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Cone or Cup
I had my ice cream in a cup tonight
Too damn hot out
Cone would have come with worry
Will it melt all over me
Worse
Fall off into a creamy sidewalk mess
This pandemic life provides excess stress
I just wanted some ice cream motherfucker
Too damn hot out
Cone would have come with worry
Will it melt all over me
Worse
Fall off into a creamy sidewalk mess
This pandemic life provides excess stress
I just wanted some ice cream motherfucker
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Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Cone or Cup
Anonymous
13th Aug 2021 2:50am
You have no idea what I thought when I saw the title of your post 😂
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Re. Cone or Cup
13th Aug 2021 2:56am
I've been wanting to use that image for awhile
Ok, now you must tell me what you thought......
Yo
Ok, now you must tell me what you thought......
Yo
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Anonymous
13th Aug 2021 3:13am
I will when I quit laughing ☺️
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Re: Re. Cone or Cup
13th Aug 2021 3:24am
Re. Cone or Cup
13th Aug 2021 3:03am
Re: Re. Cone or Cup
13th Aug 2021 3:27am
I don't think I've ever had a waffle cone
Probably missing a lot
Now I want one
Plenty of napkins
Thx E
Xx
Probably missing a lot
Now I want one
Plenty of napkins
Thx E
Xx
Re: Re. Cone or Cup
13th Aug 2021 3:34am
Get one next time. You won't regret it.
But don't get all of that chocolate dipped
bullshit.
Plain waffle cone. Let it be the slightly
sweet, crunchy vehicle for the star of the show:
Ice Cream.
But don't get all of that chocolate dipped
bullshit.
Plain waffle cone. Let it be the slightly
sweet, crunchy vehicle for the star of the show:
Ice Cream.
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Re: Re. Cone or Cup
13th Aug 2021 3:38am
Purist
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Yeah, I don't go for all the trickery
Sweet, simple and good
Dig it E
You always rule
Poetspeak style
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Yeah, I don't go for all the trickery
Sweet, simple and good
Dig it E
You always rule
Poetspeak style
BIG LIKE
X
Re. Cone or Cup
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Aug 2021 9:46am
13th Aug 2021 7:11am
The cone or cup has a definite sexual subtext to it, slightly ambiguous, but there. Especially if all you see is the title, without context.
Cones or cups. I imagine this is like the dog-people / cat-people dichotomy.
Some people like, I mean just relish that extra bit of anxiety of a cone on a hot day.
I like the last 2 lines, because they connect it to something broader for me...yes, this ridiculous, ever-present...well, whatever it is: it's always something. Either the mandates, or the debates over this or that, or the worry, or the real, economic problems: travel, visas, employment, income, all the stuff.
Just ridiculous.
As for me, I don't eat dairy.
Enjoyed!
Nice monochromatic effect to the painting!
Cones or cups. I imagine this is like the dog-people / cat-people dichotomy.
Some people like, I mean just relish that extra bit of anxiety of a cone on a hot day.
I like the last 2 lines, because they connect it to something broader for me...yes, this ridiculous, ever-present...well, whatever it is: it's always something. Either the mandates, or the debates over this or that, or the worry, or the real, economic problems: travel, visas, employment, income, all the stuff.
Just ridiculous.
As for me, I don't eat dairy.
Enjoyed!
Nice monochromatic effect to the painting!
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I never knew that people would relish the anxiety of cone eating on a hot day. It took me eons just to try cone eating after my whole adult life was dedicated to the cup. A few years ago I went for it and by golly I was pretty good at it. Same goes for eating cherries and the damn pits. Avoided those for 35 years but there was a woman issue behind that. Another story. Well the poets here certainly had a good time commenting on this one which is most rewarding for this ranch hand.
I always appreciate your analysis Mark. You make this site better !!
Yesterday I had the cup
Thank you
Decided to link you to my Cheeries debacle.....
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/243970-cherries/
I always appreciate your analysis Mark. You make this site better !!
Yesterday I had the cup
Thank you
Decided to link you to my Cheeries debacle.....
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/243970-cherries/
Re. Cone or Cup
13th Aug 2021 10:50am
Life shouldn't be so fucking complicated, right?!
This is pure awesomeness. I read the title and thought, ooh goody, a lighthearted poem about ice cream... then saw the art & thought well that's kind of aggressive for ice cream, maybe I misjudged the title.... then partway through reading, thought ok this IS a truth-of-life observational moment about the struggles of ice cream eating.... then you hit me with the ending and BOOM I felt all the irritation of all the little bullshit imperfect things that happen every day, and I just can't stop laughing now at the absurdity of how pissed off we can get about things like melty ice cream, and the art totally makes sense! 😆 Or, maybe this is just the best damn use of the word motherfucker that I've ever seen.
Either way, for some reason this was a perfect way to start my day.
I'm glad you got your ice cream. ❤
This is pure awesomeness. I read the title and thought, ooh goody, a lighthearted poem about ice cream... then saw the art & thought well that's kind of aggressive for ice cream, maybe I misjudged the title.... then partway through reading, thought ok this IS a truth-of-life observational moment about the struggles of ice cream eating.... then you hit me with the ending and BOOM I felt all the irritation of all the little bullshit imperfect things that happen every day, and I just can't stop laughing now at the absurdity of how pissed off we can get about things like melty ice cream, and the art totally makes sense! 😆 Or, maybe this is just the best damn use of the word motherfucker that I've ever seen.
Either way, for some reason this was a perfect way to start my day.
I'm glad you got your ice cream. ❤
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Re: Re. Cone or Cup
13th Aug 2021 11:37am
Yes, life shouldn't be this complicated, hence the art and mofo reference
Went for the cup last night and Mrs Poetspeak did too which is irony because she is a strictly a cone girl. Waiting for our cups which we ordered SMALLS because the SMALL looks like a LARGE and more anxiety. Do I really need to eat all this?
Your comment gave me solace as I always think all my bullshit problems the world saves for me and now I don't feel so alone..
So Thanks k on the comment and your detailed appreciation on my dilemma....
😎💗🤯
Went for the cup last night and Mrs Poetspeak did too which is irony because she is a strictly a cone girl. Waiting for our cups which we ordered SMALLS because the SMALL looks like a LARGE and more anxiety. Do I really need to eat all this?
Your comment gave me solace as I always think all my bullshit problems the world saves for me and now I don't feel so alone..
So Thanks k on the comment and your detailed appreciation on my dilemma....
😎💗🤯
Re. Cone or Cup
13th Aug 2021 10:11pm
It’s so hot out there you don’t want to run the risk…
Good write Poet. It’s the little things on life that always bring joy, like ice cream.
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Good write Poet. It’s the little things on life that always bring joy, like ice cream.
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Cone or Cup
13th Aug 2021 10:13pm
This is so true Wally
The ice cream has one job
To make us happy we're eating it
Cone, cup, whatever
Appreciate the read and comment always Wally
Stay cool
The ice cream has one job
To make us happy we're eating it
Cone, cup, whatever
Appreciate the read and comment always Wally
Stay cool
Re. Cone or Cup
14th Aug 2021 4:54pm
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14th Aug 2021 4:55pm