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Giving it away
It was love
At first night.
Such was not
In her habit
But a nasty curve
From Life
Her husband
Taken away from
Life much too quickly.
Mad at God
Mad at Fate
She let the first
Who asked nicely
To take her heart
And thus her
Love she
Gave away.
At first night.
Such was not
In her habit
But a nasty curve
From Life
Her husband
Taken away from
Life much too quickly.
Mad at God
Mad at Fate
She let the first
Who asked nicely
To take her heart
And thus her
Love she
Gave away.
Published 3rd Apr 2021
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3rd Apr 2021 8:52pm
3rd Apr 2021 9:22pm
....in the case of that person, the man stayed with her, but both understood that she had been hurt so bad by Fate that the word ''love'' changed in meaning. I hope you were not hurt so bad as to make you distrust love....Kisses, Robert.
3rd Apr 2021 10:53pm
3rd Apr 2021 11:08pm
So we've all been hurt and learned hard truths. I learned some heavy ones about myself. Kisses, Robert.
I guess love and hurt almost go hand in hand for some, whatever the circumstances and situations. Life is never meant to be perfect or easy.
Good spill robert.
Good spill robert.
15th May 2021 1:00pm
