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An adornment of days
Today is
lavender
wafting
§
Tomorrow
awash
in
delicate
primrose
§
The amplitude
of
weeks~months
bloom
jasmine
violet
and
tulip
§
Flowering
henceforth—
A year,
hope
sprayed
of
tender bouquets
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 24th Sep 2021
| Edited 3rd Nov 2021
Author's Note
My floral obsession.... always blooming.... 💐
[inspired by the Short and Sweet category in the Word Play group]
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/groups/word-play/discussion/365/
©Blu2021
[inspired by the Short and Sweet category in the Word Play group]
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/groups/word-play/discussion/365/
©Blu2021
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. An adornment of days
24th Sep 2021 9:31pm
thats really beautiful ..
made me feel i should pick a bunch of flowers to show tgere is hope
made me feel i should pick a bunch of flowers to show tgere is hope
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Re: Re. An adornment of days
24th Sep 2021 9:43pm
That's a really terrific comment, C... I am so grateful you felt that kind of emotional reaction... Makes me feel hopeful, too 💐
🌹 - 💙
xo
🌹 - 💙
xo
Re. An adornment of days
24th Sep 2021 9:40pm
Re. An adornment of days
Anonymous
- Edited 24th Sep 2021 10:02pm
24th Sep 2021 9:59pm
Mmm.
Very nice indeed.
Quality.
Very nice indeed.
Quality.
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Re: Re. An adornment of days
24th Sep 2021 10:03pm
Hee...
🌹🌺🥀💮🏵️🌷
I think pups love flowers, too!!!
(Who'sdagoodboy!?!
Diesel is!! )
Thx for reading - 🙏🏻
🌹🌺🥀💮🏵️🌷
I think pups love flowers, too!!!
(Who'sdagoodboy!?!
Diesel is!! )
Thx for reading - 🙏🏻
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Anonymous
24th Sep 2021 10:27pm
❤
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Re. An adornment of days
24th Sep 2021 10:20pm
Re: Re. An adornment of days
That's such an awesomely cool
compliment, Rosalyn.... I appreciate you taking the time to leave me your thoughts, it makes me smile wide, reading your words 😁
always a pleasure ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
compliment, Rosalyn.... I appreciate you taking the time to leave me your thoughts, it makes me smile wide, reading your words 😁
always a pleasure ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. An adornment of days
24th Sep 2021 10:41pm
Re: Re. An adornment of days
24th Sep 2021 10:52pm
Awww... I completely concur! Thanks for sharing your thoughts, AJ.... Your visits are always a pleasure and meaningful
Warm regards,
🌸🌹🌺🥀💮
-B
Warm regards,
🌸🌹🌺🥀💮
-B
Re: Re. An adornment of days
25th Sep 2021 1:33am
Always a pleasure. Sadly, right now I'm being run over by work. I'm dead tired and its nice to read simple, sweet words that don't require deep thought...just good feelings. Thanks again 🌼
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Re. An adornment of days
24th Sep 2021 10:58pm
The piece is tight work Lady the cycle of a year through flowers. We was trying to also relate them to the human cycles of aging and emotions. Tight work Lady
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Re: Re. An adornment of days
24th Sep 2021 11:52pm
That's a very poignant notion and totally works, as well.... Great thought provoking, Me... I adore where your mind took you.... Fantastic insights and sentiments, my friend.
Thanks so much for sharing that with me.
🌹 - 💙
Thanks so much for sharing that with me.
🌹 - 💙
Re. An adornment of days
24th Sep 2021 11:14pm
I feel like picking Dasies and Lilies for you. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. An adornment of days
24th Sep 2021 11:49pm
Awww, too sweet! Thanks so much for that kind sentiment and your awesome support, Francisco...
It means a lot :)
🌹
It means a lot :)
🌹
Re. An adornment of days
24th Sep 2021 11:34pm
Re: Re. An adornment of days
24th Sep 2021 11:43pm
Indeedy, it is! 💐
*wink
Thanks bunches, cf
Love having your eyes on my page.
🌹 - B
*wink
Thanks bunches, cf
Love having your eyes on my page.
🌹 - B
Re. An adornment of days
25th Sep 2021 4:44am
The universe within a bouquet of flowers, bright stars but beguiling scents of lavender, primrose, and jasmine. The passage of eons but the trembling of a hummingbird's wings as time stands still and stops to smell the flowers. Peace sorceress.
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Re: Re. An adornment of days
25th Sep 2021 7:34am
They fill me with such pleasure and soothe my entire being. I love everything about flowers– the smell, growing them, buying them, pruning them, arranging them, drying them, making potpourri, wearing them in my hair... and on and on...
They're sprinkled throughout my poetry and I often refer to myself as a rose... because technically, I am.... lol....
🌹 - 💙
I adore your comments, always.
Thank you so much my dear poet.
B
They're sprinkled throughout my poetry and I often refer to myself as a rose... because technically, I am.... lol....
🌹 - 💙
I adore your comments, always.
Thank you so much my dear poet.
B
Re. An adornment of days
25th Sep 2021 6:36am
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Agreed
They're (flowers) definitely the key to my heart..... just fyi....
(blushes)
🌹 - 💙
Ty for reading and your kindness, Leo
x
They're (flowers) definitely the key to my heart..... just fyi....
(blushes)
🌹 - 💙
Ty for reading and your kindness, Leo
x
Re. An adornment of days
25th Sep 2021 4:33pm
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25th Sep 2021 6:37pm
Re. An adornment of days
25th Sep 2021 11:29pm
Bluevelvete,
A day awash in the sweet perfume of nature is one to be cherished. Enjoyed the fragrance of your write.
down2dirt
A day awash in the sweet perfume of nature is one to be cherished. Enjoyed the fragrance of your write.
down2dirt
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Re: Re. An adornment of days
26th Sep 2021 5:01am
Your visits are truly lovely and so very appreciated. I am deeply grateful that you've found a some sweetly scented joy within my little poem. That thought makes me so happy.
It's always a pleasure, down2dirt
🌹 - 💙
B
It's always a pleasure, down2dirt
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. An adornment of days
26th Sep 2021 6:03am
Dear BV,
I offer you these in lieu of verbal comment. They’re much more meaningful and reflect how I feel about flowers and this lovely poem.
🌹🌷💐🌺🌸🌼🌻
😊🥰😊🥰😊🥰😊
H🌷
I offer you these in lieu of verbal comment. They’re much more meaningful and reflect how I feel about flowers and this lovely poem.
🌹🌷💐🌺🌸🌼🌻
😊🥰😊🥰😊🥰😊
H🌷
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Re: Re. An adornment of days
26th Sep 2021 6:24am
Re. An adornment of days
26th Sep 2021 10:58am
Lovely, lovely lady! 🥰💘🌻🌼🌷⚘🌹🥀🌺 I hope you're doing well. I've been coming by for inspiration but I'm working finally so I haven't been staying long or leaving any comments. Just a note to say hi, hope you are well, and gorgeous, brilliant work ALWAYS. 💞💞💞
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Re: Re. An adornment of days
29th Sep 2021 9:46pm
Your notes always inspire, dear Margo!! It's great that you're back to 9-5 I'm sure that relieves stresses in certain areas of life (maybe creating other!! lol) but a gentle reminder to please partake in your creative side once in a while, too. It's so enjoyable and we do love reading your works...
Thank you so much for thinking of me...
All the best, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
☀️🌹 🌷🌺🙏🏻🌻🌼☀️
💋 💋 💋 💋 💋
🌹 - 💙
B
Thank you so much for thinking of me...
All the best, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
☀️🌹 🌷🌺🙏🏻🌻🌼☀️
💋 💋 💋 💋 💋
🌹 - 💙
B
Re: Re. An adornment of days
Thank you beautiful 🥰😘💜💙💜💙💜💙 ....I'm in. A gorgeous soul you are, my friend ...you make me happy every time I get on here. I am going through a writer's block but it's getting better. Love you my friend. Is it too soon to say that???🥰💜💙💜
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Re: Re. An adornment of days
3rd Oct 2021 9:28am
Well look at that?!? It's PERFECT timing...!! Haha 😂
Writer's block is tough, I've been there... We all have... Uggh ... My remedy is to try and write through it, no matter how hard it feels just right even the easiest or silliest thing that comes to mind... eventually I think a spark ignites and you're on your way again....
Always, awesomely awesomeness to see you 🦋
Take care and we'll see you soon!!!
💕💞😘😏☺️😜💞💕
🌹 - 💙
B
Writer's block is tough, I've been there... We all have... Uggh ... My remedy is to try and write through it, no matter how hard it feels just right even the easiest or silliest thing that comes to mind... eventually I think a spark ignites and you're on your way again....
Always, awesomely awesomeness to see you 🦋
Take care and we'll see you soon!!!
💕💞😘😏☺️😜💞💕
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. An adornment of days
26th Sep 2021 12:39pm
Lovely and beautiful B.
Blossoms forth, in formations of light, in my soul.
(I feel like you pulled off a rhyme at the end, which is cool.)
Beautiful.
Blossoms forth, in formations of light, in my soul.
(I feel like you pulled off a rhyme at the end, which is cool.)
Beautiful.
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Re: Re. An adornment of days
26th Sep 2021 4:35pm
If I pulled off a rhyme it was completely accidental!! I have previously written poems that rhyme and let's just say that's definitely not my Forté... haha... I'm rubbish at it....
Thanks for the lovely remarks, C
This piece popped out and wrote itself.... I went to Trader Joe's and they have all these amazing seasonal flower arrangements being sold right at the front door (smart marketing!) and the words were just there, waiting to be plucked from the mist ether of inspiration....
Anyway... I am a sucker for flowers... Always have been.... I often write about them, they're kind of my 'security blanket' of topics... lol...
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave me your creative and considerate comments... You always make me smile ☺
🌹🌺🌼🌸🥀
-B
Thanks for the lovely remarks, C
This piece popped out and wrote itself.... I went to Trader Joe's and they have all these amazing seasonal flower arrangements being sold right at the front door (smart marketing!) and the words were just there, waiting to be plucked from the mist ether of inspiration....
Anyway... I am a sucker for flowers... Always have been.... I often write about them, they're kind of my 'security blanket' of topics... lol...
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave me your creative and considerate comments... You always make me smile ☺
🌹🌺🌼🌸🥀
-B
Re. An adornment of days
27th Sep 2021 1:32am
Well done, Blue. Comparing flowers to a concept something as metaphysical as time is a super idea.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. An adornment of days
27th Sep 2021 2:10am
Glad you enjoyed, bk
Really excellent of you to take the time - 💙
🌸🥀🌺🌼🌷
Sending along some sweetness 🍃
Thank you!
🌹 - B
Really excellent of you to take the time - 💙
🌸🥀🌺🌼🌷
Sending along some sweetness 🍃
Thank you!
🌹 - B
Re. An adornment of days
18th Oct 2021 9:09pm
It's a colorful depiction of what your garden must look like, decorating (both figurative and literal) with the fresh scent of the fall season.
Outstanding work Blue.
Outstanding work Blue.
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Re: Re. An adornment of days
18th Oct 2021 9:14pm
Glad you enjoyed my little 'flower a day keeps the doldrums away', sort of homage.... haha.
Thanks for the lovely sentiments and yes, flowers everywhere, of course!! *wink
I appreciate you, so much!
🌸🌹🥀💮🌺🌱🌻🌼🏵️
🌹-B
x
Thanks for the lovely sentiments and yes, flowers everywhere, of course!! *wink
I appreciate you, so much!
🌸🌹🥀💮🌺🌱🌻🌼🏵️
🌹-B
x
Re. An adornment of days
23rd Oct 2021 7:23pm
Re: Re. An adornment of days
23rd Oct 2021 7:29pm
Ohh my... That's a lovely notion and comment to generously leave. Thank you very much for the kind words and the list add.
Much obliged, friend.
Nice to see you 🦋
🌹 - B
Much obliged, friend.
Nice to see you 🦋
🌹 - B