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promise.
declared in honour
an oath with bonds cemented
"theoretically"
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Re. promise.
10th Apr 2021 00:00am
Re: Re. promise.
10th Apr 2021 00:02am
Yep,
Ty, bk
I appreciate you reading and leaving your thoughts. Hell yeah. ;)
🗡️❤️🩸
xo
-B
Ty, bk
I appreciate you reading and leaving your thoughts. Hell yeah. ;)
🗡️❤️🩸
xo
-B
Re. promise.
10th Apr 2021 00:23am
Hence the saying promises were made to be broken. So simple and short but gets the message out great write. Loved the link one of my favorite albums and truth is it is time to play master and servant 😊
Cheers
Cheers
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Re: Re. promise.
10th Apr 2021 00:33am
Hey there, Stan ;)
if I had more time I would have totally written a poem for the Depeche Mode comp!.. dammit!
Ty for reading and sharing your thoughts!
I like your taste in music 🎶
🌹
💙-x
if I had more time I would have totally written a poem for the Depeche Mode comp!.. dammit!
Ty for reading and sharing your thoughts!
I like your taste in music 🎶
🌹
💙-x
Re. promise.
10th Apr 2021 2:31am
A locomotive of truth in that last line. You wrote the ultimate reality check.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. promise.
Damn good comment yourself! Wow! ... locomotive of truth!! 👍🏻
Brilliant. 🚂
Thank you, John
My heart is full with all your loveliness
I appreciate all your RL adds and all the time you spent reading
... just all your thoughtfulness you've shown.
🌹
xoxo
-Susan
Brilliant. 🚂
Thank you, John
My heart is full with all your loveliness
I appreciate all your RL adds and all the time you spent reading
... just all your thoughtfulness you've shown.
🌹
xoxo
-Susan
Re. promise.
10th Apr 2021 3:19am
Dear BV,
Oh. My. Goddess! How I desperately want to recite this write to a particular someone and then spit in his drink. I know that’s really gross but I’d feel really good. I love this poem for so many personal reasons and on so many levels but your ending is out of this world. I don’t even have the words to let you know how much I appreciate this write! Stellar! H🌷
Oh. My. Goddess! How I desperately want to recite this write to a particular someone and then spit in his drink. I know that’s really gross but I’d feel really good. I love this poem for so many personal reasons and on so many levels but your ending is out of this world. I don’t even have the words to let you know how much I appreciate this write! Stellar! H🌷
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Re. promise.
10th Apr 2021 4:42am
Re. promise.
10th Apr 2021 6:50am
Dear, Blue This piece is another to be pondered as well as the song. That has an interesting kinda complex message...especially when in says,
"You will always wonder how
It could have been if you'd only lied"
and
"You'll see your problems multiplied
If you continually decide
To faithfully pursue
The policy of truth"
It seems to imply that somethings need remain hidden. I do believe that there are certain intimate details that even those closest to me don't need to know.
"Theoretically" gets exhausting.
Thank you for the think my sweet goddess friend🐻💋🐻💋🐻
"You will always wonder how
It could have been if you'd only lied"
and
"You'll see your problems multiplied
If you continually decide
To faithfully pursue
The policy of truth"
It seems to imply that somethings need remain hidden. I do believe that there are certain intimate details that even those closest to me don't need to know.
"Theoretically" gets exhausting.
Thank you for the think my sweet goddess friend🐻💋🐻💋🐻
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Re: Re. promise.
10th Apr 2021 7:23am
it's just an awesome song that I always thought of as unusually funny and quirky because it actually advocates lying!... lol...You're so awesome, BB and your in depth delve into Depeche Mode just made my night!
I thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and introspections, truly.
Much love and respect
🌹
xo
B
I thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and introspections, truly.
Much love and respect
🌹
xo
B
Re. promise.
10th Apr 2021 8:14am
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Re: Re. promise.
10th Apr 2021 5:21pm
I was going to write poem for the Depeche Mode comp but it ended yesterday before inspiration struck! Dammit!... lol. Ty for reading, Ru 🙏
Senryú and haiku are my addiction. I can't really go a week without writing a few... and I am all smiles that you enjoyed reading.
💙🖤
S✨I
xo
Senryú and haiku are my addiction. I can't really go a week without writing a few... and I am all smiles that you enjoyed reading.
💙🖤
S✨I
xo
Re. promise.
10th Apr 2021 9:02pm
You have a way with getting a heavy message across with few words and good image. I like this Blue.
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Re: Re. promise.
10th Apr 2021 9:10pm
Thank you for such kind words, Remy. I appreciate it very much and I'm glad you enjoyed it. So grateful for the list add too, my friend. ✨
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-B
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-B
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Re. promise.
12th Apr 2021 4:12am
Re: Re. promise.
12th Apr 2021 4:13am
Re. promise.
20th May 2021 9:40pm
Even those bonds where we think are sealed by blood are sometimes broken.
Powerful statement.
Powerful statement.
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Re: Re. promise.
20th May 2021 9:45pm