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Eclipsing..
Whilst brooding on my midnight airs,
I caught starlight ..
in his open stare;
raw ebon, burning.. hard and bright
on my every. descending. curve..
Hued in silver gleam o'er naked delight,
those eyes~
dipping, wicked,
to taste a moment of my time..
Heat; like the sun licking the moon~
.. oh, how he moistened my mood..
Felt in phoenix'ed revelation-
peeled wide open;
spine~arching fire.. scalding my ocean..
Touches taking .. giving,
demanding again~
to bring wet whimpers of soul and skin;
My soft.. overflowing
for his eyes;
reducing me, tenderly~
to moondrops
washing the slide of his sun..
..forcing me to come undone,
in the brooding, now~spooning, midnight's air.
Published 12th Sep 2021
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12th Sep 2021 6:54am
12th Sep 2021 8:50am
12th Sep 2021 9:29am
Wonderful structure, both polished and free.
... An adept application of the elements and celestial things, to make heavenly, the things of the Earth that are... Heavenly.
:)))
... An adept application of the elements and celestial things, to make heavenly, the things of the Earth that are... Heavenly.
:)))
12th Sep 2021 9:38am
O goodness…such a delectably delicious spill of
erotica that left me with mouthwatering desires to dip deep inside your hot ‘spaces’ for more
yummy lol… whew! 😘👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾✌🏾
erotica that left me with mouthwatering desires to dip deep inside your hot ‘spaces’ for more
yummy lol… whew! 😘👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾✌🏾
12th Sep 2021 11:58am
12th Sep 2021 2:22pm
Ohhh my...... *sigh*... You are certainly the absolute best at creating such unmitigated yearning and originally expressive 'want'.... Your pen has such whimsically sumptuous magic ✨ Tis your beauty, my lovely lady!! .... I feel your uniquely particular poetic voice, so deeply... The desire..... the brevity of delicious passion.... Ohh, how you send goosebumps throughout, with your brilliant phrasing and such gorgeously gorgeous (yes, twice!) imagery..... I am left to pant, breath hitched, CRAVING the very next words you will put to cyber paper.....
—Feeling very fortune to be able to be and so willingly lost within, basking, contemplating and learning much, from your delicately tender and ecstasy inducing eroticism—
.....
All my warmest ardent luvs sent across the way... ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
—Feeling very fortune to be able to be and so willingly lost within, basking, contemplating and learning much, from your delicately tender and ecstasy inducing eroticism—
.....
All my warmest ardent luvs sent across the way... ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
