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If I Could Hold You
there are times
you know them
when only a hug will do
I may be far away
but in my heart I'm close by
rushing to find you
finally I'm there
taking you in my arms
a year of weight lifting
doing you proud
you know them
when only a hug will do
I may be far away
but in my heart I'm close by
rushing to find you
finally I'm there
taking you in my arms
a year of weight lifting
doing you proud
Author's Note
I lift weights every other day, staying strong for you ..
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1st Jun 2021 2:36pm
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Re. If I Could Hold You
1st Jun 2021 2:38pm
A great blend of words with application. I, too, enjoy MWF in the gym...push on! Hugs and peace, oral
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1st Jun 2021 2:40pm
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1st Jun 2021 2:41pm
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1st Jun 2021 2:40pm
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1st Jun 2021 2:45pm
yes, its what you do for the one's you love and yourself of course ...
Thanks Robert
Thanks Robert
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1st Jun 2021 3:30pm
Started exercising again at the beginning of the pandemic, something to do. Love getting stronger
Keeps me focused
Determined
Thx P
Appreciate
Keeps me focused
Determined
Thx P
Appreciate
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1st Jun 2021 3:56pm
Re. If I Could Hold You
Anonymous
1st Jun 2021 4:52pm
This inspires me. I admire what you do.
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1st Jun 2021 5:00pm
Thank you Gayle
I appreciate your comment
I've been watching your progress from afar....
I appreciate your comment
I've been watching your progress from afar....
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Anonymous
1st Jun 2021 5:02pm
Thank you Poet Speak. Don't be so distant.
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Re. If I Could Hold You
1st Jun 2021 6:10pm
I hear ya, Poet. Always good to be ready when the love train pulls up to the station!
Like!
Like!
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1st Jun 2021 6:21pm
I lose count track sometimes on my rep sets so I just do more , abundance I can believe in ...
Pandemic silver lining if there is one
Thanks A 😎
Pandemic silver lining if there is one
Thanks A 😎
Re. If I Could Hold You
1st Jun 2021 9:37pm
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1st Jun 2021 9:44pm
Everyone should lift weights, they don't have to be heavy, do lots of reps. Get strong, be happy
Stay tuned LJ
More to cum
Stay tuned LJ
More to cum
Re. If I Could Hold You
1st Jun 2021 11:54pm
Truly inspiring Poet!
I have kinda on and off relationship with them...this poem certainly an inspiration and a reminder! Thanks for that.
I have kinda on and off relationship with them...this poem certainly an inspiration and a reminder! Thanks for that.
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2nd Jun 2021 1:09am
It was now or never so I chose Now
Glad I did
Hardest part is starting... and pushing yourself when you don't feel like doing it. Those are the challenges, the rest is glory
Appreciate the nod CF
Glad I did
Hardest part is starting... and pushing yourself when you don't feel like doing it. Those are the challenges, the rest is glory
Appreciate the nod CF
Re. If I Could Hold You
2nd Jun 2021 4:55am
Dear PS,
Bravo! You’ve inspired me to look at my dumb bells. Or are they called weight bells? Anyway, I’m looking at them, don’t rush me!
But, you’re right, we need to stay strong and vigilant in our quest to stay sane and exercising is a win-win way to do this. I like how you correlated the exercise and strength with being strong for the one you love physically and mentally. Super Like! H🌷
Bravo! You’ve inspired me to look at my dumb bells. Or are they called weight bells? Anyway, I’m looking at them, don’t rush me!
But, you’re right, we need to stay strong and vigilant in our quest to stay sane and exercising is a win-win way to do this. I like how you correlated the exercise and strength with being strong for the one you love physically and mentally. Super Like! H🌷
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Good morning H:
Yes, as we age strength and balance are key.
It was a fun write and got a fair amount of comments so I must of done something right for a change 😁
l always appreciate your visits H
If you start lifting, go gentle and work yiur way up. No rush, just have a schedule and stick to it, it will yield results, I promise
Thank you
🤠🤠
Yes, as we age strength and balance are key.
It was a fun write and got a fair amount of comments so I must of done something right for a change 😁
l always appreciate your visits H
If you start lifting, go gentle and work yiur way up. No rush, just have a schedule and stick to it, it will yield results, I promise
Thank you
🤠🤠
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2nd Jun 2021 5:59am
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2nd Jun 2021 12:24pm
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2nd Jun 2021 12:38pm
My geriatrician-husband says muscle mass is THE most important thing to stave off age-related decline... so keep at it!
Love the bit of romance you added to this. There's nothing like a good, strong hug..... ❤❤
You're writing from the best parts of your heart and it's awesome.
Love the bit of romance you added to this. There's nothing like a good, strong hug..... ❤❤
You're writing from the best parts of your heart and it's awesome.
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2nd Jun 2021 12:46pm
Yes, your hub is right
I feel much stronger and a good strong hug is FUN,
I am writing more from the heart again, it feels good rather than some of the other stuff I was penning. Hopefully I don't go off the rails.....
Thx k
😍🤠
I feel much stronger and a good strong hug is FUN,
I am writing more from the heart again, it feels good rather than some of the other stuff I was penning. Hopefully I don't go off the rails.....
Thx k
😍🤠
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2nd Jun 2021 6:58pm
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2nd Jun 2021 7:00pm
Who's kidding who, we know that will happen and soon too I'm sure
Might try to write it another way though.....😇
Might try to write it another way though.....😇
Re. If I Could Hold You
2nd Jun 2021 6:40pm
keep up with your motivation, and also very tender and powerful feeling of this piece of work here we have
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2nd Jun 2021 6:55pm
This is such a beautiful comment on so many levels.
I used to write like this a lot and then got into darker places so I appreciate the recognition on a softer approach ....
Thank you
Stay tuned
I used to write like this a lot and then got into darker places so I appreciate the recognition on a softer approach ....
Thank you
Stay tuned
Re. If I Could Hold You
2nd Jun 2021 9:10pm
Everyone loves hugs! especially a strong pair of arms that can lift you up! ;) * hugs *
Love and fitness - and endorphins! Need all of them. :)
Love and fitness - and endorphins! Need all of them. :)
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Re. If I Could Hold You
2nd Jun 2021 9:45pm
I specialize in Love
Next time you are in need, hit me up, will work out the logistics and get you a good squeeze.....
References available upon request
Vapor Hug
Thx Kx
Next time you are in need, hit me up, will work out the logistics and get you a good squeeze.....
References available upon request
Vapor Hug
Thx Kx
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13th Jul 2021 4:21pm
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