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Foolish April
Time to write a poem a day.
What the heck am I going to say?
I sit and stare at this cursed page:
who wants to read my angst and rage?
Look! 25 words; I’m halfway there,
but is this a poem I want to share?
There’s nothing of substance in my mind,
not a shred of poetry can I find.
Five rhyming couplets, now I’m done!
Tomorrow I’ll write a better one.
What the heck am I going to say?
I sit and stare at this cursed page:
who wants to read my angst and rage?
Look! 25 words; I’m halfway there,
but is this a poem I want to share?
There’s nothing of substance in my mind,
not a shred of poetry can I find.
Five rhyming couplets, now I’m done!
Tomorrow I’ll write a better one.
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Bring on the insanity. #1 of 30...
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1st Apr 2021 2:34pm
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1st Apr 2021 2:46pm
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3rd Apr 2021 3:32am
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3rd Apr 2021 3:32am
Oh, we'll see... hopefully one or two gems in the heap by the end of the month.
Thanks
Thanks
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3rd Apr 2021 3:33am
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2nd Apr 2021 00:35am
Terrific start to NaPo. Hopefully your bit of writers block will be done and it will be smooth sailing the rest of the month! P.s. this is pretty sensational for writers block! May all of our blocks flow so gracefully!
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3rd Apr 2021 3:34am
It did surprise me a bit.... I always stress about the word count and then realize it's not all that bad.
Re. Foolish April
2nd Apr 2021 5:51am
Dear BK,
Writers block my fat aunt Fanny! This is great. Lovely rhyming and really sweet thoughts. Right on.
H🌷
Writers block my fat aunt Fanny! This is great. Lovely rhyming and really sweet thoughts. Right on.
H🌷
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3rd Apr 2021 3:35am
Thank you, H. Sometimes silly rhymes come way easier to me than deep thoughts.
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2nd Apr 2021 5:30pm
I LOVE this, BK! You recorded history minute by minute as it happened! Great start! Canada should be proud!
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3rd Apr 2021 3:36am
Can't say I have much of a team up here! But I'll do my best to represent.
Thanks for the cheers. :)
Thanks for the cheers. :)
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3rd Apr 2021 00:47am
You should go into politics! : )
Clever lady, making fools of us thinking it would be blank.
Clever lady, making fools of us thinking it would be blank.
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3rd Apr 2021 3:37am