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There's really no substituting.
I read today
of pain and ostracization
I read today of hate, intolerance
and demagoguery
I read today of the incomprehensible
and the should be unfathomable
beautifully iced of whipped
saccharinized sweetener
Thinly disguising
layers upon layers
of pious indoctrination
and a piped veiled attempt
toward enlightenment
I read today
that the meaning of equality
is not equal to everyone
I read today that love is not love
it's only for those chosen
I read today that my opinions and choices
aren't as important
and are fodder
"a joke"
Laughs stream into permeating tears
sweetness turns an acrid sour
as calls of 'uniting differences'
and finding 'humanity'
second proceed
with the 'reality'
of your life and your life and your life
(etc etc etc etc etc....)
being called a mockery
in whole as well as in political belief
The truth, hidden inside
a confectionery delight,
those kind with secret centers
revealed only when cutting through
spilling forth all the cavity creating
stomachache inducing
sickening sweetness
that cause rot and decay
in hopes that very truth
stay hidden
I read today that propaganda
when cooked in the right recipe
becomes palatable
and mistaken
for honest sugar
when it's all just coated of Aspartame.
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Re. There's really no substituting.
l read today there is no equality l read today there will be no equality yes the truth hidden so much propaganda in this crazy world that's so fucked up .
l read today a poetess xx
l read today a poetess xx
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11th Jun 2021 9:04pm
I thank you for reading and the kindness of your remarks, V. It's always a pleasure to see you on my page 🦋
Much appreciated, my friend 🙏🏻
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Much appreciated, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
Re. There's really no substituting.
The world should be created equal, but it isn't. So we fight for equality. Keep on writing you beautiful strong smart sexy woman.
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11th Jun 2021 9:45pm
Re. There's really no substituting.
11th Jun 2021 7:46am
It all started when we realised the world wasn't flat...
I've done so much on many topics you've touched here but you've done them way better than I ever will...
I'm very intrigued by how you explicitly convey how it's then tried to be hidden from sight...
Great ink
I've done so much on many topics you've touched here but you've done them way better than I ever will...
I'm very intrigued by how you explicitly convey how it's then tried to be hidden from sight...
Great ink
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Re: Re. There's really no substituting.
11th Jun 2021 9:46pm
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave such kind and generous comments POft
I'm grateful - 🙏🏻
A pleasure ✨
-B
I'm grateful - 🙏🏻
A pleasure ✨
-B
Re. There's really no substituting.
11th Jun 2021 7:52am
My Princess, one of your better works; you nailed it with the last line. Question: How do you continually improve? WOW! Hugs and peace, Oral
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11th Jun 2021 9:48pm
You make me smile, Oral.
Thanks for the compliment and the thoughtfulness of your sentiments.
I try my best!
🌹-💙
B
Thanks for the compliment and the thoughtfulness of your sentiments.
I try my best!
🌹-💙
B
Re. There's really no substituting.
11th Jun 2021 8:51am
Sadly hate spread like a fungus on society
People write pieces with hatred bleeding from their words, thinking you can't see them through the haze of lies
Great write beautiful
Strong piece
Love and light
Ron x
People write pieces with hatred bleeding from their words, thinking you can't see them through the haze of lies
Great write beautiful
Strong piece
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. There's really no substituting.
You definitely nailed it, Ron. Hate breeds hate. Intolerance breeds intolerance.... etc etc... I make my own efforts to unite and transcend. Hopefully more will continue to have their eyes opened to see the goodness of people and not focus on the parts of others that aren't ANY of their business and have ZERO affects on their own lives. We all bleed red, that's what it should boil down to. Basic human decency.....because we're essentially all the same.
Thanks for your kinship in thought, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
It means the world.
🌹 - 🌈
Thanks for your kinship in thought, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
It means the world.
🌹 - 🌈
Re. There's really no substituting.
11th Jun 2021 8:56am
Those who want to be hateful and ignorent will always find excuses to be so. Awsome powerful write, friend.
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11th Jun 2021 9:56pm
Sadly, that's true.
I can only hope to keep that ignorance in a minority of the population.... because it's dangerous and truly vile. Thanks for the truthfully power filled sentiments and the generous list add.
I'm so grateful for like minds!
🌹 - 🌈
Be well!
I can only hope to keep that ignorance in a minority of the population.... because it's dangerous and truly vile. Thanks for the truthfully power filled sentiments and the generous list add.
I'm so grateful for like minds!
🌹 - 🌈
Be well!
Re. There's really no substituting.
11th Jun 2021 9:20am
Oh, if only I were your equal. From each there worth to each there need, dividing up your brilliance among the many lesser poets. They should tax you more and tax me less and make us all listen to piss poor poetry until I sound as brilliant as the rest. If only poetry were based on mediocracy instead of meritocracy. Calliope, Minerva, Saraswati, and Brigid are the many names poets call on for blessing. you must be busy indeed between answering prayers and writing poetry to just living with passion.
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Wow! methinks your much too kind compliment is just lovely and so uniquely incredible. I wholly thank you for that illuminated craft work, your list add and all the thoughtfulness. I'm humbly appreciative and honored that it inspired such words.....
Much love and respect,
🌹 - B
Much love and respect,
🌹 - B
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Re: Re. There's really no substituting.
11th Jun 2021 10:04pm
I really appreciate that, Ted.
Thanks for stopping by to read and leave your thoughts.
-A pleasure ✨
🌹-💙
B
Thanks for stopping by to read and leave your thoughts.
-A pleasure ✨
🌹-💙
B
Re. There's really no substituting.
11th Jun 2021 11:37am
Re: Re. There's really no substituting.
11th Jun 2021 10:05pm
Terrifically appreciated comment.
Thanks for reading and taking the time - 🙏🏻..
-B
Thanks for reading and taking the time - 🙏🏻..
-B
Re. There's really no substituting.
11th Jun 2021 12:22pm
A great hardhitting poem against artificiality, fakes, hate and ostracism. Indeed many hide the truth. Your vocab is awesome. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
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I appreciate the opportunity to read your insights and summation. It's kind and I wholly thank you for taking that time.. - 🙏🏻
Glad you enjoyed it.
🌹 - B
Glad you enjoyed it.
🌹 - B
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11th Jun 2021 10:09pm
What a freaking keen observation, indeed. I struggle with it too.
Thanks, Tim
I appreciate everything, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Thanks, Tim
I appreciate everything, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. There's really no substituting.
11th Jun 2021 2:43pm
"I read today
of pain and ostracization
I read today of hate, intolerance
and demagoguery
I read today of the incomprehensible
and the should be unfathomable
beautifully iced of whipped
saccharinized sweetener..
You see, this stanzas alone without going any further..
There's really no substituting..
of pain and ostracization
I read today of hate, intolerance
and demagoguery
I read today of the incomprehensible
and the should be unfathomable
beautifully iced of whipped
saccharinized sweetener..
You see, this stanzas alone without going any further..
There's really no substituting..
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11th Jun 2021 7:40pm
Extremely kind words and I'm heartened by your visit. Thanks for taking the time.
Best,
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Best,
🌹 - 🌈
Re. There's really no substituting.
Anonymous
11th Jun 2021 7:25pm
A little louder for the twatwaffles at the back, if you please. 👊🏻
#NoJoke
#NoJoke
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11th Jun 2021 7:34pm
Re. There's really no substituting.
11th Jun 2021 8:14pm
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11th Jun 2021 10:10pm
I can feel that like from here, Remy!
Thanks so much for stopping by and leaving your thoughts.
🌹 -
Always a pleasure
-B
Thanks so much for stopping by and leaving your thoughts.
🌹 -
Always a pleasure
-B
Re. There's really no substituting.
11th Jun 2021 8:47pm
Wow. Wow, wow, Lady Blue❣
I enjoyed, very much, this erudite, melancholy, poignant slice if truth. You write about sugar coating with not a scintilla of the sweet stuff to make the medecine go down. I typically choose some favorite passages but in this case I felt it foolish to cut and paste the entire poem here😍 Okay one masterful passage,
"I read today that propaganda
when cooked in the right recipe
becomes palatable." You certainly cooked this one just right and seasoned it perfectly. Bravissima, goddess conejita🐻💞🐰
I enjoyed, very much, this erudite, melancholy, poignant slice if truth. You write about sugar coating with not a scintilla of the sweet stuff to make the medecine go down. I typically choose some favorite passages but in this case I felt it foolish to cut and paste the entire poem here😍 Okay one masterful passage,
"I read today that propaganda
when cooked in the right recipe
becomes palatable." You certainly cooked this one just right and seasoned it perfectly. Bravissima, goddess conejita🐻💞🐰
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11th Jun 2021 10:15pm
Hi there, BB! 🐻 🌹 🐰
I'm glade you enjoyed my offering and that it tasted just right! I am so grateful for your thoughtful comments, the generosity of your list add and your awesomeness well from which I draw such kick ass inspiration and insight on how to become/be better.... You encouragement is epic and I recognize it's amazing affects.
Ty Ty Ty!!!
🌹 - 💙
xoxoxoxo
-B
I'm glade you enjoyed my offering and that it tasted just right! I am so grateful for your thoughtful comments, the generosity of your list add and your awesomeness well from which I draw such kick ass inspiration and insight on how to become/be better.... You encouragement is epic and I recognize it's amazing affects.
Ty Ty Ty!!!
🌹 - 💙
xoxoxoxo
-B
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12th Jun 2021 00:00am
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Re: Re. There's really no substituting.
lol...@ the 🔊 and 🎤.. hahaha...
I love your air punch in unison, Ethan.
Yes! ✊🏻
Very much appreciate your remarks and thoughtfulness, here.... Sometimes I just can't abide, that's for sure.... ;)
Always a pleasure ✨ - 🐝
🌹 - 🌈
I love your air punch in unison, Ethan.
Yes! ✊🏻
Very much appreciate your remarks and thoughtfulness, here.... Sometimes I just can't abide, that's for sure.... ;)
Always a pleasure ✨ - 🐝
🌹 - 🌈
Re. There's really no substituting.
12th Jun 2021 3:54am
Dear BV,
All that being said what do we do? How to stop the madness? Since the beginning of recorded time seemingly nothing’s changed, we just wear better clothes and don’t have to build our own fires. I’m sorry to sound like such a downer. As of late, there isn’t a single thing of beauty anywhere. Nobody’s nice to each other, everyone feels entitled and yet the second I look out my window I’m grateful for the wildflowers. Ugh! Send me some Blue cheer please. X H🌷
All that being said what do we do? How to stop the madness? Since the beginning of recorded time seemingly nothing’s changed, we just wear better clothes and don’t have to build our own fires. I’m sorry to sound like such a downer. As of late, there isn’t a single thing of beauty anywhere. Nobody’s nice to each other, everyone feels entitled and yet the second I look out my window I’m grateful for the wildflowers. Ugh! Send me some Blue cheer please. X H🌷
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13th Jun 2021 3:51am
I will absolutely send some cheer your way, my lovely friend 🙏🏻... I promise to try to make that happen soon, via a new write!
I know it's all mostly grey skies and bad news reports.... At least that's how it seems to me, a lot of the time.... but I couldn't let intolerance and propaganda spread without taking a stance... I can't abide, that's for sure...
I am so grateful for your heartfelt comments and the generous list add... it's important to me, to know the impact... AND your opinions mean much to me.
Sunlight, cheer and warmth your way ✨ 🌼
-💙
xo
B
I know it's all mostly grey skies and bad news reports.... At least that's how it seems to me, a lot of the time.... but I couldn't let intolerance and propaganda spread without taking a stance... I can't abide, that's for sure...
I am so grateful for your heartfelt comments and the generous list add... it's important to me, to know the impact... AND your opinions mean much to me.
Sunlight, cheer and warmth your way ✨ 🌼
-💙
xo
B
Re. There's really no substituting.
This really was mind-blowing. Propaganda can be made palatable to the masses. And you made the process crystal clear. Bob Dylan said, "Patriotism is the last refuge to which a scoundrel clings." Your poem really blew apart the camouflage double-speak uses to hide. And you did it with such great honesty that the last shard of illusion is made transparent to the eye of the beholder. Truly the best illustration of how we can be brainwashed into lying to ourselves I've come across. You made the process very clear.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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13th Jun 2021 3:40am
I'm so so very glad you could see the whole picture here, John. Sometimes it's breathtaking and I cannot wrap my head around the amount of utter intolerance that still exists in today's world. It's heartening to read comments like yours and I truly cherish it.
Thank you so much for sharing, the list add and being so open.
🌹-💙
xo
Susan
Thank you so much for sharing, the list add and being so open.
🌹-💙
xo
Susan
Re. There's really no substituting.
12th Jun 2021 7:20am
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13th Jun 2021 3:41am
Re. There's really no substituting.
17th Jul 2021 3:40am
And I read today an excellent piece that was both illuminating and wonderful..
"The truth, hidden inside
a confectionery delight,"
you are right, there is no real substituting.
Well done.
"The truth, hidden inside
a confectionery delight,"
you are right, there is no real substituting.
Well done.
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17th Jul 2021 4:16am
Thanks so much for reading and leaving me your thoughts, Wally!
I very much appreciate it
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I very much appreciate it
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