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one room apartment
i haven't written anything
worth a monopoly of
your time.
the breezes are still cold and
everything hurts with talk.
10pm was a starting point
but now threatens total chaos.
sorry i won't waste
precious moisture
on tears.
write that down.
worth a monopoly of
your time.
the breezes are still cold and
everything hurts with talk.
10pm was a starting point
but now threatens total chaos.
sorry i won't waste
precious moisture
on tears.
write that down.
Published 9th Oct 2021
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24th Jan 2022 8:18am
A sad moment in time but nicely written, leaves me with mixed emotions. I clicked “like” even though that isn’t the right word. Maybe “appreciate” is more suitable.
1st Mar 2022 3:43am
I like your bifercation to seeing the drab of this and knowing what it means- the utter fail of one or more nights.
