fortuitous flutters

what beautiful flutterings

You honor me with such a very kind comment, C.
Glad you enjoyed....
I deeply appreciate your list add and all your supportive loveliness.
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B

The beauty of Love is within us all.  Keep on writing you beautiful strong smart sexy woman.

Thanks for always being so supportive in reading and commenting Francisco!
🌹

Hey there, Rian.
I very much appreciate your lovely comments! I incorporated them into my psyche, lifting my spirits today... it allowed for a much better disposition and made my day sunnier!!

Much thanks, my dear lady!
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S

Sending ripples out into the universe not knowing what our actions can cause, awesome beautiful awesome
Love and light
Ron x

Yes, so true.... Also the idea that one teeny tiny moment, can end up having enormous impact/changes/consequences that are totally unforseen....

I appreciate you, the generous list add and your thoughtfulness, Ron.
🌹 - B

Excellent crafting ... taking a well poeted subject ... making it your own ... delicate ... like butterfly wings ... yet carrying such a weighty message ... visually seductive ... subtle use of spacing ... to maintain the rhythm and cadence of the poem ... splendid write my dear poetess ...

Your kind and beautiful comments, have me soaring, LilD.... Thank you for sharing your feedback ... You have a truly lovely way of making me feel like I was able to accomplish what it was that I desperately trying to! ... I'm deeply appreciative!

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B

Umm gorgeous . This would make for a fabulous reading! *wink wink*
I like the short line breaks. It forces the reader to slow down. I used to be kinda “meh” about love poems, but more recently I have been gobbling them up. This a terrific one.

And that avatar, though 😍

Wow.
Thanks, Eerie!
I haven't done a spoken word for a while, so maybe this  one would work, I hadn't thought of it! Thanks for the *nudge*... ;)

I appreciate your thoughtful comments! I'm usually all over the place, when it comes to my particular preferences or styles of writing that I seem drawn to. I've feel like I've always been a real dichotomy (haha) ... My go to favs--that I will always adore, are the love poems that ache so hard it feels like your own heart is breaking and those dark, searing, almost gothic-like pieces that will always have me basking, sullenly (haha!) in the shadows!!! 🖤..... So I get it, *about gobbling them up!!  

Thanks again for stopping by-
I'm grateful for it!  
🌹 - 💙  
B

The wings of the butterfly are made of rhyme, the fluttering is the rhythm of life that together create poetry out of chaos. Love this.

Thanks for the smooth delicious delivery of your thoughtful comments, Richard... I am so grateful for your kindred spirit and the generosity of connectedness.

All my deep appreciation - 🙏🏻
🌹 - B

Although, likely not your intent.  My 1st impression was this.

An adventurer, non conformist, chaotic personality, with a powerful charismatic cyclone personality. The touch of the tip of his cyclone draws you into a multi-colored flutter, as your "wings" flap.

I'm kinda digging it, Leo .... the scene that you've laid out... spreading the wings of possibility... enticing my imagination, into perfect throes .... leaving my pulse a flutter and dripping in pure welcomed chaos.....

Ohh the air of subjectivity!
Nicely commented, my dear
🦋 - 🍃
-💙
B

Blu,

You have an extraordinary ability to create an otherworldly experience with your work.  I feel this very acutely in everything that I read of yours.   I very much appreciate how you concisely incorporate allusions to depth of meaning, which can be explored in varying manners.  “Being of wind” can be viewed in a very literal sense or a symbolic manner: the winds of fortune or [the elements] and beyond.  The idea of “Being” also has multiple connotations, from a singular creature of nature to the consciousness of existence or the state of existing…  (Just a wonderful setup.)

In my perception, I feel that this breakdown is apropos to the unfolding of this piece, as I feel like the statement that is made is one of…  “Fate/Fortune” as both simple and complex, each level of perspective being equally valid and contained in the same “symbol”.  (Like two wings of a butterfly.)

I get this impression in the lines “blown from/ ancient/ sourced direction/”.  It is not just the mere/simple flap of the butterfly wings; and yet it is.  (It can be as much as we want to make it.)

“billowing/and/caressing/taut/promises/”.  This seems to confirm my impression of multi faceted meaning, because, here you seem to imply a nature to fate that is far removed from the mere “striking of the chord”…  (The music existed before the symphony was composed and performed.)  Because how could there be the existence of promises, without a “vision of reality” in support of the promise, this prior to the flap of the wings, which sends “one’s fate” into motion.

It was all in “the chaos”.  Outside of time and space.

“fortune effects”

This, to me, adds another dimension to fate…  Perhaps it is not definitive…  Yes, the fault might lie in our stars; but then, maybe we can change our stars.  Like the idea that seeing the future can alter the future.  Or…  The self fulfilling prophecy.

And then, I feel confirmation, in my perspective with “In the blink/of a multicolored/flutter”…  There is a spectrum of considerations in this “singular flutter”.

And yet it exists perfectly as a singularity.  

And how, eternity can exist in “a blink”.

I just want to tell you that everything you write is a flapping of butterfly wings.  Your writing matters so much in this world.  I hope someday you put together a book, so that I might have it on my book shelf.  It will be a priceless treasure.  

Your friend,

Pablo (Cipher_O)

Holy fucking moly!!!
(☺ ☺ ☺ ☺ ☺ ☺ ☺ ☺ ☺<------me, continually blushing )

haha! 😂

I am so grateful and utterly blown away by your words, thoughts, sentiments, compliments and love shown.

I can only humbly thank you from the bottom of my heart, Pablo.


I am such a lucky Blue!
🌹 - 💙💙💙💙💙
xoxo
Susan

Dear BV,

“ fortune effects  
In the blink  
of a multicolored  
flutter” does this work like a genie in a bottle? If I find that butterfly my fortune will increase and love will roll my way? No? Crap!
Well, I still love it anyway.
“ and  
a butterfly  
created
destiny” this is such a cool phrase to me. It makes me think that each one of us has the ability to blink or whisper something nice to each other and alter something in the universe that headed in an entirely different direction. Another smash it. Lovely work. H🌷

I tried rubbin' the butterfly, that didn't work out too well.... Hahaha... poor thing.... ha! (kidding!)

Thanks for the lovely sentiments, my dear friend.
I am so very happy that you could take away something that moved you... that's the best feeling!

All smiles that you enjoyed reading!
My warmest regards-
🌹 - B

A beautiful fragile poem that captures the fragility of a butterfly. Bravo! Blue.

🙏 Harry

Thanks for reading, Harry
...
I definitely appreciate you, the generous list add and your thoughtfulness!... It's that butterfly effect that always leaves me thinking... 🦋

Much appreciated, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - B

I imagine your wonderful poem having that butterfly effect. Like a pebble in a pond rippling outward. ❣️🤠

https://youtu.be/3QbXZnkhIzg

Thanks for the lovely sentiments, I will check out the clip... - 🌹
x
B

Gorgeously rendered poem on the profound effect that a butterfly can have over eons. This brings to mind a story I read in high school. After the discovery of time travel, some men went back in time dinosaur hunting. However while back then they accidentally killed a butterfly Upon returning to their time everyone spoke German and the world was run by Nazis. Amazing how such a little event can have great consequences down the line.

XoXo
John

Exactly!!!....
The impact of one small event.. can be colossal, in the presence of time compounded.....
I love your thoughts and the generosity you show me, by sharing your memories. I have a similar memory, too. It's always been a curious idea to me!! Thanks for the list add and your great remarks... I am so grateful!
🌹 - Susan

It reminds me of that butterfly effect theory, the tiniest little things can have such an effect on life and destiny.

Lovely piece Blue, really lovely.