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... upon a star
I wish
you knew
how.
I.
see.
you.
maybe
then
you'd know
forever.
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 10th Apr 2021
| Edited 20th Apr 2021
Author's Note
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Re. ... upon a star
10th Apr 2021 1:53am
Re: Re. ... upon a star
20th Apr 2021 2:27am
Ty so much for reading and your comments, E.
I appreciate you, very much 🙏🏻
🌹
xo
I appreciate you, very much 🙏🏻
🌹
xo
Re. ... upon a star
10th Apr 2021 2:18am
Re: Re. ... upon a star
20th Apr 2021 2:28am
Awww.... right back at you, my dear sister and beautiful bright shining soul!
I am so grateful for your thoughtful comments and support
💙💙💙
xo
I am so grateful for your thoughtful comments and support
💙💙💙
xo
Re. ... upon a star
10th Apr 2021 2:33am
Love the exquisite composition here and the emotional resonance that rolls through the rhythm of your words.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. ... upon a star
10th Apr 2021 2:36am
You're a lovely soul, my friend!
Ty Ty Ty 🙏
I appreciate all the kindness, John
You are positively awesome
🌹
xo - Susan
Ty Ty Ty 🙏
I appreciate all the kindness, John
You are positively awesome
🌹
xo - Susan
Re. ... upon a star
10th Apr 2021 3:18am
Re: Re. ... upon a star
10th Apr 2021 4:15am
You pack an even bigger wallop, my dear.
💪🏻
Much love and loads of respect,
🌹
xoxo
💜
💪🏻
Much love and loads of respect,
🌹
xoxo
💜
Re. ... upon a star
10th Apr 2021 4:27am
Re: Re. ... upon a star
10th Apr 2021 3:34pm
I like you keeping me on my toes, Francisco.. Ty so much for reading and that kind comment
🌹
🌹
Anonymous
- Edited 28th May 2021 4:45am
10th Apr 2021 5:55am
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Re: Re. ... upon a star
I am always in wonder so much is conveyed by so little
Minimalism at its best.
💙🖤💫
xoxo
Ty, I
Minimalism at its best.
💙🖤💫
xoxo
Ty, I
Re. ... upon a star
10th Apr 2021 6:35am
Dearest Blue,
"I wish
you knew"
"How I see you"
Is something I ponder quite a bit. I wish I could see myself the way you see me❣️
Bravissima Goddess BB...you look like an angel in your new pic.🐻💋🐻💋🐻
"I wish
you knew"
"How I see you"
Is something I ponder quite a bit. I wish I could see myself the way you see me❣️
Bravissima Goddess BB...you look like an angel in your new pic.🐻💋🐻💋🐻
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Re: Re. ... upon a star
10th Apr 2021 7:27am
Ty, BB
I appreciate your kind words and support, my lovely friend 🙏 Maybe one day I'll convince you finally!!!
Much love and respect,
🌹
x
I appreciate your kind words and support, my lovely friend 🙏 Maybe one day I'll convince you finally!!!
Much love and respect,
🌹
x
Re: Re. ... upon a star
10th Apr 2021 3:38pm
Re. ... upon a star
10th Apr 2021 8:16am
Re: Re. ... upon a star
10th Apr 2021 10:24am
Awww... that's sweet, Thank you, Ron.... I should be so lucky 🍀.... lol. You're a generous and kind soul, my friend 🙏 I appreciate the list adds and you taking the time to leave your thoughts and insights.
🌹
xo
-B
🌹
xo
-B
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd May 2024 11:45am
10th Apr 2021 12:02pm
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Re: Re. ... upon a star
Hey there, Ethan :)
I appreciate that ponder, muchly and I totally agree about the stars. I take a look up into that night sky as a muse more often than not... lol.
It beckons...🌟
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughtful sentiments.
Sending stardust wishes your way,
✨💫✨
Warmest regards,
-🐝
x
I appreciate that ponder, muchly and I totally agree about the stars. I take a look up into that night sky as a muse more often than not... lol.
It beckons...🌟
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughtful sentiments.
Sending stardust wishes your way,
✨💫✨
Warmest regards,
-🐝
x
Re. ... upon a star
10th Apr 2021 2:38pm
Crisp and fragile as a snowflake ... the structure is beautiful ... how the poem holds its own among all of the space ... last line with its emphatic period is a most perfect ending ...
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Re: Re. ... upon a star
10th Apr 2021 3:52pm
Lovely LilD ;)
I wholly appreciate your wonderful comments and the generous list add. The thoughtfulness in your feedback is very helpful, imo. I have a hard time having perspective and reading your remarks allows my confidence to sigh a bit of a relief... lol.
I thank you for that.
Warmest regards, lovely lady :)
(I love Jade's pic, btw 🐶)
🌹 - S
I wholly appreciate your wonderful comments and the generous list add. The thoughtfulness in your feedback is very helpful, imo. I have a hard time having perspective and reading your remarks allows my confidence to sigh a bit of a relief... lol.
I thank you for that.
Warmest regards, lovely lady :)
(I love Jade's pic, btw 🐶)
🌹 - S
Re. ... upon a star
10th Apr 2021 5:24pm
Just those few words, Blue...just lovely.
You are poetry machine designed to put words together. Totally organic, though.
"A force of nature."
You are poetry machine designed to put words together. Totally organic, though.
"A force of nature."
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Re: Re. ... upon a star
10th Apr 2021 5:35pm
Hi there, Jav
Oh wow! ... I thank you for reading this little write and I'm glad you took away some emotion from it. That makes me smile wide. 😁 I appreciate you, and your kindness in words and in action.
All my warmest regards,
🌹
-B
Oh wow! ... I thank you for reading this little write and I'm glad you took away some emotion from it. That makes me smile wide. 😁 I appreciate you, and your kindness in words and in action.
All my warmest regards,
🌹
-B
Re. ... upon a star
10th Apr 2021 6:29pm
That's a beautiful, selfless sentiment... nicely done in so few words. Lovely!
💖
💖
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Re: Re. ... upon a star
10th Apr 2021 6:44pm
Hey there K.
Ty for reading and I appreciate those kind words, muchly. Have a great day today and good luck with your NaPo writes ahead. ... (They've been so so amazing!!)
🌹
x
-B
Ty for reading and I appreciate those kind words, muchly. Have a great day today and good luck with your NaPo writes ahead. ... (They've been so so amazing!!)
🌹
x
-B
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
11th Apr 2021 2:46pm
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Re: Re. ... upon a star
11th Apr 2021 4:55pm
I like that Sting song... Ty for that very kind comparison, Tim. I appreciate it and your generous list add as well. I love seeing you 🦋
Hope you have a great day today my friend!
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
🐝
Hope you have a great day today my friend!
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
🐝
Anonymous
- Edited 9th May 2021 8:45pm
11th Apr 2021 6:08pm
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Re: Re. ... upon a star
11th Apr 2021 6:22pm
Hee hee hee... gushes and neato... I do believe you've covered my gamut!! hee hee hee hee
Ty Ty, Claude
You're awesome!
✨
🌹
x
Ty Ty, Claude
You're awesome!
✨
🌹
x
Re. ... upon a star
20th Apr 2021 1:40am
Always such a refreshing pleasure to read your pages, beautiful Blue..
this one is no exception!--Lovelove the band you chose in youtube link--
a great pairing for the strength and gentle touch of your words here.
much shinee love to you, lady poet,
~d
this one is no exception!--Lovelove the band you chose in youtube link--
a great pairing for the strength and gentle touch of your words here.
much shinee love to you, lady poet,
~d
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Re: Re. ... upon a star
Dearest d,
Your kindness is so lovely to read and bask in, this evening. Ty for taking the time to leave your thoughtful comments. I'm grateful you enjoyed reading and listening. Siouxsie and the Banshees are one of my longtime favorite bands —so your comments about the music means a lot to me,
my lovely friend 🙏🏻
Always a pleasure seeing you 🦋
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-B
Your kindness is so lovely to read and bask in, this evening. Ty for taking the time to leave your thoughtful comments. I'm grateful you enjoyed reading and listening. Siouxsie and the Banshees are one of my longtime favorite bands —so your comments about the music means a lot to me,
my lovely friend 🙏🏻
Always a pleasure seeing you 🦋
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-B
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22nd May 2021 00:12am
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22nd May 2021 1:06am