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alone with my book, I smile
the rumble of a train in
the dark sounds more beautiful than a nightingale
Published 23rd Jul 2021
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23rd Jul 2021 1:51am
I think this may be my favourite poem by you thus far. The image is concise and beautiful, and matches up well with the title.
23rd Jul 2021 1:53am
You just put that sound in my head. Love it. (Of course i also love to ride on trains, even for shot hops).
23rd Jul 2021 2:15am
Love this .. reminded me of my childhood .. hearing and feeling the train as it rumbled through the night.. thank you 🤗
23rd Jul 2021 3:42am
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23rd Jul 2021 4:47pm
Well done, Paul. I remember after the lockdown the sound of an airplane was magical.
