cappuccino and latte and such things. I want some breakfast desert right now but I will never sleep. For my normal coffee I usually just do it black. :p Thank you for stopping in and giving me your thoughts. 💖☕xo
11th Oct 2021 1:01pm
This one swee thing I enjoy ever morning to kit start my day and watch the world do its thing as i sip on my coffee takening in its aroma while resting in my chair watching the fire place and hearing of the craking of the fire just let the world pass as i sip my coffee
11th Oct 2021 1:42pm
Such a beautiful image of pure enjoyment of coffee to start the day. On a cold day the fire crackling is just so wonderful. The flames and the smell... Everything slows down for a minute. Thank you for stopping in and giving me your thoughts. 💖☕xo
11th Oct 2021 2:56pm
11th Oct 2021 3:43pm
Morning coffee is wonderful but to share a cup with someone can be divine. Pull up a mug! ;) I am really happy you felt the serenity. Thank you for stopping in and giving me your thoughts. 💖☕xo
12th Oct 2021 5:02am
Dear K,
Aaaaaaahhhhhhh…
Yeah, I don’t drink coffee 😊
but totally get this with tea. Just floating away to happy land, or just floating away was the awesome message I took from this write. I felt at least ten pounds thinner and a hundred times happier after reading. Cheers to our cuppa! Lovely liquidy write. H🌷
Aaaaaaahhhhhhh…
Yeah, I don’t drink coffee 😊
but totally get this with tea. Just floating away to happy land, or just floating away was the awesome message I took from this write. I felt at least ten pounds thinner and a hundred times happier after reading. Cheers to our cuppa! Lovely liquidy write. H🌷
I suppose I am addicted to my morning coffee, it's a ritual I could not imagine being without. But I am glad that tea goes to happy land also where you can float away while starting the day. The good thing with tea is you can drink it any time. I cannot drink coffee to late so I will switch to tea sometimes. Wow, ten pounds lighter and a hundred times happier, I need to bottle that for sure. :) I am so happy it made you feel this way. Thank you for stopping in and giving me your thoughts. 💖☕xo
18th Oct 2021 12:44pm
18th Oct 2021 2:12pm
Ah yes! another coffee addict. x ;) I am so happy you loved it and appreciate your kind words so much. Thank you for stopping in and giving me your thoughts. 💖☕
22nd Oct 2021 3:30am
What brew is that because I want some of that kind.
Well done Kristina. It's delicious.
Well done Kristina. It's delicious.
23rd Oct 2021 1:04pm
Kx coffee is the best. :p You can only get it deep underground. ;) I am so happy you found it delicious. And thank you for stopping in and giving me your thoughts. 💖☕xo
23rd Oct 2021 2:30pm
Damn, I'd drink coffee with her any day of the week
Nothing like the float and elevation of the caffeine jolt
A friend told me about your writing, said something about deep south nuances with a UK beat. Looking forward to reading more
Nothing like the float and elevation of the caffeine jolt
A friend told me about your writing, said something about deep south nuances with a UK beat. Looking forward to reading more
23rd Oct 2021 2:41pm
Oh yes! I do love my coffee and caffeine jolt. Have a coffee and pull up a chair, there is a lot for us to read. ;) Deep south nuances with a UK beat; yes that sounds about right! And thank you for stopping in and giving me your thoughts. 💖☕xo
