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No; you won't ( for JeJe )
ever have that—
what you had with him;
you will experience difference
instead
Difference that is incomparable
except to its own depth; as his
was to his, alone with you
No; you won't
ever have that—
what you had with him
But Love cannot be outdone
by heights of imagination
nor barriers of suffering;
and Love
isn't meant to be contained
anymore than a flame, flickering—
Because Love, that which you are
and fashioned from, Love
is a boundless energy of force
that cannot be controlled
You see, you do not choose Love
it chooses You—
Be ready to walk through its door
and discover a magic
you've never experienced before
A magic that gives release
to all the pain you've endured
~
what you had with him;
you will experience difference
instead
Difference that is incomparable
except to its own depth; as his
was to his, alone with you
No; you won't
ever have that—
what you had with him
But Love cannot be outdone
by heights of imagination
nor barriers of suffering;
and Love
isn't meant to be contained
anymore than a flame, flickering—
Because Love, that which you are
and fashioned from, Love
is a boundless energy of force
that cannot be controlled
You see, you do not choose Love
it chooses You—
Be ready to walk through its door
and discover a magic
you've never experienced before
A magic that gives release
to all the pain you've endured
~
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Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
28th May 2021 6:59pm
Expressed with a flow, like I was reading something.. a cliff note in a book I should have picked up long ago.
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3rd Jun 2021 00:41am
Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
28th May 2021 7:29pm
Amazing and Outstanding ink
The way it should be felt and written
BIGGEST OF BIG LIKES
The way it should be felt and written
BIGGEST OF BIG LIKES
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Re: Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
3rd Jun 2021 00:41am
Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Nov 2021 2:10am
28th May 2021 7:53pm
your friends must surely be lucky to have one such as you and your wisdom on their side.
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Re: Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
3rd Jun 2021 00:42am
Re: Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Nov 2021 2:11am
3rd Jun 2021 1:42pm
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Re: Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
3rd Jun 2021 4:49pm
Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
28th May 2021 9:10pm
It's an amazing poem, Ahavati. This is the profound reality of love. First of all, love chooses you. Are you strong enough to endure what it gives you. Whether you are or not, you can't leave it whatever the results are. Jesus loved and loves us, but He chose us. This is the difference here.
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Re: Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
3rd Jun 2021 00:43am
Thank you, JZ. Absolutely correct. Love will never give up on anyone, despite how they may give up on themselves. Astute observation. Thank you.
Re: Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Nov 2021 2:11am
3rd Jun 2021 1:39pm
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Re: Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
3rd Jun 2021 4:50pm
Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
29th May 2021 00:11am
This is a very strong piece of work in a lyrical sense. It flows and generates thoughts and feelings in the reader. I don’t know the story behind it and don’t particularly care to, as I prefer to view poems as works of art as opposed to bald facts. As a poem this is a work of art, because it speaks to us on an emotional plane outside mere comprehension of meaning.
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Re: Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
3rd Jun 2021 00:44am
Thank you, Jack. That's a beautiful response and yet another affirmation. You seem to always be providing those.
Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
29th May 2021 2:55am
Deep breath .. this is so Beautiful Ahavati and yes, it is truth .. love definitely chooses us in many forms .. thank you my dear friend for such a loving gesture .. it means more than I can express oxox
Your sister in poetry
JeJe
Your sister in poetry
JeJe
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Re: Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
3rd Jun 2021 00:44am
You're very welcome, JeJe. It is a channeled message for you in the form of a poetry; our language of love and pain.
You are very much loved and appreciated here. Thank you, my friend. xo
You are very much loved and appreciated here. Thank you, my friend. xo
Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
29th May 2021 4:08am
Dear A,
Finally! Words of understanding and consolation that don’t offend or piss off. It is staggering the responses received, all kindly intended to be sure, but most so painfully cruel somehow. This is a wonderful poem bringing true solace for grief. This and a hug are the only items needed. H🌷
Finally! Words of understanding and consolation that don’t offend or piss off. It is staggering the responses received, all kindly intended to be sure, but most so painfully cruel somehow. This is a wonderful poem bringing true solace for grief. This and a hug are the only items needed. H🌷
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Re: Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
3rd Jun 2021 00:46am
LOL! Honoria, if it's one thing I can't stand it's pacification or clichés during time of pain. I wish I could take credit for this message, but I can only take credit for the form. Thank you, my friend. xo
Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
29th May 2021 4:56am
You choose who you love and you get to know the person who becomes your best friend and lover. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
3rd Jun 2021 00:47am
A Chinese woman who was in an arranged marriage told me once that you don't marry who you fall in love with; you fall in love with who you marry. Unfortunately, that doesn't always ring true for many who are married away to much older, abusive husbands. And let's face it: Love never dies.
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29th May 2021 5:21am
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Re: Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
3rd Jun 2021 00:48am
Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
29th May 2021 7:53am
Yes... Your friends are so very lucky. And I proudly count myself as one of your friends. Such wisdom to have this sort of glimpse into the interworking of love, and then to turn that glimpse into a vision that is expressed in beautiful words. Very cool.
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Re: Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
3rd Jun 2021 00:49am
Thank you, ZS. That's a pretty humbling observation. I very much appreciate it.
Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
30th May 2021 5:42am
Loving someone is an experience...
And you curved it beautifully for both sides...
Another amazing write
And you curved it beautifully for both sides...
Another amazing write
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Re: Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
3rd Jun 2021 4:49pm
Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
Anonymous
30th May 2021 9:52pm
I've commented on every poem of yours posted in the last 4+ years and then some, but for this I couldn't come up with anything other than,
Can't argue with the Truth.
📄❤
Can't argue with the Truth.
📄❤
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Re: Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
3rd Jun 2021 00:50am
Sometimes there are no words, which is why I don't comment on all of yours. Besides, I know how you feel without them. Thank you. ❤
Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
30th May 2021 10:37pm
Re: Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
3rd Jun 2021 00:50am
Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
20th Jun 2021 7:01pm
I love this! "But love cannot be outdone/by heights of imagination/nor barriers of suffering"..
Fantastic!
Fantastic!
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Re: Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
20th Jun 2021 8:19pm
Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
11th Jul 2021 7:21pm
“ that which you are
and fashioned from, Love
is a boundless energy of force
that cannot be controlled”
Some of us forget we are created from two individuals who felt love at one point in their lives.
Truly an endearing and embracing write.
and fashioned from, Love
is a boundless energy of force
that cannot be controlled”
Some of us forget we are created from two individuals who felt love at one point in their lives.
Truly an endearing and embracing write.
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Re: Re. No; you won't ( for JeJe )
11th Jul 2021 7:58pm