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Come

Come, baby,
she said,
Come closer
To me.
So he did
And came
All over
Her face.

robert43041

Written by robert43041

(Viking)

Published 3rd Apr 2021

#happiness #love

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Re. Come

Anonymous

3rd Apr 2021 5:21pm

.... You!!.... lol...
Sexy or naughty?!
🤷🏻‍♀️
Both.

robert43041 (Viking)

3rd Apr 2021 8:08pm

Enticing....

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Re. Come

15th May 2021 3:38am

She asked, therefore she received.
;-)

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robert43041 (Viking)

15th May 2021 4:01am

...and received plenty, we hope. Kisses, Robert.

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Re. Come

6th Jul 2021 6:10pm

I think you have more deep wells than that. Don't let it dry up with cold, deadpan poetry.

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robert43041 (Viking)

6th Jul 2021 10:43pm

Thanks. I can go longer at times, but I also like (indeed i prefer) the short, ''in your face'' and to the point............ Regards, Robert.

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