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Amalga[mate]
Only me.
I am the only one,
in the whole world.
Just. Me.
It would only take
one glance,
The deepest inhale
or the briefest listen.
Me.
Your entire being—
sparked to instant hum.
The sound of recognition
undeniable, in it's certitude
of reflective bonds
Our bond.
An unbreakable union
of like minds
and inalienable bodies.
Two sides of one coin.
One side recognizing itself in the other.
More powerful together
as one whole.
Filling one another
to the hilt.
The pinnacle.
When combined—
resurrected as one soul.
Undissolvable in staunch unbroken
A fiercely loyal unspoken
Mutual in shared agrees
This, our pact of ownership.
Coveted,
is this sacrosanct dynamic.
One that authors write prose about,
and housewives in the suburbs
touch themselves dreaming about.
Our chosen reality.
Educated of want
and learned in fiery desire.
Choice, equivalent to dreams come true
Us.
.
.
.
WE.
We are so much sweeter than
We fuck like Kings and Queens
We are consecrated glory
We define our love
and are proven
of lost then utterly found
In solemn truth.
Me— now We.
You and I
two
as
ONE.
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Re. Amalgamate.
7th Jun 2021 9:09am
Re: Re. Amalgamate.
7th Jun 2021 9:50pm
Hey there, DC... Nice to see you, 🦋
Yeah, I remember it was... for a time.... hopefully I'll find it, once again..... my goal is that deep connection that also burrows in with time...
I appreciate you reading, leaving your thoughts and your kind list add.....
I enjoy your insightfulness!
🌹-B
Yeah, I remember it was... for a time.... hopefully I'll find it, once again..... my goal is that deep connection that also burrows in with time...
I appreciate you reading, leaving your thoughts and your kind list add.....
I enjoy your insightfulness!
🌹-B
Re. Amalgamate.
7th Jun 2021 9:15am
Oh to be a one of two, to be part of a loving, wonderful duo
If only I sigh
Loved this beautiful poetess I loved it
Love and light
Ron x
If only I sigh
Loved this beautiful poetess I loved it
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. Amalgamate.
8th Jun 2021 1:37am
I am so grateful for your thoughtful comments and the ability you have you put a smile on my face, dear friend 🙏🏻 Thanks for the generous list add and your understanding that it's not just about the S&M of it all... I appreciate you-🌹
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
💙-B
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
💙-B
Re. Amalga[mate]
7th Jun 2021 9:44am
At the start I was pondering the possibility that by being introspective you were going to reveal a truth applicable to all of us. Then a song popped up in my head, “ I'm You:You Are Me and We Are You”, by Maxwell.
A very unique write with a dab of metaphysical questions.
A very unique write with a dab of metaphysical questions.
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Re: Re. Amalga[mate]
8th Jun 2021 1:43am
Hey there, JM, :)
I love where your mind took you while reading!! it's so uplifting and illuminating that those questions were thoughts 'popped' allowing for reflection...I appreciate your thoughtfulness there, your list add and the time you've taken to leave your insightful with me...I'll have to check out that song! Thanks for that, too!
Always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹-💙
-B
I love where your mind took you while reading!! it's so uplifting and illuminating that those questions were thoughts 'popped' allowing for reflection...I appreciate your thoughtfulness there, your list add and the time you've taken to leave your insightful with me...I'll have to check out that song! Thanks for that, too!
Always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹-💙
-B
Re. Amalga[mate]
7th Jun 2021 10:15am
Such a fulfilling read.. from start to finish there is a path in ur pen, to bask in such unity.. define it to completion.. *powers there! ;)
"When combined—
resurrected as one soul. "
~this entire stanza just resounds with ur energy, lady.. pure lovelies!
So much striking sentiment and beautiful Awareness for the bond unbroken tween Two/One. much enjoyed..
with snugglins n smile,
~d
"When combined—
resurrected as one soul. "
~this entire stanza just resounds with ur energy, lady.. pure lovelies!
So much striking sentiment and beautiful Awareness for the bond unbroken tween Two/One. much enjoyed..
with snugglins n smile,
~d
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Re: Re. Amalga[mate]
Ohh d!!
It's always a yummy treat to get my hands on your poetry /comments... They're some of my favorites!!! I swear... (shhhh 🤫) hahaha.... I am ALL snugglins n' smiles that you found a resonance and enjoyment, when reading!! Thanks for the truly awesome sentiments and the generous list add...Your thoughts tend to stimulate and soothe with a serious infectious joy!
I bask in it!!!
Smooches from FL 😁 💋
🌹 - 💙
Please don't stay away too long!!
xo-B
It's always a yummy treat to get my hands on your poetry /comments... They're some of my favorites!!! I swear... (shhhh 🤫) hahaha.... I am ALL snugglins n' smiles that you found a resonance and enjoyment, when reading!! Thanks for the truly awesome sentiments and the generous list add...Your thoughts tend to stimulate and soothe with a serious infectious joy!
I bask in it!!!
Smooches from FL 😁 💋
🌹 - 💙
Please don't stay away too long!!
xo-B
Re. Amalga[mate]
7th Jun 2021 12:57pm
WOW!!!! Thanks for the PERFECT description of what it means for two to be ONE. The challenge is for BOTH to realize, acknowledge, and practice this miracle. Thanks for the way you open minds and hearts to eternal truths. Hugs and kisses, oral
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Re: Re. Amalga[mate]
8th Jun 2021 1:53am
Hi, Oral!
I appreciate your thoughtful comments and yes, indeed, it can be a challenge to maintain that valuable connection and honest amalgamation of souls and minds.... much easier, if they're both of the same page and intensity of want.
It's lovely to see you 🦋, my dear poet.
My day is brighter, because of it.
🌹-💙
B
I appreciate your thoughtful comments and yes, indeed, it can be a challenge to maintain that valuable connection and honest amalgamation of souls and minds.... much easier, if they're both of the same page and intensity of want.
It's lovely to see you 🦋, my dear poet.
My day is brighter, because of it.
🌹-💙
B
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Re: Re. Amalga[mate]
8th Jun 2021 1:59am
I do adore 'powerful and gripping' and I humbly thank you for such wonderfully kind words, Tim. I am so grateful for you. I appreciate the list add and your awesome visits... I look forward to them!
Much love, my friend!
🌹-💙
xo
B
Much love, my friend!
🌹-💙
xo
B
Re. Amalga[mate]
7th Jun 2021 4:52pm
Re: Re. Amalga[mate]
8th Jun 2021 1:57am
My dearest FeNyX,
I am all giant smiles, seeing your comments and totally loving that "Quite awesome" to freaking pieces!.. Thank you for reading, the generous list add here and those you've added previously...as well as taking the time you do....
It's such a pleasure ✨
🌹-💙
xo
Be well, my friend.
-S
I am all giant smiles, seeing your comments and totally loving that "Quite awesome" to freaking pieces!.. Thank you for reading, the generous list add here and those you've added previously...as well as taking the time you do....
It's such a pleasure ✨
🌹-💙
xo
Be well, my friend.
-S
Re. Amalga[mate]
7th Jun 2021 10:20pm
Dear BV,
So where does one go to get this? I just need an address, or even a number I’ll call…
“ Our chosen reality.
Educated of want
and learned in fiery desire.
Choice, equivalent to dreams come true” Is it too much to ask for? I feel like this is a reasonable request. You pin the tail on the donkey with this piece. You do indeed. It’s one thing to incite romance, lust, passion with a bit of fantasy but when you you’re inciting it just to get through doing the dishes…something’s got
to change. To truly desire the person you’re with…ahhhh what a thought… Righteous write! H🌷
So where does one go to get this? I just need an address, or even a number I’ll call…
“ Our chosen reality.
Educated of want
and learned in fiery desire.
Choice, equivalent to dreams come true” Is it too much to ask for? I feel like this is a reasonable request. You pin the tail on the donkey with this piece. You do indeed. It’s one thing to incite romance, lust, passion with a bit of fantasy but when you you’re inciting it just to get through doing the dishes…something’s got
to change. To truly desire the person you’re with…ahhhh what a thought… Righteous write! H🌷
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Re: Re. Amalga[mate]
8th Jun 2021 2:16am
Ohh H!
I have been there, Exactly, ... I can remember back, when I was married ... Wondering how could I possibly stomach, (much less find that fire 🔥) watching the folding of one more pair of undies that are inside out... OR those damn white t-shirts that ARE left turned inside out, coming out of the dryer that way ... (folding the whites is something I rank right up there with getting a cavity filled or a mammogram... just for clarification).. where it was expected for me to 'right side out' then fold all nice and pretty... Man, that never happened... lol....Maybe why, I'm single today?.. hahaha... I remember thinking it's the accumulated little things like that, that literally killed desire and passion.. THAT, and not wanting to find a way to rekindle.... Zero want, there. I know that's not something I ever want to happen or go through again...So, I guess my imagination is vast, creating writes like this one.... and it's where I am relegated for now ... yet, I do hold out hope!....
I am so grateful for your thoughtful comments, dear lady. I wish I COULD 'one click', find this for us both!! hahaha 😂
I appreciate your generous list add and all the terrific smiles you have unknowingly planted on my face ☺
Much love and respect,
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
I have been there, Exactly, ... I can remember back, when I was married ... Wondering how could I possibly stomach, (much less find that fire 🔥) watching the folding of one more pair of undies that are inside out... OR those damn white t-shirts that ARE left turned inside out, coming out of the dryer that way ... (folding the whites is something I rank right up there with getting a cavity filled or a mammogram... just for clarification).. where it was expected for me to 'right side out' then fold all nice and pretty... Man, that never happened... lol....Maybe why, I'm single today?.. hahaha... I remember thinking it's the accumulated little things like that, that literally killed desire and passion.. THAT, and not wanting to find a way to rekindle.... Zero want, there. I know that's not something I ever want to happen or go through again...So, I guess my imagination is vast, creating writes like this one.... and it's where I am relegated for now ... yet, I do hold out hope!....
I am so grateful for your thoughtful comments, dear lady. I wish I COULD 'one click', find this for us both!! hahaha 😂
I appreciate your generous list add and all the terrific smiles you have unknowingly planted on my face ☺
Much love and respect,
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re: Re. Amalga[mate]
8th Jun 2021 3:24am
“ OR those damn white t-shirts that ARE left turned inside out, coming out of the dryer that way”
Stop! I can’t! My stomach hurts laughing, honestly, I gave that up. How they come out of the dryer is how they get folded and put away. If you’re not going to take the .00000001 second it takes to right the shirt then you should wear it inside out. Ijit. That’s not a nice thing to say about your significant other is it? (Tough nuts)
One click or the other one that you swipe, but swipe it the correct way, we don’t want anymore duds. 😉
X
Stop! I can’t! My stomach hurts laughing, honestly, I gave that up. How they come out of the dryer is how they get folded and put away. If you’re not going to take the .00000001 second it takes to right the shirt then you should wear it inside out. Ijit. That’s not a nice thing to say about your significant other is it? (Tough nuts)
One click or the other one that you swipe, but swipe it the correct way, we don’t want anymore duds. 😉
X
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Re: Re. Amalga[mate]
8th Jun 2021 4:09am
🏆
👆🏻 You just won the solidarity trophy....
Hahaha!!! 😂 😀😝😎🤣🙃😉
I promise, no duds in this future!! 🔮
🌹 - 💙 - 🌷
xo
B
👆🏻 You just won the solidarity trophy....
Hahaha!!! 😂 😀😝😎🤣🙃😉
I promise, no duds in this future!! 🔮
🌹 - 💙 - 🌷
xo
B
Re. Amalga[mate]
8th Jun 2021 4:04am
Together we are one make new memories together forever. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. Amalga[mate]
8th Jun 2021 5:09am
Re. Amalga[mate]
9th Jun 2021 7:26am
Yes your the only one your fucking good like a wet dream cum true as we love you and your work you just get better as you get wetter . lv xx sweet dream
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Re: Re. Amalga[mate]
9th Jun 2021 7:51am
Ohhh, such feisty, frisky comments! Your readership as well as your kind list add, is so appreciated and I am very glad that you enjoyed, V ;)
It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹-💙
xo
B
It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹-💙
xo
B
Re. Amalga[mate]
12th Jun 2021 4:25am
Brilliantly woven metaphor. Reminded me of the Janus God from ancient times both female and male. One being. But you said it perfectly. Loved every nuance here and where it took me.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. Amalga[mate]
13th Jun 2021 4:34am
So glad I could take you to enjoyed places in mind and spirit, John ✨I loved reading your insights, as always you touch me!
I appreciate your time, the generous list add here and in all that you've deemed of worth.
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
xo
Susan
I appreciate your time, the generous list add here and in all that you've deemed of worth.
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
xo
Susan
Re. Amalga[mate]
14th Jul 2021 5:21pm
Gotta have them crowns!
That was absolutely phenomenal. I liked those certain phrases, "the sound of recognition undeniable" italicized and accentuated.
Great job Blue. Amazing as always.
That was absolutely phenomenal. I liked those certain phrases, "the sound of recognition undeniable" italicized and accentuated.
Great job Blue. Amazing as always.
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