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Silent Night
The world is still and the people are asleep.
Everyone except for me.
The only sound is a lonely cricket calling out for someone to love.
It’s like it’s praying to the same man up above.
Most people Find it to be a nascence,
but I find it to be another lonely presence .
Another lonely heart calling out in a silent night.
Everyone except for me.
The only sound is a lonely cricket calling out for someone to love.
It’s like it’s praying to the same man up above.
Most people Find it to be a nascence,
but I find it to be another lonely presence .
Another lonely heart calling out in a silent night.
Published 1st Aug 2021
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- Edited 26th Jul 2022 10:45pm
1st Aug 2021 8:02pm
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1st Aug 2021 8:17pm
1st Aug 2021 9:11pm
Dear M,
How right you are. The profound loneliness of the night and the calling out into the void hoping anyone will hear the plea. You’ve captured that scene with pristine clarity. H🌷
How right you are. The profound loneliness of the night and the calling out into the void hoping anyone will hear the plea. You’ve captured that scene with pristine clarity. H🌷
1st Aug 2021 9:53pm
3rd Aug 2021 10:27pm
I can really picture & feel the loneliness here while you're mulling over your thoughts.
