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Son, My son
can say with conviction
and honesty, the journey
has been mostly easy
for me, anyway
cos this father’s love ain’t fussy.
all I really want you to be
is alive
#NoPoo. #PrideProud
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Re. Son, My son
13th Jun 2021 11:40pm
I’ve been waiting for you to upload this so I could add it to my Reading List! Quite apart from the Pride connection, it’s an expression of simple and honest love that’s completely unpretentious and all the more powerful for that.
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Re. Son, My son
14th Jun 2021 1:42pm
Re. Son, My son
Anonymous
14th Jun 2021 7:56pm
My stomach did this little lurch thing when I read this. It just felt all too close to home.
Kudos to you for stepping up though. Comes with a whole new journey of its own, but at least it’s a journey you can take together.
Happy days :)
-M
Kudos to you for stepping up though. Comes with a whole new journey of its own, but at least it’s a journey you can take together.
Happy days :)
-M
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Re: Re. Son, My son
20th Aug 2021 2:22pm
Hullo
you’re very kind, Lady. great to see you knocking about and thank you much for your eyes and words
you’re very kind, Lady. great to see you knocking about and thank you much for your eyes and words
Re. Son, My son
17th Jun 2021 8:49am
Re. Son, My son
17th Aug 2021 1:15pm
would we rather our children be alive and and miserable or happy and dead? the journey is not as easy as it seems but you carry your part well x
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Re: Re. Son, My son
20th Aug 2021 2:11pm
Hullo
you speak-eth the truth. it’s not all roses I grant you, but it’s roses enuff
thank you for droppin in and leaving your thoughts. I would tip my hat if I could find it
you speak-eth the truth. it’s not all roses I grant you, but it’s roses enuff
thank you for droppin in and leaving your thoughts. I would tip my hat if I could find it
Re. Son, My son
8th Sep 2021 8:32pm
This resonates strongly with me at the moment. If only they could realise the depth of love we have for them, which could never, ever be changed. If only that could be enough.
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Re: Re. Son, My son
9th Sep 2021 4:28pm
Hullo, Lady
ahh, it’s a strange ol’ existence. the world changes inna little heartbeat. then changes sporadically thereafter. there’s many a raised eyebrow forevermore
but yeah I agree and sympathise with you. thanks for droppin by and leaving your thoughts
ahh, it’s a strange ol’ existence. the world changes inna little heartbeat. then changes sporadically thereafter. there’s many a raised eyebrow forevermore
but yeah I agree and sympathise with you. thanks for droppin by and leaving your thoughts
Re. Son, My son
22nd Dec 2022 5:37pm
Nice 👌 short and sweet 👌 straight to the point 👌 👍 keep on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings always 🙏
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