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the shortest love story ever written
they held
hands
watched the
sun go
down
and they were
very, very
happy
Published 12th Jun 2021
| Edited 13th Jun 2021
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12th Jun 2021 11:49pm
13th Jun 2021 5:22am
Thank you, PoetSpeak, however, I think it became a little better after I fixed the last stanza
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
13th Jun 2021 00:26am
13th Jun 2021 5:42am
Thank you, LilDragonFly. Made some improvements in the last stanza. Seems to have flushed it out and made the idea complete.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
13th Jun 2021 3:16am
13th Jun 2021 5:45am
Many thanks, Blue. I hope somewhere out there that there are people who actually find that place.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
13th Jun 2021 5:36am
good evening beautiful Kitty
I have been thinking a lot lately
about the lack of intimacy in my life
this is beautiful I think it takes a mature soul to understand this...
love Brenda
I have been thinking a lot lately
about the lack of intimacy in my life
this is beautiful I think it takes a mature soul to understand this...
love Brenda
13th Jun 2021 5:47am
Thank you so much, Brenda. I try not to get to complex with ideas and cut right to the bone.
Love and hugs,
buddhakitty.
Love and hugs,
buddhakitty.
13th Jun 2021 9:34pm
I think they were "very, very happy" because they were both looking in the same direction ...
13th Jun 2021 10:08pm
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